Is it not a galgame?

When Xu Yuanxuan passed by the door of the president's office, he just heard Qing Zhiyuan's voice coming from inside.

"Look, this game wants to touch people's hearts, whether it's tear-jerking or heart-wrenching, the most important thing is that the foreshadowing in the early stage must be in place... In fact, human beings don't empathize because of the knife, but It's because of empathy..."

eh?

Hearing this, Xu Yuanxuan's heart tightened.

Is the president guiding Jun Maeda?
Why only teach Maeda alone?
I want to listen too.

Bang Bang knocked on the door twice, Qing Zhiyuan stopped inside, a little surprised: "Come in."

Xu Yuanxuan's thick eyebrows and small eyes poked in immediately.

"That...President, I'm very sorry. I accidentally heard it just now. Although I didn't mean it, I am very interested in this class. Please let me listen to it too. I want to learn it too."

Ah this...

What are you going to learn?

I'm not giving a lecture.

Qing Zhiyuan couldn't help frowning.

I am directing Maeda Jun, hoping to guide him to write the plot of CL, why are you here to join in the fun?
Xu Yuanxuan came to write Clannad, I am afraid that even the male protagonist's family will be knifed in the end.

Jun Maeda who was sitting on the sofa had the same expression.

……

It's just that Jun Maeda doesn't know enough about Qing Zhiyuan. In his mind, although the president has made several games and has rich experience in games, he is not the master in his mind.

The great god in his heart is Gu Yuan Chunqiu.

And Gu Yuan Chunqiu has already resigned.

Since Xu Yuanxuan wanted to come and listen, Qing Zhiyuan thought about it carefully, and it seemed that it didn't matter too much, so he approved his request.

Less than a minute later, this person came in holding a notebook.

This guy Urobuchi Gen was taking notes seriously, making a big show of it.

Qing Zhiyuan ignored him and continued to brainwash Maeda:
"About the knife issue. Cough cough, about the touch..."

"In addition to love, there are many different forms, such as friendship and family affection, and even people's own efforts and growth."

"In "The Bed Man" this time, Maeda actually showed the element of friendship very well, and the heroine struggled to push her mother away and ran towards the hero, which was also a big tear. These are all worth learning and learning."

"Thank you, President." Maeda Jun nodded seriously.

Was praised by the president?

Urobuchi Xuan is not feeling well, this guy actually made his first game just now and was praised by the president?

Qing Zhiyuan picked up the chalk and wrote on the blackboard:

【family】

【Eternal bond】

【Agreement】

【Family】

【love】

【Friendship】

【Miracle】

【future】

【fate】

and many more……

Then explain them one by one.

"Tragedy has a strong appeal, but what is infectious is not necessarily tragedy." Qing Zhiyuan analyzed, "The essence of appeal is [experience], or [memory]. A person we don't know You don't feel much grief when you die.

But if this person lived with you for a while, and you have all the good and bad memories of him, then when he dies, you are touched.

This is also what I said before, foreshadowing is very important. "

Uh-huh!

Urobuchi Genuine agrees very much!
He took a small pen and quickly recorded it, and made a summary of his gains and losses based on his previous work.

For example, the queen among the demon hunters returned to her human identity. No matter how tearful she was in the game, it still couldn't arouse the players' approval. On the one hand, everyone had no experience of changing from a human to a vampire.

I have never experienced the feeling of waiting for a long time and getting what I want.

On the other hand, it is also limited by the main line of the game, and there is no more time and space to express these contents.

It is quite difficult to shape a character.

Qing Zhiyuan explained for a long time, glanced at Xu Yuanxuan's small notebook from time to time, and felt even more guilty in his heart.

After all, his class today is mainly to help the current Ma Zhizhun evolve into a mature version of Ma Zhizhun, so that he can experience family affection, friendship... and other infectious powers as soon as possible.

After comprehending these, Ma Zhizhun's skills will be greatly enhanced, instead of telling Xu Yuanxuan how to use a knife and how to make him cry.

If Lao Xu turned into a quasi-fit of Lao Xu + Ma Zhi, what would it look like?
"So what I want to say is, Maeda, Keke, and Hetian, you don't need to stick to [Love] in your future scripts, but expand horizontally." After Qing Zhiyuan finished speaking, he raised his chin and asked, " Maeda-san, do you understand?"

"Ah."

Maeda Jun nodded seriously.

During this period of time, the president has frequently discussed with him the idea of ​​writing games and scripts, including that he wants to let himself experience life, which is actually for his own good.

Because what you experience can help you write more realistic and touching scripts.

Maeda Jun is now working in this direction.

"I understand too!" Xu Yuanxuan raised his right hand high.

Qing Zhiyuan rolled his eyes.

You know what a ghost, write your dark literature well!

You are not on the same path as Ma Zhizhun like [healing system] [gives people infinite power and hope] [brings people a pure touch] [tears people tears and makes people feel endless joy at the same time].

How good it is to be your warrior of love and walk in your own style.

……

The two left separately, and Lao Xu nodded frequently, expressing that he had gained a lot today and felt a sense of enlightenment.

Jun Maeda is under a lot of pressure, but he is still very happy to be praised by the president.

By the way, Qing Zhiyuan assigned Maeda Jun the task of a new work, asking him to write a few scripts around the core of [Family] [Family] [Love].

It is not required to be perfect from the beginning, as long as there is an outline and main key content.

Otherwise it would be a waste of time to wait for him to finish the whole script.

Qing Zhiyuan even confessed that as long as Maeda Jun has an idea, he can communicate with himself even without an outline.

After about 2 weeks, Maeda Jun handed him almost 3 scripts.

But Qing Zhiyuan was not very satisfied.

Not because of anything else, these are not CLANNAD in his mind.

Moreover, the class does not seem to have much effect, but interferes with Maeda Jun's thinking, causing him to always write some inexplicable family combinations, and then distorted works that make people look bad.

Good guy, Urobuchi Gen moved closer to Ma Zhijun, but Ma Zhijun became Urobuchi Gen instead, right?
Qing Zhiyuan couldn't help covering his forehead.

What a headache.

Qing Zhiyuan really wanted to give him a heavy blow on the head, but after thinking about it, he decided to forget it.

Ma Zhizhun is very talented, but he has a shortcoming——

Don't look at his usual calm and arrogant appearance, in fact, this person's heart is very fragile.

In the previous life, Ma Zhizhun was very concerned about the [criticism] of the players, which caused him to disappear from the world several times.

After the great success of CL, this person directed a sequel "Tomoyo After".

"Tomoyo After" is the FANS DISC of Jun Maeda's masterpiece "CLANNAD", which is a work for CL fans.

Needless to say about CL, whether it is a game or an animation, it is still a representative work of the Weeping series. Although the process was difficult, the final white magic did sublimate the theme, making people more aware of what a family is while being moved.

However, when it came to "Tomoyo After", Ma Zhijun did not continue the warmth of CL's original article, but wrote a real and ruthless melancholic work, especially the final true ending of Tomoya and Tomoyo, which can be called crueler than BE te.

Ma Zhizhun's self-release this time completely ignited the anger of the players. Not only did the game's sales suddenly die, but the negative reviews continued, and Ma Zhizhun even received a blade from the player.

Well, from this point of view, it is already a traditional art skill for Nihong to send blades, and Qing Zhiyuan is also a bit used to being sent blades now.

This was unacceptable to Ma Zhizhun, so shortly after the game was released, this guy suddenly "disappeared".

Ma Zhizhun's disappearance was not a joke, it was true that there was no news at all, and his colleagues were so anxious that they called the police.

Of course, in the end, Ma Zhizhun was just depressed, cut off all contact methods and went to live in the countryside for a few days.

Ma Zhi will definitely "run away" and "disappear", which is actually related to his own experience.

Ma Zhizhun did not come from a major, nor did he receive professional writing guidance. When he was looking for a job, he even considered working at Champion Soft, the predecessor of AliceSoft. In the end, he switched to SCOOP because he did not understand windows, but he quit the company because his script and environment were incompatible.

So this guy has never been confident in his writing skills. Even though he has achieved something, he still often calls himself a "useless scriptwriter".

In addition to not being confident about his writing skills, Ma Zhizhun is also a person who cares about readers' evaluation.

He will pay attention to almost every review of a new work, and will discuss and track the experience and feelings after the release and sale of the work with the main creative staff.

But a thousand readers have a thousand Hamlets in their hearts. The more they care about these things, the greater the psychological pressure on Ma Zhizhun, and the less confident he is. Although everyone around him calls him a genius, he still feels that he is just a scumbag. .

This is even more so after the failure of "Charlotte", which led to the continuous negative reviews after the 2020th episode of "The Day of Becoming a God" in 12. As for Ma Zhizhun, he deleted and ran away because he couldn't stand the blow .

how to say?

Although the Great Demon King of Tears is called the Great Demon King, his heart is as fragile as a child's.

In other words, the altar of neon is not so easy to get on, at least you have to have a big heart, but the most terrible thing is that Maeda Jun's heart is really bad (in various senses, he also because of Bad heart surgery)
Therefore, although Qing Zhiyuan intended to lead in the direction of CL, he did not dare to force Ma Zhizhun too much. He also has a deep understanding of this type of script writer.

After being hit for a long time, it is easy for him to become learned helplessness.

What's more, the script given by Ma Zhizhun is actually good, and it can still be used after modification.

Therefore, although Qing Zhiyuan did not adopt his script, he still gave it a high degree of affirmation and praise.

"Well, these scripts have their own highlights, and there may be a possibility of project approval in the future. Let's make persistent efforts."

"Good boss."

Maeda Jun picked up the proposal and left the president's office a little frustrated.

Seeing his back, Qing Zhiyuan was a little bit distressed.

I have to find a way to encourage it. After all, Ma Zhizhun has made a pretty good game like "The Bed Man", but don't become depressed because of your own requirements.

……

Qing Zhiyuan couldn't sleep at night, tossing and turning for a long time, he suddenly opened his eyes, and figured out a truth——

The world has changed!

Yes!The world has changed, it is no longer the world in his memory.

Moreover, there are still many people and things in this world that Qing Zhiyuan has never been in contact with or understands.

Although his arrival had little impact on the overall historical process, it had a certain impact on the people and things around him.

For example, Gen Urobuchi did not write works such as "The Song of Saya" and "Magic Girl Madoka" according to the normal development (actually, the river crab master is watching)

Then Ma Zhizhun may not be able to write CL.

After all, the premise of these creations is closely related to personal experience. Without the poison of love flowers, you will not lose the little dragon girl, and if you don’t lose the little dragon girl, Yang Guo will not be able to practice the palm of ecstasy.

It's probably a similar reason, right?

It is impossible for a person to step into the same river twice, and the hemp branch in this life must have no experience in the previous life, so how to write the same thing?
Qing Zhiyuan couldn't completely let him replicate the same experience, after all, it was Ma Zhizhun's life.

Write as CL, read as life.

Without enough life experience, it is impossible to write such a work.

But... CL will definitely have to do it.

Now it seems that I can only do it by myself.

……

Early the next morning, Qing Zhiyuan found Ma Zhizhun and invited him to the president's office.

Unfortunately, he was witnessed by Xu Yuanxuan again.

"President, I want to..."

You want a ghost too!

"Okay, you come too."

Who let me spoil you?

Qing Zhiyuan opened the door and waited for two people to come in and sit down before he said with a smile, "Maeda, please forget what I said to you earlier."

"Eh?"

Both Maeda Jun and Urobuchi Gen were stunned.

"I want to understand one thing." Qing Zhiyuan said, "The development of everything has its own objectivity, and some things cannot be interfered by human beings. I believe in your ability, and please follow your own ideas in the future. it is done.

One more important point. "

Qing Zhiyuan looked at Maeda Jun and said, "You must have your own judgment ability, and don't be influenced by other people's ideas. No one is perfect in this world. Every work, there are always people who like it and some people don't like it. But the most important thing is The most important thing is to like yourself.

Only in this way can you make works that truly surpass yourself. "

"So, please create your own unique game script." Qing Zhiyuan said.

He really figured it out, instead of forcing Ma Zhizhun in [this timeline] to write the works of his previous life, it is better to guide him first, help him develop a good attitude, and remove unnecessary psychological burden.

The soul of the key club is Ma Zhizhun. He is pushed too hard by his own glory, the players and the signboard of the key club. It is impossible to make a good work under too much pressure.

Fortunately, there are pokeni now, in the pokeni, as long as Qing Zhiyuan is there, there is no need for Ma Zhizhun to bear the pressure.

The two sat on the sofa, lost in thought for a while.

After a long time, Maeda Jun sighed softly, feeling relieved.

"Understood." Xu Yuanxuan nodded, "Go your own way and don't be influenced by the players."

Ah this...

Qing Zhiyuan has black lines all over his head.

You are the last one to say such things, okay? !
……

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One more chapter tonight

Around 11 o'clock (end of this chapter)