NBA peak Jordan template

Thank you + comments for finishing this book
I have never specifically thanked the small bosses who supported me.

So I want to first thank those of you who continued to use the methods that I can see until the end - comments and votes.

MVP: Outstanding young people of today.Ten recommended votes every day, never ending!You really are yyds!

Scoring champion: Gao Yangbian.Eliminate 0 chapter commentators!Finally, he gives me encouragement and comments to support me every day!Let me know what I'm writing and someone has been reading it!
A burst: Zhao Yun vs. Zilong, Hongle, Blazing Flame, Falling Star, Yan, Brown Tianxiangfeng Tea

All Stars: I am teasing you, hahaha, so happy, so happy, Mr. Boxing King, Book Friends 20200320222933243, A Siren, Book Friends 160403044420818, Book Friends 20220916231553067, Ming Ruoleng Yiliu, Book Friends 20190203140750388, Big Bear, Poison Poison Poison, Xiao Menghan, Geng Ma Wa Ghost, Zhou Yuheng.
Of course, I want to thank far more than just these small bosses. Some of the small bosses gave me their monthly tickets. Because I didn’t organize them before, I can’t make a list now.

I'll scold you first, I'm garbage!

then.

Many small business owners are silently supporting me and insisting on subscribing. There are also many book friends who have supported me in the past, but because I failed to write better, I want to keep you.

For every little boss who has supported me and subscribed, I am very, very, very grateful to you!

that's all!

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The following is the reflection (self-review) part.

Warning - a lot of nonsense.

First, character creation

main character.What I originally wanted to write about was the feeling of the invincible Jordan, arrogant and overwhelming in this small ball era.He is invincible but not invincible enough, he is extreme but not extreme enough, and he becomes contradictory when he tries to escape from extremes.He is like Jordan, but fake and fleshless. It is more like I mixed part of my personality with the Jordan I imagined and became a "monster".In the final analysis, I failed to grasp how to create an "invincible" character.

supporting role.

The supporting roles of basketball articles are coaches, opponents and teammates.In terms of the shaping of coaches and teammates, Walton, Jokic, Butler, and Ingram. I tried to write them with flesh and blood, but it made the characters flat, mechanized, and even separated from their original selves. In reality, they are all players with great talent and personality, and in the end they all became appendages of the protagonist.I have tried to show them how brilliant they were in a certain game, but it never ended and I failed to show their growth and changes in stages. As for the opponents, the only thing I am most satisfied with is the one about Paul George. Zhang, wrote the sentence "I kind of miss my old self", like the relatively heavyweight Curry, who has completely lost his character, Durant, I can't help but criticize him, Harden's presence is not even as good as Bev Leigh, James, failed to write the feeling of "The Chosen One"
Second, rhythm.

Book friends who have been reading all this time know that my pace was very slow in the early stages, and I had to write several chapters per game, but then suddenly changed speed in the middle and later stages. Even after I finished writing the Western Conference Finals at the end, the finals was solved in more than 1 words.I feel that I have grown up in grasping the rhythm. Sometimes the too long game rhythm is a kind of procrastination. Only important and critical games are worth focusing on. However, the inconsistency of the rhythm before and after means that I did not go there before starting the book. Think about how to write the rhythm.But in the end, I slowly found the rhythm of a basketball game.

Third, daily life.

Daily life is an indispensable part of basketball articles. It can highlight the character of the protagonist, make the protagonist more vivid and more like a person, and also make the reader less tired when reading.But my writing is very poor, especially the female part. I have not been able to find the proper writing and ink for this part yet. Part of the problem is that my protagonist is already invincible and needs daily training and growth. I really can’t write anymore.

This is the area that needs the most learning.

Basically, just to summarize these, I feel that as long as I write two of the points in the next book better and better, it will be a great improvement.

Finally, in the short term, I will start the next book. The next book will not touch the invincible flow. Then I hope to write a few more seasons and double the number of words. This one will be 60, and the next one will be 120 million. , of course, persistence in word count requires grades, so you must write better and better so that more people are willing to read it.

At last.

If any book friends read this, it is definitely true love, thank you very much!
If you have any suggestions or ideas, please leave them in the chapter comments. See you in the next book!
that's all.

(End of this chapter)