To become the richest man from the beginning of the game

Chapter 414 Mr. Pei shouldn't hold grudges, right?

At the same time, a group of horses are also paying attention to Cui Geng's new book.

Although Ma Yiqun is now the CEO of Endpoint Chinese.com, and paying attention to new books should be the responsibility of editors and editors-in-chief, but now it happens to be during the Chinese New Year, and he is idle at home.

For Cui Geng, the author, Ma Yiqun had already heard of him, and knew of his "bad deeds".

However, no matter what Cui Geng said, he was talented.

An author who is talented but not diligent is better than an author who is not talented but diligent.

After all, web writing is a creative industry. In many cases, it is not how fast you write, but how well you write.

The content is not good, and no matter how fast you write it, you are only speeding up the output of garbage.

"Butterfly Game" has just opened, and the state of the comment section is obviously not much better.

A group of horses ignored this and started reading directly.

The rhythm at the beginning is very fast. After the identity of the protagonist is taken away, the cheat will be obtained directly. After a brief introduction of how to use the cheat, the official plot will begin.

On New Year's Eve, Cui Geng posted five chapters directly, and these five chapters have already completed a small plot.

From the beginning when the protagonist obtained the authority of "Butterfly Game", to helping the first supporting independent game producer to fulfill his dream.

The content of the first small plot is very simple, which is equivalent to a preview of the core cool point.

An independent game producer who was poor but never gave up his dream, produced a game with simple materials but interesting gameplay, but no one paid attention to it because he had no money to promote it.

The protagonist discovered him while observing the parallel world, so through his own authority, he found a UP owner in the game area, and used his golden finger to let the UP owner "just in time" download the game and play it. stand up.

Therefore, under the promotion of this UP master, the game suddenly became popular, and it has been out of control since then, so this independent game producer can continue his dream.

After watching this short plot, there will be a single chapter by Cui Gengfa.

The content of the single chapter is very simple. On the one hand, I apologize to all readers for the old book, and on the other hand, I emphasize that this new book has been carefully thought out by myself, and the content is absolutely wonderful. Please be patient.During the Chinese New Year period, he decided to stay behind closed doors, and the [-]D is updated every day.

After reading these contents, a group of horses fell into deep thought.

He has been writing online novels for such a long time, and he has been paying attention to the trend of online novels recently, so he can naturally see some tricks.

Is there anything wrong with this novel?there must be.

But, there are advantages too!

The current novels on the market are still based on the passionate routine of "Don't bully the young and poor". The way to mobilize readers' emotions is mainly through relatively simple and crude methods such as suppression, inciting hatred, and revenge.

Urban novels have also made good progress, but they have not escaped from this big framework as a whole. Many themes of soldier kings, school girls, and rebirth are basically more traditional pretense and slapping faces.

As for the novel "Butterfly Game", it can be seen from the underlying structure that it is quite different from the currently popular novels.

First of all, it re-planned the previous routine while maintaining a fast pace.

Most of the current novels are still popular with the so-called "Golden Three Chapters", which is a fixed cycle of "repression, gaining cheats, and slapping the face".

This routine cannot be said to be bad, but there are some trends that have been used badly. Many readers instinctively feel a little nauseous after seeing it.

But "Butterfly Game" completely abandons this routine. There is no depressing part at the beginning. The protagonist directly gets the golden finger, and there is no "face-slapping" plot, and directly enters his own unique cool point.

Secondly, the "coolness" of this novel is expressed in a completely different way from other novels.

The current online novels are "simple and crude cool", which is commonly known as "pretending to be forceful".

But the cool point of "Butterfly Game" is a kind of sneaky coolness. The protagonist uses the light ball in his hand to create a butterfly effect in the parallel world with some very small changes, so as to achieve some very interesting results.

The refreshing feeling obtained by the protagonist is not as obvious as the traditional pretending to face, it will be more subtle, but this refreshing feeling can also bring spiritual pleasure to readers.

Moreover, regardless of the sense of accomplishment gained by the protagonist, if you substitute yourself into a character in the book, such as the frustrated game producer, you can also get a kind of happiness.

This kind of happiness is a bit like a fairy tale for adults. We all know that most independent game producers have lost their games due to lack of publicity.

In reality, many independent game producers can only give up their game dreams unwillingly, but in the novel, his dreams are realized because of the "butterfly effect" created by the protagonist, which is also a refreshing feeling for readers .

If it is said that braised pork is the most popular way of making novels now, then this novel is like a simple dish of tomatoes mixed with sugar.

Braised pork is delicious, but when there are all kinds of braised pork on the table, if a dish of tomatoes mixed with sugar is served, it will be eaten up quickly.

Not only that, Ma Yiqun seems to have seen some shadows of Tengda in this book.

He felt that this story seemed to be based on President Pei. After all, when President Pei was working on "Lonely Desert Road", it was because of a video of Qiao Laoshi that it suddenly became popular.

With the profits from this game, Mr. Pei had the money to make "Ghost General" and earned the first pot of gold for the establishment of Tengda Group.

Therefore, in the eyes of Ma Yiqun, this story is very kind.

Considering these aspects, Ma Yiqun has a hunch that if this book can be written well, it will definitely be a big hit on the Chinese website at the end!

But is the book perfectly written?

A group of horses think, not necessarily so.

There are still some small changes that can be made. After the changes, this book can be improved to a higher level!

Just in time, since Cui Geng hasn't written much yet, Chuan Xiao is good to turn around, so hurry up and revise it!

Thinking of this, Ma Yiqun directly called Cui Geng.

"Mr. Ma, I'm just typing! Don't worry, I will definitely write this book well, and it will never be unfinished again! At least 200 million words!"

The group of horses hadn't spoken yet, but Cui Geng had already expressed his determination.

"Hehe, guess how many times you have said this?"

Ma Yiqun's words left Cui Geng speechless.

"Okay, that's not what I called you to talk about." Ma Yiqun smiled and got to the point, "I really want to tell you about the new book, but besides telling you to write this book well, don't leave it unfinished. Besides, there are other things."

Cui Geng was taken aback: "Mr. Ma, please tell me."

Ma Yiqun said: "I personally have some small opinions. Let me just tell you. If you think it is suitable, you can change it. If it is not suitable, forget it. It is also a collective effort to write this book well."

"I like your book very much, so I want to help you polish the content of this book better."

Cui Geng was a little flattered: "You say."

A group of horses sorted out their thoughts a little bit, and explained their thoughts in detail.

"I can see that the subject matter of the first small plot seems to be based on Mr. Pei. Tengda does have many interesting stories, and it's okay to use them as sources. However, I think your artistic processing is still a bit insufficient."

"My opinion is mainly two points:"

"First of all, I think the protagonist, as a pure bystander, does not participate in the plot enough."

"It's not a big problem to treat the protagonist as a purely tool person. Some books do this, but it will be more interesting if it can be related to the plot."

"This is how I imagined it: the ball of light that the protagonist gets is not a parallel world, but the real world where he is."

"And every action the protagonist makes is actually changing the world and making the world he lives in better."

"At the same time, the protagonist can also benefit from his own actions. For example, he helped an entrepreneur build a business empire worth hundreds of billions of dollars, and the protagonist can use his own money to buy the company before the empire takes shape. stock, so he himself got a huge profit and changed his life."

"Moreover, the protagonist participates in these interactions as a person in the dark, and can meet those supporting characters in reality. At this time, many interesting plots will also occur."

"Secondly, I think the tone of the book could be changed."

"The current writing method is mainly a positive narrative, which is more straightforward."

"The so-called direct refreshment is: what do I want to do, I do it, and I succeed."

"This way of writing is safe, but it may not be very attractive to readers."

"I think, whether it is possible to use an anti-routine narrative method to further strengthen the feeling of accidents and mistakes in the 'Butterfly Game', so as to make the cool point more twists and turns, and the storyline more witty and humorous."

"In simple terms: I didn't think to do anything, an accident happened, I backfired, but I made it."

"Specifically speaking of the first plot you wrote, the current cool outline is: the author of an indie game wants to succeed, the protagonist helps him through the 'Butterfly Game', and the author of an indie game succeeds."

"After the modification, the cool outline can become like this: the author of an independent game doesn't want to be successful, he just wants to make a game to retaliate against the society. It worked."

"In the process of writing, pay attention to using more witty and humorous writing methods. This kind of plot should stand out from the current traditional plots."

"Understand?"

On the other end of the phone, Cui Geng was silent, as if trying to digest what Ma Yiqun said just now.

After a long time, he gave a meaningful "hmm": "Boss Ma makes a lot of sense!"

"Indeed, when I was writing this beginning, I always felt as if something was missing."

"It's like a dish with all the ingredients and the cooking time is about the same, but it always lacks a little flavor!"

"If these two points can be made up, then this book will definitely be even more brilliant!"

"But... President Ma, I have a doubt."

A group of horses: "Huh? What doubts."

Cui Geng hesitated for a moment, and then said: "To be honest, the plot of this game producer is indeed based on Mr. Pei."

"However, will the current way of writing uglify Mr. Pei's image?"

"Boss Pei doesn't hold grudges, does he?"

(End of this chapter)