Douluo: Reincarnation of Qian Renxue, One Heart Avenue

Chapter 29 Author's words, please take a look, thank you!

Alas, today a reader said that my work is not good, so the author has gone through a lot of reflection.
I would like to say sorry to everyone here. This aspect is indeed something the author has not considered. The author only wants to write a real and magnificent Douluo world. However, if everything is perfect, the length of the entire article will be much longer, but the author has never understood how to make it not water? The author has just started writing, and does not know much about the refinement of the writing style. Please bear with me. After all, it is really tiring to write after work. I now regret writing this article on impulse. It is really tiring to write a novel after work.

Moreover, it is actually difficult to give a qualitative definition to water. After some reflection, I found that I really didn't know where to modify. Every step is indispensable. The author has even deleted many small plots because each small plot is closely linked.

For example, the plot in which Qian Renxue deceived Qian Daoliu is essential for hunting for a hundred thousand year soul ring nowadays. For example, it was because of meeting Ye Feng, the time traveler, that Qian Renxue wanted to take down the Yin-Yang Eyes of Ice and Fire immediately. If she didn't go, I can only say that she would have become a brainless fool. How would you know if there were other time travelers?

There are also verbal confrontations between Bibi Dong and Citun, which are what the author hopes to show to the readers. I don’t want everyone to treat these Titled Douluo as idiots and believe whatever the time traveler says.

That's too brainless? They also have their own thoughts and ideas. Every one of their ideas is figured out by the author by substituting into their personalities and experiences! Is this water? Is it only the fast-paced, everyone is exactly the same, with no ideas of their own, and the homogeneity like a clone that is not water?

Besides, everything Qian Renxue has now was earned by herself. She is the reincarnated Qian Renxue, and her configuration is exactly the same as Qian Renxue in the original novel!

The author didn't add any water to her basic settings! Her cheats were all earned by her own wisdom, power, and talent!

Didn't they say that when they went to the Xingdou Great Forest and killed a soul beast, an external soul bone suddenly appeared? Why did it appear? I don't know. Just because Tang San has it, I have to have it too?
Just like the external soul bone of the Blue Silver Emperor, Qian Renxue had fought for it from Ah Yin. She had already made her own plans for her future! She would not rely on so-called good luck! Fate!
It's not like a system suddenly appears, and with a ding, the sign-in is successful. Wow! Congratulations, you have a twelve-winged fallen angel!
I didn't say that eating the immortal grass would lead to evolution immediately, right? Is it really that cheap to have a super god-level martial spirit? Just a few immortal grasses can do it?
Is it really impossible to write about these transformation processes, all at once, with a ding sound, wow, congratulations on signing in successfully, martial soul evolution, twenty-four-winged angel! Isn't this not watered down?

Why are you still watching the genius flow? Why don’t you watch the invincible flow? There are many people who sign in twelve or sixteen wings, and they can get double pupils and supreme bones for you.

Is it necessary to have a system to be good? Does the protagonist really have his own charm after having the system? Everything is just the system's task. Without the system, can Qian Renxue not become the strongest?
Could it be that she can't have the first soul ring of 100,000 years? Brothers who have seen this, tell me for yourselves, what is unreasonable about the cheat I used?
Didn't she fight for it herself? A reader once said that I was exaggerating, saying that the first spirit ring was a hundred thousand year spirit ring, but can you tell me if there was anything unreasonable in my handling of the matter?
Have I violated the basic setting of Douluo Continent? Qian Renxue has been planning for this 100,000-year spirit ring for three years! Is she still inferior to the protagonist who gets everything with just a ding?
Why is it that the things Qian Renxue racked her brains and calculated are just nonsense, while those system sign-in beeps are not nonsense? Do the protagonists of the sign-in flow or system flow have their own ideas and plots besides signing in beside Shrek?
Alas π_π, sorry, I suddenly feel a little angry. The author is a boy and is very shameless. I don’t care if you call the author a fool, a lazy dog, or the characters ooc. I will change it on the spot if it is reasonable. But I feel really uncomfortable that Qian Renxue planned for such a long time and was only evaluated as water.

I thought about the part that could be criticized as water, and it could be the reaction of the major sects, but wouldn't that be a small pleasure? Besides, I had already told several readers that the scene should be bigger, so is it the kind of plot that makes people say "ding", "congratulations on getting a 100,000-year spirit ring" that is the most pleasant?

There is also the part where Qianxunji and Tang Hao fight, but this is a big plot about hunting for a hundred thousand year spirit ring! Should I just write Qian Renxue to be there, Ah Yin, you sacrifice yourself to me, and I have to have Titled Douluo here? I just did it in one sentence, oh, it's very uncomfortable.

In addition, I don’t set a fan value in my comment section, and I don’t delete comments.

There is strength in numbers. If you are dissatisfied, you can raise it directly. The author will change the unreasonable parts on the spot. People will judge right and wrong.

I wrote this book for those brothers who are also fed up with brainless fan fiction and dead-end bootlickers. If you don't like it, you can go and read the invincible flow with system, or the innate level 90 soul power. That's very fast, full of dry stuff, not water at all. My poor work is actually not suitable. The author is a newcomer and started writing without knowing anything.

Finally, the author really hopes to communicate with everyone. No matter where something is unreasonable or the characters are ooc, you can point them out and the author will accept them humbly. But don’t curse, otherwise I will start a debate on the spot.

After working for a long time, I still haven't had time to write the two chapters in the early morning. I have to start rushing to finish the manuscript. If you have any ideas, you can also put forward them. The author will reflect on it himself. But if you can't find a reason to scold others, I am not your father, and I will not indulge you! Finally, thank you everyone, (ω) love you

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