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Chapter 241 Fan Sheng Xu Sheng, the sage taught that a gentleman is poor?
That's right.
This composition topic is so simple.
There is no limit to the style of writing in one character, and the consciousness is that you can write whatever you want, such as discussion, narrative, drama, interview, letter, dialogue, novel, poetry and so on.
Is it difficult?
Of course it's not difficult, after all the topics are given, although it's enough to start writing around the word "poor", don't worry about going off topic because you can't find the central idea.
From this point of view, the difficulty of the composition questions in the finals seems to be far inferior to the questions in the preliminary competition.
After all, in the preliminary competition, a piece of material about three fishermen and a drifting bottle was found, which made people puzzled.
But if you want to say that the composition is simple, that's not enough.
It's easy to think about writing.
But it is not so easy to get a high score.
In particular, it is even more difficult to be good enough among the 1500 compositions so that the marking teacher can shine.
Moreover, this composition competition is an innovative composition competition for middle school students, and its "innovation" should be firmly focused on.
If the writing is not innovative enough, but just mediocre, not to mention the special prize and the first prize, there is a high probability that you won’t even get a third prize, and you will be lost in the crowd without causing any waves. This is the composition of this essay the difficulty.
It's easy to write, but it's not easy to write.
The intention is clear, but if you write it according to the superficial meaning of "poor", then nine out of ten you will not get a high score.
all in all.
At first glance, this composition question is very simple and has no mystery, but it contains many meanings. It is not easy to write well.
If you only write according to the representation of "poor", such as "poverty" and "poverty", you will get a passing grade if you die.
The key lies in innovation and difference, otherwise it is impossible to stand out from the crowd of 1500 people.
Especially if you want to get the 9 special prizes, if you can't let the marking teacher shine at a glance, or even love it, then don't even think about it.
But for Lin Bei, there is no pressure. After all, this question is really easy for him to write!
"Which aspect do you write well?"
"Poetry? Fiction? Or argumentative narrative?"
"Find any essay topic at random, and if you write more neatly, you can probably get a full score and win the prize, right?"
"After all, this question is really not difficult. It's not enough to drink a pot at all. It feels like half an hour is enough to get it done."
This was Lin Bei's subconscious thought.
and.
There is an element of self-effacing in it.
After all, if he goes all out, with the speed of the explosive unicorn arm, it will not take half an hour at all.
But there is no need to compare speed, and he doesn't need to go all out, and he has to save energy for follow-up studies.
and so……
After thinking for 2 minutes, he began to write leisurely, and the writing speed was neither fast nor slow.
He didn't write argumentative narratives, nor did he write ancient poetry, and he didn't pay attention to gimmicks and exaggerations, but just wrote a simple story.
The story is as follows...
Title: [Poor].
[There are two scholars in Jiangnan, one surnamed Fan and the other surnamed Xu.
As the saying goes: "Suhu is familiar, the world is full", and the abundance of Jiangnan is enviable.If one insists on picking out the "poorest" among the people here, it must be the two of Fan Xu. 】
One pass ten, ten pass a hundred.
Everyone knows that there are two poor scholars who don't work hard and don't know the five grains, and their lives are not as good as beggars.
Poor Xu Shusheng is so talented and weak!He is handsome, and the coarse brown clothes have a few holes, which can hardly hide his beauty even the peasant women in the vegetable market feel sorry for him when they see him, saying that he is a piece of beautiful jade that fell into the mud.
Xu Shusheng always smiled indifferently when he heard the rumors, cupped his hands to Dongfang and said: "The sage teaches that a gentleman is always poor." After saying a word, his head shook his head three times.The sonorous words make people respectful and convinced.
Xu Shusheng's noble and virtuous name is also passed down to ten, ten to hundreds, and the world knows his virtue.
But Fan Shusheng is in a different situation. It is said that he is poor and hungry in his fifties, and he is so poor and emaciated when he is old that he can't even afford a daughter-in-law. It is so sad that Fan Shusheng has achieved nothing when he said that a man should make contributions.
But Fan Shusheng didn't argue with others, he only said that he was "not sad with no food, no sad with no clothes".
The government's call-up order has been issued for the second time, and only Xu Shusheng is invited to become an official.The door of Xu Sheng's house has not been repaired for many years, and it is dilapidated and cannot be closed tightly.But he insisted on closing the door, and shut the door to the little official who delivered the order.Seeing that it was useless to invite people, the official had no choice but to give up.
Xu Shusheng stuffed cotton in his ears, although he couldn't stop the loud voice of the clerk outside the door, he did this every time a nobleman came to visit, pretending that he couldn't hear the voices of ordinary people in the world and those who were filthy in the world. Memorizing my own book, from time to time I lament the sadness of not having a confidant.
But this time it seems that the method failed.
The man outside the door saw that Xu Sheng kept reciting books, but he closed the door and didn't see him, so he kicked the door of Xu Sheng's house to pieces.
"I'm a prince-like person, who is Xu Sheng, who dares to close the door and see you?" Xu Shusheng was stunned, only to realize that the person who came was not the little official who had been here many times before, but a man in a brocade robe. , a heroic man with a sword at his waist.
Xu Sheng immediately straightened his back and bowed his hands to say goodbye.But the man didn't want to listen any more, and he was about to leave after procrastinating.
With a "hiss", Xu Sheng's sleeve was so brittle that he pulled it off and split it into two pieces.
The people next door came to watch when they heard the commotion, and saw Xu Shusheng shaking half of his sleeves, his eyes were scarlet, and no matter how wealthy the visitor looked, they began to curse at each other.
"Everyone has wronged me! Our Crown Prince sincerely wants to invite Mr. Xu to be our guest." The man hurriedly explained.
But the masses are not forgiving, and the prince's reputation is not good. The old gentleman in the teahouse said that the prince will be abolished within three years. Xu Sheng's reputation and future will be ruined if he goes away?
"The sage teaches that a gentleman is always poor."
Xu Shusheng bowed his hands to Dongfang and said: "I, Xu family, do not seek wealth and honor, and I do not serve the crown prince. My lord, please be wiser!"
The person said this with a strong character, and the man respected him a lot: "To tell the truth, it is a bad year in the north, and people are starving for thousands of miles. His Royal Highness is going to help the people, and he urgently needs your help!"
He bowed and finished speaking, but Xu Sheng was still unmoved, "Bo Yi Shu Qi also starved to death in the mountains, how fortunate to seek benevolence and get benevolence."
Everyone around you looked at me, I looked at you, and blinked, as if they didn't understand.
"Let me go." A thin, yellow-faced middle-aged man pushed forward from the crowd. Compared with Xu Sheng, he looked even poorer, like a real beggar.
"Who are you?" The prince's attendant sized him up several times, making sure that he was not someone famous.
"I am his senior brother, surnamed Fan." Fan Shusheng pointed to the scholar surnamed Xu, without changing his face.
When Xu Shusheng was pointed at by him, he was stunned, and it took him a long time to turn around: "Brother Fan, a great virtuous man, is worthy of this important task."
The prince's attendant nodded in satisfaction and took Fan Sheng away.
Since then, there has been no more scholar Fan in the south of the Yangtze River, but there has been a Mr. Fan in Beijing. I heard that the crown prince knows people and makes good use of them.People in small towns in the south of the Yangtze River did not dare to scold Mr. Fan for a long time, they only said in their hearts that he is greedy for wealth and fame, and he is not as good as Xu Shusheng in case.
On the other hand, since the prince's attendant left, Xu Shengxian's name has improved to a higher level. He didn't want to be burdened by worldly fame, let alone be tainted by the words of ordinary people, so as soon as the attendant left, he immediately called the well water to wash his ears, To preserve my innocence.
The two poor scholars in the south of the Yangtze River are famous, and everyone sighs.
Ten years later.
The new emperor ascended the throne, amnesty the world.
The small town in the south of the Yangtze River is still peaceful and prosperous, and Xu Sheng's clothes are even more torn. He is kneeling by the riverside, trying to catch a fish to fill his stomach, but he sees a small boat carrying Qinghui coming from where the sky and water meet.
Half of the river fishing fire, a pillow of clear frost.For some reason, he wanted to wait for the boat to slowly come to him.
"Fan...Brother Fan?"
The people in the boat didn't seem to be getting old, they were still the same as before, they didn't expect that there would be someone they didn't want to see, Xu Shusheng sneered: "Brother Fan, why did you call yourself my senior brother?"
"They are all disciples of saints, so they are naturally brothers."
"The sage teaches the sea, but the gentleman is poor."
Xu Sheng's words were not forgiving.
"..."
Fan Sheng was speechless for a long time.
You know, what is ramming?
Not afraid of poverty, but caring infinitely.
I also want thousands of mansions to support the people of the world.
Fan Sheng didn't say these words, he just silently looked at the young man in front of him with compassion.At that moment, Xu Sheng seemed to see a pool of clear water, containing thousands of stars.
For a long time.
Fan Sheng whispered in a deep voice: "May you... seek benevolence and benevolence."]
The above is the essay written by Lin Bei.
It took 30 minutes, really neither too fast nor too slow, with a total of 1700 words, which perfectly meets the word count requirements.
At first glance, it is very simple. This is really just a simple story. The writing is not too complicated, and there are no profound allusions. It just tells about two poor scholars.
But is it really that simple?
The layman looks at the excitement and the insider looks at the doorway.
If you are a real expert, when you see this composition, your eyes will be brightened, and you will not even be able to move your eyes.
And after repeated chewing, the more you chew, the more flavor it will become, and then you will shout: "Wonderful!"
Although this article looks simple, it is actually not simple at all, and the idea is really excellent.
After all, the general composition of "poor" can only stay at the level of intuitive interpretation such as "poverty, poverty, exhaustion", it is difficult to penetrate into the cultural texture, and it is ordinary.
However, Lin Bei's composition made a profound comparison of the life ideals of the two scholars. One is "resolutely poor", although noble, but focused on the ego; Adhering to the great self-love of "people and things" possessed by the poet Du Fu.
The composition not only has concerns about the Confucian thought of putting oneself in front of others, but also subtly and naturally deduces the topic from a high point of view. How can the conception be superior to others?
And reading this article, I believe many people will think of Fan Zhongyan, who also happens to be from the south of the Yangtze River, who also happens to be poor when he was young, and also happens to be worried about the world...
Gee!
Are the two related?
It doesn't seem to be there, but it seems to be there.
It is natural to make people think of it. It can be seen that Lin Bei's composition skills are so deep that he has tended to a state of perfection.
~( ̄▽ ̄~)(~ ̄▽ ̄)~.
This composition topic is so simple.
There is no limit to the style of writing in one character, and the consciousness is that you can write whatever you want, such as discussion, narrative, drama, interview, letter, dialogue, novel, poetry and so on.
Is it difficult?
Of course it's not difficult, after all the topics are given, although it's enough to start writing around the word "poor", don't worry about going off topic because you can't find the central idea.
From this point of view, the difficulty of the composition questions in the finals seems to be far inferior to the questions in the preliminary competition.
After all, in the preliminary competition, a piece of material about three fishermen and a drifting bottle was found, which made people puzzled.
But if you want to say that the composition is simple, that's not enough.
It's easy to think about writing.
But it is not so easy to get a high score.
In particular, it is even more difficult to be good enough among the 1500 compositions so that the marking teacher can shine.
Moreover, this composition competition is an innovative composition competition for middle school students, and its "innovation" should be firmly focused on.
If the writing is not innovative enough, but just mediocre, not to mention the special prize and the first prize, there is a high probability that you won’t even get a third prize, and you will be lost in the crowd without causing any waves. This is the composition of this essay the difficulty.
It's easy to write, but it's not easy to write.
The intention is clear, but if you write it according to the superficial meaning of "poor", then nine out of ten you will not get a high score.
all in all.
At first glance, this composition question is very simple and has no mystery, but it contains many meanings. It is not easy to write well.
If you only write according to the representation of "poor", such as "poverty" and "poverty", you will get a passing grade if you die.
The key lies in innovation and difference, otherwise it is impossible to stand out from the crowd of 1500 people.
Especially if you want to get the 9 special prizes, if you can't let the marking teacher shine at a glance, or even love it, then don't even think about it.
But for Lin Bei, there is no pressure. After all, this question is really easy for him to write!
"Which aspect do you write well?"
"Poetry? Fiction? Or argumentative narrative?"
"Find any essay topic at random, and if you write more neatly, you can probably get a full score and win the prize, right?"
"After all, this question is really not difficult. It's not enough to drink a pot at all. It feels like half an hour is enough to get it done."
This was Lin Bei's subconscious thought.
and.
There is an element of self-effacing in it.
After all, if he goes all out, with the speed of the explosive unicorn arm, it will not take half an hour at all.
But there is no need to compare speed, and he doesn't need to go all out, and he has to save energy for follow-up studies.
and so……
After thinking for 2 minutes, he began to write leisurely, and the writing speed was neither fast nor slow.
He didn't write argumentative narratives, nor did he write ancient poetry, and he didn't pay attention to gimmicks and exaggerations, but just wrote a simple story.
The story is as follows...
Title: [Poor].
[There are two scholars in Jiangnan, one surnamed Fan and the other surnamed Xu.
As the saying goes: "Suhu is familiar, the world is full", and the abundance of Jiangnan is enviable.If one insists on picking out the "poorest" among the people here, it must be the two of Fan Xu. 】
One pass ten, ten pass a hundred.
Everyone knows that there are two poor scholars who don't work hard and don't know the five grains, and their lives are not as good as beggars.
Poor Xu Shusheng is so talented and weak!He is handsome, and the coarse brown clothes have a few holes, which can hardly hide his beauty even the peasant women in the vegetable market feel sorry for him when they see him, saying that he is a piece of beautiful jade that fell into the mud.
Xu Shusheng always smiled indifferently when he heard the rumors, cupped his hands to Dongfang and said: "The sage teaches that a gentleman is always poor." After saying a word, his head shook his head three times.The sonorous words make people respectful and convinced.
Xu Shusheng's noble and virtuous name is also passed down to ten, ten to hundreds, and the world knows his virtue.
But Fan Shusheng is in a different situation. It is said that he is poor and hungry in his fifties, and he is so poor and emaciated when he is old that he can't even afford a daughter-in-law. It is so sad that Fan Shusheng has achieved nothing when he said that a man should make contributions.
But Fan Shusheng didn't argue with others, he only said that he was "not sad with no food, no sad with no clothes".
The government's call-up order has been issued for the second time, and only Xu Shusheng is invited to become an official.The door of Xu Sheng's house has not been repaired for many years, and it is dilapidated and cannot be closed tightly.But he insisted on closing the door, and shut the door to the little official who delivered the order.Seeing that it was useless to invite people, the official had no choice but to give up.
Xu Shusheng stuffed cotton in his ears, although he couldn't stop the loud voice of the clerk outside the door, he did this every time a nobleman came to visit, pretending that he couldn't hear the voices of ordinary people in the world and those who were filthy in the world. Memorizing my own book, from time to time I lament the sadness of not having a confidant.
But this time it seems that the method failed.
The man outside the door saw that Xu Sheng kept reciting books, but he closed the door and didn't see him, so he kicked the door of Xu Sheng's house to pieces.
"I'm a prince-like person, who is Xu Sheng, who dares to close the door and see you?" Xu Shusheng was stunned, only to realize that the person who came was not the little official who had been here many times before, but a man in a brocade robe. , a heroic man with a sword at his waist.
Xu Sheng immediately straightened his back and bowed his hands to say goodbye.But the man didn't want to listen any more, and he was about to leave after procrastinating.
With a "hiss", Xu Sheng's sleeve was so brittle that he pulled it off and split it into two pieces.
The people next door came to watch when they heard the commotion, and saw Xu Shusheng shaking half of his sleeves, his eyes were scarlet, and no matter how wealthy the visitor looked, they began to curse at each other.
"Everyone has wronged me! Our Crown Prince sincerely wants to invite Mr. Xu to be our guest." The man hurriedly explained.
But the masses are not forgiving, and the prince's reputation is not good. The old gentleman in the teahouse said that the prince will be abolished within three years. Xu Sheng's reputation and future will be ruined if he goes away?
"The sage teaches that a gentleman is always poor."
Xu Shusheng bowed his hands to Dongfang and said: "I, Xu family, do not seek wealth and honor, and I do not serve the crown prince. My lord, please be wiser!"
The person said this with a strong character, and the man respected him a lot: "To tell the truth, it is a bad year in the north, and people are starving for thousands of miles. His Royal Highness is going to help the people, and he urgently needs your help!"
He bowed and finished speaking, but Xu Sheng was still unmoved, "Bo Yi Shu Qi also starved to death in the mountains, how fortunate to seek benevolence and get benevolence."
Everyone around you looked at me, I looked at you, and blinked, as if they didn't understand.
"Let me go." A thin, yellow-faced middle-aged man pushed forward from the crowd. Compared with Xu Sheng, he looked even poorer, like a real beggar.
"Who are you?" The prince's attendant sized him up several times, making sure that he was not someone famous.
"I am his senior brother, surnamed Fan." Fan Shusheng pointed to the scholar surnamed Xu, without changing his face.
When Xu Shusheng was pointed at by him, he was stunned, and it took him a long time to turn around: "Brother Fan, a great virtuous man, is worthy of this important task."
The prince's attendant nodded in satisfaction and took Fan Sheng away.
Since then, there has been no more scholar Fan in the south of the Yangtze River, but there has been a Mr. Fan in Beijing. I heard that the crown prince knows people and makes good use of them.People in small towns in the south of the Yangtze River did not dare to scold Mr. Fan for a long time, they only said in their hearts that he is greedy for wealth and fame, and he is not as good as Xu Shusheng in case.
On the other hand, since the prince's attendant left, Xu Shengxian's name has improved to a higher level. He didn't want to be burdened by worldly fame, let alone be tainted by the words of ordinary people, so as soon as the attendant left, he immediately called the well water to wash his ears, To preserve my innocence.
The two poor scholars in the south of the Yangtze River are famous, and everyone sighs.
Ten years later.
The new emperor ascended the throne, amnesty the world.
The small town in the south of the Yangtze River is still peaceful and prosperous, and Xu Sheng's clothes are even more torn. He is kneeling by the riverside, trying to catch a fish to fill his stomach, but he sees a small boat carrying Qinghui coming from where the sky and water meet.
Half of the river fishing fire, a pillow of clear frost.For some reason, he wanted to wait for the boat to slowly come to him.
"Fan...Brother Fan?"
The people in the boat didn't seem to be getting old, they were still the same as before, they didn't expect that there would be someone they didn't want to see, Xu Shusheng sneered: "Brother Fan, why did you call yourself my senior brother?"
"They are all disciples of saints, so they are naturally brothers."
"The sage teaches the sea, but the gentleman is poor."
Xu Sheng's words were not forgiving.
"..."
Fan Sheng was speechless for a long time.
You know, what is ramming?
Not afraid of poverty, but caring infinitely.
I also want thousands of mansions to support the people of the world.
Fan Sheng didn't say these words, he just silently looked at the young man in front of him with compassion.At that moment, Xu Sheng seemed to see a pool of clear water, containing thousands of stars.
For a long time.
Fan Sheng whispered in a deep voice: "May you... seek benevolence and benevolence."]
The above is the essay written by Lin Bei.
It took 30 minutes, really neither too fast nor too slow, with a total of 1700 words, which perfectly meets the word count requirements.
At first glance, it is very simple. This is really just a simple story. The writing is not too complicated, and there are no profound allusions. It just tells about two poor scholars.
But is it really that simple?
The layman looks at the excitement and the insider looks at the doorway.
If you are a real expert, when you see this composition, your eyes will be brightened, and you will not even be able to move your eyes.
And after repeated chewing, the more you chew, the more flavor it will become, and then you will shout: "Wonderful!"
Although this article looks simple, it is actually not simple at all, and the idea is really excellent.
After all, the general composition of "poor" can only stay at the level of intuitive interpretation such as "poverty, poverty, exhaustion", it is difficult to penetrate into the cultural texture, and it is ordinary.
However, Lin Bei's composition made a profound comparison of the life ideals of the two scholars. One is "resolutely poor", although noble, but focused on the ego; Adhering to the great self-love of "people and things" possessed by the poet Du Fu.
The composition not only has concerns about the Confucian thought of putting oneself in front of others, but also subtly and naturally deduces the topic from a high point of view. How can the conception be superior to others?
And reading this article, I believe many people will think of Fan Zhongyan, who also happens to be from the south of the Yangtze River, who also happens to be poor when he was young, and also happens to be worried about the world...
Gee!
Are the two related?
It doesn't seem to be there, but it seems to be there.
It is natural to make people think of it. It can be seen that Lin Bei's composition skills are so deep that he has tended to a state of perfection.
~( ̄▽ ̄~)(~ ̄▽ ̄)~.
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