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What is manure?As the name suggests, it is a work that makes people sick like feces.

The so-called light novel written by Yoshiki Saakiza is undoubtedly such a disgusting work.

Meaningless scene descriptions, cumbersome historical narratives, completely incomprehensible character movements, artificial and incomprehensible lines, and sometimes even the names of characters are completely confused.

Of course, this is only a superficial problem.More fundamentally, his plot is completely pointless.The so-called plot progress and the so-called development are completely zero, and they don't even know what the protagonist is going to do and what the meaning is.I simply wanted to do that, so I did it superficially.Not even the slightest reason is explained in the book.

'ah!The actual reason is because the protagonist has a very deep reason to go. '

When faced with my question, Zaimoza answered confidently.But unfortunately, I can't understand it at all.Since what can be said in reality, why not describe it in books?Why do you have to play with a sense of mystery?

If I remember correctly, the most important thing in a novel is clarity, at least there must be enough logic to express ideas.Even if the thinking is superficial, it is still necessary to use words to express the true state of mind of the author and the protagonist.But it is a pity that there is no such change of thought in Zaimozao, the so-called cosmic masterpiece.

It is full of unknown lines, the heroine who is pasted upside down for no reason at all, the names of moves with misspelled English words, no transitional scene descriptions at all, and an awkward system route like a Korean drama.As for the plot or something, it can be said that there is no such thing at all.After going around for a long time, I finally returned to the origin of the beginning.All the main character does is describe the setting, introduce the scenery, and then it's over without doing anything else.

This is the so-called masterpiece of the universe by Zaimokiza.A purely crazy work made up of settings, self-awareness, crazy words, and completely ignorant of the so-called messy vocabulary.I don't think anyone in their right mind would read it.

"As an author, no matter what you write, you must first be aware of what you are writing. You don't even know what you are writing, and you simply rely on your own confidence to create, and then it's over, you Do you think this is your victory and you can become a great writer? Don’t be naive, Mr. Saikiza. No one will read what you write.”

I looked indifferently at the gray wooden seat on the floor, and drew a cross on it with an oil-based pen.

"I think you should understand how deadly these ideas are to a work, Mr. Saekiza. If you want to express something, write it in the book. If you want to describe something, write it in the book. Don't Just pile up meaningless words and think that you are very powerful, let alone think that you are a great writer if you have enough description. That is impossible. What you need now is not to write some light novels, but to write a composition to see what Call Cheng Zhuan He."

I don't have to lie about that at all, the stuff he writes is such scum.The protagonist is like a psychopath, who suddenly completed a task in a few hundred words, and then used thousands of words to describe how powerful a skill is, and then said that the skill is useless.The skills described in the next few dozen words knocked down the boss, completely incomprehensible.

Compared with these unbearable plots, the inversions and inexplicable dialogues throughout the article are like spices.As for the misspelled English words, they were harmless jokes, and I didn't even bother to point them out to him one by one.

"All in all, my conclusion is that if you don't think about it carefully, I advise you not to write novels."

Putting down the hair on the forehead again, I patted Zaimoza on the shoulder.

If there is no idea, no talent, no meaning, then it is best not to pick up the pen.Even if it is written for myself, it still has its own ideas.Writing an article for others to read with the mentality of writing for yourself is a blasphemy against words.For mediocre ordinary people, tempering slowly is the best choice.

Youth does not mean that everything is allowed, and youth does not mean that you can waste it casually.I'm not such a pure person, I just want to tell that troubled guy a normal and correct world.

Simply trying not to learn from the lesson is meaningless.

Simply using momentum is just momentum.Nothing can be achieved with one's own efforts alone, and only by describing it can the audience be impressed.The most demanding person in this world is the reader, and the least demanding one is also the reader.Because they want to read a story, and they only want to read a story.Any lyricism, the author's messy private goods, and chaotic descriptions are just embellishments for each story.All they want to see is the story.

"I'm not going to just tell you that you can keep writing or how, or remove the mistakes from the surface in terms of grammar and structure like other people. I'm asking about your mentality. If you really want to If you want to write a good book, read Robert's lectures, and then find his book "Story" after reading it thoroughly, and then it will not be too late to write."

I stuffed the cross-marked copy onto Zaimuzuo, and with a look of pity on my face, I pointed out to him a fairly correct path.Newcomers without the guidance of a master can only learn by themselves, which is a matter of course.

"If you want to write a novel, you can read the works of Kazuki Sakuraba in terms of description. This writer is very unique in terms of delicacy. If you want to write majestic, then read the works of Yoshiki Tanaka. The Legend of the Galactic Heroes is still the same It is a classic that has been eulogized. In terms of scripts, you can go to the box office poison Tanaka Romeo. Although the box office is bleak, he is essentially a very good script writer. If you have read all these works, you should study them carefully and then talk about them. Writing. If you want to write a work that conquers others instead of conquering yourself, then this hurdle must be crossed.”

I do not recommend works such as Zaimoza Dazai or Akutagawa Ryunosuke, because their worldview will affect Zaimoza's writing style.I also don't recommend Zaimoza's work on reasoning, because it doesn't fit the impetuous worldview of male high school students.So the ones I recommend to him are those who are calm, calm and well-behaved.

If that doesn't help him, then that's all.I watched Cai Muzuo get up slowly from the ground, turn around and leave without even saying hello, and my mood, which has been depressed and depressed recently, became a little bit happier.

Sure enough, the mood is relieved by the pain of others, and there is nothing wrong with what people say.