Uncle B of the pirate is invincible

Chapter 43
Recently, as more and more book friends pay attention to this book, they have given a lot of comments. The author Jun will pick up the main explanations here.

First of all, the author Jun is writing a novel for the first time, so there must be various deficiencies, please forgive me.In terms of the amount of reading at the starting point, Zhan Zhan is almost as soon as it is online, and I am confident that I am not weaker than others.But after I started writing by hand, I really felt how difficult it is to express what I think in my head in words, so I can only say sorry if I can't find it.

Secondly, book friends responded that the narrative was chaotic. This may be a bit taken for granted in the way I tried to write at the beginning.When I read it myself, I like that every plot has a cause and effect, so I didn't write out the past events of the protagonist's time travel, but used scenes, characters, and events as introductions.I think the idea is okay, but it may be that the writing skills and the ability to structure are still insufficient, which troubles everyone.However, I have already written it here, and there is no way to change it. I can only say sorry again.

Again, some book friends mentioned that the procrastination of the battle scenes and the inconsistency in the description of the battle, I am also quite helpless here.Of course, the Rogge Town offensive and defensive battle cannot be compared with world events like the Dingshang War, but the protagonist is only a small navy now, and the opponent is one of the few big pirates in the East China Sea. Rogge Town is his hometown, so this time Fighting is a big deal for him.If the battle ends in chapter three, the author really doesn't know how to write it.After all, I have already mentioned the three battles with the pirates in one stroke. It would be a bit of a joke if the protagonist's first battle with the big pirates is also mentioned in one stroke.As for the problem of book friends' feedback on the description of the battle, I am also groping.And what I like about One Piece is that the reason for the battle is bloody, the fighting process is funny and bloody, and the feeling of joy in the end of the battle is slightly sad.I am also working hard in this direction, and I feel that the writing is okay, not that I can't read it, at least I can read it every time I read it.But since some book friends specifically mentioned it, there must be some places that cannot be reached, and the author will pay attention to improving it in the future.To be honest, the situation of the author Jun himself is quite similar to that of the protagonist, except that he has not time-traveled, so writing this book is what is needed in life. Try to take this road to see, the main thing is to practice the nature of writing, and by the way, it is also for the purpose of making a living. 20 years of Pirate Dream.

Finally, there is only one core idea after talking about so many, please support, I will work hard to improve!
(End of this chapter)