Sword and Sorcery and Martial Arts

Chapter 118
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Before I knew it, this book had already written almost 30 words. Originally, what I had always wanted to write was a novel about lord farming in fantasy categories, and I had conceived the framework for a long time.But suddenly I saw the Wuxia Million Essay Competition, and I was attracted by the awards. No.1 was a thousand-word, one-hundred-yuan contract. At that time, I started to write without thinking about the plot. Special Creative Award.It is estimated that the essay competition must be cold by now. Now that I think about it, I might as well prepare to write honestly what I wanted to write before.

Because it was a temporary idea, the previous plots were not well conceived, and I only thought about the outline of the whole book, which also caused some of the previous chapters to be poorly written. It's better to save face.I also want to write a good book, but the writing is not good enough.

Before I wrote this book, I didn’t read any other martial arts novels on Qidian. I only read dozens of chapters of Zhang Hengda’s Chivalrous World, but I didn’t read it after I heard that he was a eunuch again. Recently, it seems that the update has resumed. .Before, I thought that the protagonist of martial arts should be similar to what he wrote, more compassionate than normal people, and more rational than the Virgin. I don’t know if this is the right description.As a result, it was later discovered that the dark trend in martial arts is the mainstream, and the protagonist must be decisive, selfish and rational.I only found out about this after being scolded. After thinking about it for a long time, I decided that it would be better to make the protagonist's character more kind, but not the kind of mindless kindness. For now, let the protagonist be a rational and good person.

I want to portray every character in this book as flesh and blood, and I don’t know if I have achieved it. What I think is somewhat different from what I wrote, and what I write is also somewhat different from what readers read.Sometimes a plot or a detail can become a toxic point. I can't feel it when I write a book, but it is extremely toxic to some readers.

Most of the criticisms of my book are about the character of the protagonist. Compared with other novels, the previous one is indeed a bit of a saint. I was thinking that the protagonist was just a modern ordinary person who hadn’t even killed a chicken before time travel. It is impossible to time travel. After that, he became decisive without experiencing anything. I want the protagonist to grow up slowly after experiencing things. From the beginning, he always thought of capturing the enemy, and then directly killed those who threatened his life.I don’t know if the protagonist in the recent chapters satisfies the readers. When I was writing the section on the competition competition recently, I always wondered if the protagonist accidentally killed or maimed other contestants, would it ruin the lives of other contestants? , I want to construct a more real world, each character has his own past, life and emotions. During this period of writing, I thought that if the protagonist beat up an ordinary civilian who came to join in the fun, and the civilian had a decent life Yes, no worries about food and clothing, and a happy family.If the protagonist cripples him, the life of the contestant will also be ruined by the protagonist. This world is in a relatively primitive agricultural feudal society, and adult men are the most important labor force in the family. If he becomes disabled, his entire family It will also be destroyed, and there is no difference between the protagonist and the villains.Recently, I always feel that I think too much. It should be the same as in most other novels. When the actor dies, he dies. When the villain dies, he dies. Every character is like a machine. Appear.

Some people said that the protagonist's strength is improving too slowly. This is my first time writing a book. I don't have a good control over these. The protagonist's progress is too fast. I am afraid that I will collapse directly, so I slowed down a lot.And I think that in the world that the protagonist travels through, there are strong and weak people in every place, almost evenly distributed. I don’t want to write about how powerful he is when I meet a person in the early stage, but in the end Not even cannon fodder, so no matter where the protagonist goes, there will always be someone stronger than him. It doesn't mean that the bigger the city you go to, the stronger the people in it.If I were to write it again, I would definitely write from the beginning that the protagonist relies on magical martial arts to sling the opponent all the way, and breaks through and defeats the enemy at the most dangerous time. Although this kind of writing makes me feel uncomfortable, but people who like to read this kind of book most.

Some readers say that my writing skills are not good enough, and I can't refute these, but I think I have improved a little bit in these aspects compared to the beginning.

Compared with other books in the same period of classification, I feel that I have received less scolding. When I am often scolded, I go to the book review area of ​​other books to find comfort, especially those who recommend more than me.

Enough talking nonsense, it will be on the shelves tomorrow!
There will be an explosion tomorrow when it goes on the shelves. I suddenly received this news, and I didn’t prepare in advance. Can I pay back the four changes I owed before as an explosion on the shelves?
I don't pay much attention to the results of this book, but I will finish writing this book and try to write it as well as possible.

It is impossible to make money from this book, so I will treat it as a hobby in the future, and I will make the book more relaxed and refreshing.How about farming happily?
I hope everyone can make a first order tomorrow, and I am very satisfied if the first order can break [-].

(End of this chapter)