lost narrative poem

Chapter 138 Reality Is Really a Garbage Game (Title Irrelevant

In the end, Xia Ran still didn't release the audio, but deleted it generously.

This made Zaimuza Yoshiki feel that he finally survived. After all, he also has his own bottom line. Don't look at him when he faced Hikigu before, he was able to say that kind of crazy words without shame Come……

However, Xia Ran's behavior hit him in the dead of point with incomparable precision.

After all, not to mention the kind of shameful second-year mad lines, even if it is a normal speech, ordinary people will not think there is any problem, but if someone suddenly wants to record it, and is going to take it out to publicize it ...

Maybe you can't accept it at all, you will feel angry and anxious, right?

As for what is the difference, it is really hard to explain for a while, it is probably the difference between wearing a swimsuit and wearing underwear, which obviously have the same effect, both of which are made of the same fabric. Can't live in a few places on the body.

However, the former can be shown openly to others, while the latter, as long as one is accidentally seen, seems to be ashamed and indignant. It's really a problem.

But Xia Ran didn't really show kindness, and she just deleted it as a gesture——

This is not to say that he deleted the audio on the surface, but in fact he still has such a handle, but because his illusion attainments have not yet pointed out the innate expertise that works on machines, and there is no way to import fake voices into the phone, turning it into a mobile phone. Audio that really exists.

That's right, he actually didn't record it at all, and there was no need for that. He just used illusion to make people present have some specific auditory hallucinations.

Because his perception is very high, the words he heard before are also very clear, and there is nothing missing.And because his intelligence attribute is also very high, even if he didn't try to memorize it deliberately, he could completely remember every punctuation mark that Yoshiki Saikiza said just now.

Slightly changing the soft voice technique and reversing the direction, you can turn canceling sound into making sound——

After all, strictly speaking, this is not a self-created skill, nor is it a modification, because in the illusion system, eliminating or creating sounds at the level of sensory perception is completely the most basic thing.

The effect is no different from the recording. In theory, everyone just relived Xia Ran's previous feelings. From the auditory level, auditory hallucinations appeared, reliving the feelings of the words he heard before.

Xia Ran also felt that maybe he was really talented in the aspects of mind and spirit, and he could figure out some things just by reading books by himself, and he could also make good use of the magic characteristics he had mastered and make use of them according to local conditions.

It's not just mechanical mastery, rigid use, like game data that is immutable, it will always have the same effect.

Of course, there is probably a reason why his relevant attributes are all so high now. As a person who is determined to take the route of a legal worker, his three basic attributes of intelligence, spirit, and perception are all at 40+.

This is almost a fairly stable regular triangle, each side is supporting each other, so that the range of ability value represented by each attribute can be better displayed.

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……

5 minutes later.

In the center of the activity room of the service department, a few tables were moved out to form a long table. Xia Ran, Yukinoshita, Hikigaya, and Yubihama occupied the four corners of the rectangle and sat facing each other.

"He's Yoshiki Saekiza, I've introduced him before... the guy who is with me in every physical education class."

Hikigu looked at the gray-white figure squatting in a circle near the corner of the window, and said with a look of disgust, explaining the purpose of this guy Zaimuza to Xia Ran.

"He wrote a light novel, which is the original manuscript in your hand. He originally wanted to submit it directly. It seems that he planned to participate in some newcomer award, right? But because he didn't have any friends and couldn't hear everyone's thoughts, so he found it. The Ministry of Service wants to see other people's opinions."

And the guy in Biqigu's mouth was squatting in the corner by the window with his back to everyone and drawing circles, leaving only a lonely figure behind.

Probably because he had just been violently attacked by a ruthless heart, he has become taciturn now, and he no longer makes that pretentiously heroic laugh, but tries to reduce his sense of existence as much as possible.

"That's it..." Xia Ran nodded, and didn't express any opinions immediately, but quickly flipped through the manuscript of the novel in her hand.

Although it's not like a breeze flipping a book, it just flips through, but the speed is also extremely fast, basically every page is turned over immediately without staying for more than ten seconds.

It's not like reading a book, but more like checking whether the homework has been done. It doesn't matter what the specific content is, as long as there is content anyway.

Others didn't care too much when they saw it. This kind of behavior is normal. They also circulated the original manuscript of the novel not long ago, but they just flipped through it like this... After all, it is a light novel rather than a micro novel .

The size of the manuscript paper used is also 42 by 34. Such a thick stack is densely written. Of course, it is impossible to read it all in a while.

"We are going to take a few copies of the original manuscript of the novel. After we go back tonight, everyone will read it first and then talk about it. We will talk about our opinions tomorrow..."

Xue Shixia sat opposite Xia Ran, and after seeing the latter put down the manuscript of the novel, she reached out to take it over, flipped through it casually, and said so plainly, and put forward her own opinion.

"Student Xia Ran, you should be more experienced in this area. If you have any suggestions, you can also say it... It doesn't matter if you say it directly. Since he has the courage to take the initiative to come here, he must be ready to accept criticism. Mentally prepared."

"That's right! That's it! I am the swordsman general Kiza Yoshiki, and I have never lacked courage. Naturally, I will not be afraid...afraid to face challenges..."

The boy by the window seemed to get agitated all of a sudden, he stood up all of a sudden, waved his arms at the crowd and shouted, the coat on his body crackled with the wind outside the window.

But when he saw Xia Ran cast his eyes on himself, he immediately shivered subconsciously, his voice suddenly became quieter, and he had to bite the bullet before finishing the last few words.

stare……

Under the execution of everyone's emotionless eyes, he shrank back to the corner and squatted in circles.

This second-level disease has entered the brain too deeply, and it is probably hopeless. It seems that speaking some second-level lines has become this person's instinctive reaction.

Xia Ran couldn't help sighing, what can be done, even if he caused a psychological shadow on the other party, it is impossible to let the shadow area overwhelm the soul of the second year of middle school for many years in the past!

"Speaking of which, what does General Jianhao mean?" He didn't care about it, and asked casually.

At this time, Hikigu explained:

"It's like this, student Xia Ran. The character foundation this guy set for himself seems to be the No. 13th general of the Muromachi Shogunate, Ashikaga Yoshiki. Since they have the same name, it might be easier to conceive this way."

"Ashikaga Yoshiki?"

"Yeah, that's not bad. Although it's annoying for him to keep citing history, he at least made his settings based on past history, so it's a little bit better." with.

"Huh? If you put it this way, then what is your setting for Hikigu? Isn't it based on past history?"

Xia Ran suddenly became interested and narrowed her eyes slightly.

"Of course not. My setting is that there used to be seven gods in this world. They were the three gods who belonged to the god of creation, the three gods who belonged to the god of destruction, and the "nameless god" who owed forever.They have sent the world through repeated booms and busts and are currently in the seventh cycle. "

Hikigaya Hachiman almost didn't even think about it, and just blurted out——

"In order to prevent the world from dying again, the government is looking for the reincarnations of these seven gods everywhere. Among them, the most important and whose ability is still unknown is the eternal god, which is my Biqi—"

He stopped suddenly, smacked his lips and felt that something was wrong... Wait, is he being tricked by someone?

I shouldn't be such a vigilant person, why does this person's words seem to have some magical power, before it was cooked by Bibin's darkness, and now it is this kind of dark history.

The fish-eyed boy subconsciously looked to the side, and found that the harmless young man had just put down his phone, as if he had just finished recording...

Fuck!Is this person poisonous? !

Ever since, there was one more person squatting in the corner drawing circles, Bi Qigu silently squatting side by side with the wooden seat...

Obviously, he was still a member of the second disease just now, but now he has suddenly become a member of the despised... During this process, what happened to make him become like this Woolen cloth?

He couldn't figure it out for a while, he didn't even know who he was, where he came from, where he was going...

"What a devil..." Yukinoshita sighed, watching Xia Ran make such an evaluation.

And Yubihama Yui seemed to agree very much, and seemed to be frightened by Xia Ran. When he saw the latter's gaze, he immediately turned his head away in a hurry, looked out the window and hummed a song, pretending to be He looked fine, except for the cold sweat on his forehead.

"Ahahahaha...Actually, I'm not that good..." Xia Ran stretched out her hand to touch the back of her head in embarrassment, looking ashamed.

"Which word do you think I just said was a compliment to you?" Yukinoshita didn't want to talk to this guy anymore, if Saikiza Yoshiki answered something wrong, and he was not on the same channel at all, making it difficult to communicate.

Then this guy is pretending to be stupid and deliberately misinterpreting the meaning of others. Although he can communicate, it takes more effort.

"Let's talk about this novel by Zaimoza..."

Xia Ran didn't bother to argue, and put her hands together in front of her chest, posing like a professional.

"Zaimuza, is this about super power battles on campus? I just read it, and the routine is quite old-fashioned. Using a certain city in Japan as the stage, it describes the relationship between a mysterious organization and super power users with past life memories. The dark night comes and goes, and then an ordinary young protagonist discovers the power hidden in himself and defeats enemies one after another."

"Uh... yes, yes." Zaimuza, who was drawing circles in the corner of the wall, raised his head.

"It's not entirely a bad thing to be old-fashioned, but first of all, you must write correct sentences, which cannot make people feel difficult to read. Basically, half of them are inverted sentences..." Xia Ran continued.

"Ah? Oh oh..." Zai Muzao responded a little at a loss.

"The other thing is that the narrative sentence is too long, and there are too many difficult words to read. As for the development of the plot, I can only say that it is too fast. You should not use three natural paragraphs to write the content of twenty chapters."

Xia Ran expressed her feelings calmly: "For example, at the end of Chapter 3, I have no idea why the heroine suddenly took off her clothes..."

"Wait, Xia Ran, what are you talking about?" Xue Xia interrupted his evaluation with a frown.

"Eh? Isn't this obvious at a glance, express my feelings!" Xia Ran didn't know why.

"Did you only watch it for a few minutes?"

"But I've read them all!"

(PS: Blind date... I don't know what I'm doing all day today... Wow! It's so annoying, why haven't I time-traveled yet...)

(End of this chapter)