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Chapter 188 Literary theory, difficult to become four
That night, someone stayed up late to read the entire book, and then couldn't wait to start speaking on the Internet.

A netizen named I am not a cowboy posted:
"I also agree with the comments of the four masters, this is a wonderful book! If this book was written decades ago, I am afraid that the three major masterpieces of our country will become the four great ones.

Then let's discuss whether Yinyue's new Fengshen Yanyi is qualified to be among the four great masterpieces! "

This sentence is too watery. Even in the previous life, the four great classics did not have a book of conferring gods. The nature of this book determines that it cannot be recognized by the orthodox, and can only be interpreted with a strange word.

However, a post by this person was immediately popular.

Because there are a lot of people watching the Romance of the Gods today, and after watching it, people continue to want to find topics about the Gods on the Internet, so everyone who saw this post responded immediately.

The No. [-] Strange Person in Ancient and Modern Times: "The New Fengshen Romance is certainly good, and Yinyue put her heart and soul into writing the book. I can't help but be amazed after reading it, but strictly speaking, this book is still not as good as the three great classics." Level, if you want to become one of the four great classics, there is a big gap.

Let's talk about the literariness of this book. If it wants to become a wonderful book alongside the three great masterpieces, literariness is essential.

King Zhou teased Nuwa, and Nuwa was so angry that she wanted to kill him, but King Zhou obviously couldn't die. The author couldn't think of a good way, so what should I do? He just said that King Zhou was not ready to die yet.

That is to say, fatalism, even catastrophe, is introduced, which is very speechless.

Well, I am quite interested in fatalism myself.

Let’s talk about breaking the Ten Jue Formation. The author wants to make the article contradictory and send a cannon fodder first every time. However, this is obviously unreasonable, so it can only be said that the cannon fodder’s fate should be like this.

Whenever there is something to explain in the book, it is called fate, which is like copying and pasting. The author can't continue writing, so he uses the way of heaven to explain.

Why did the characters in the book do this? It was God who did it. This is very unreasonable and illogical.

As a commercial novel, there is nothing wrong with writing like this, but when discussing literariness, writing like this is a bit inferior. "

The netizen Ancient and Modern No. [-] Stranger is indeed right, but he also overlooked one point. This book is a mythical novel, in which fatalism and the cycle of heaven are indispensable.

However, there is some truth in what he said. The reason why Jiang Zhe did not change this point is because the original author has already marked his own arguments in the first 28 chapters. Even if he has corrected some mistakes and omissions based on his own understanding, or said no Reasonable, but the first 28 chapters have already left an indelible impression on people, and Jiang Zhe had to continue writing the original author's argument.

There are several key reasons why Fengshen Yanyi in the previous life was not included in the first level of the four great classics. Group portrait novels do not have vivid descriptions of characters, which is also criticized.

There are also problems such as plagiarism of Journey to the West, a lot of similarities in the plot, even if Jiang Zhe revises it, he is a little powerless. This new Fengshen Romance can be written like it is now, Jiang Zhe has tried his best.

If it weren't for the system's subtle improvement of his writing skills and the influence of many skills, maybe he really could only copy the original work.

It's a pity that the system's work optimization function came a little late, otherwise he wouldn't have to work so hard, and he could get what he wanted by directly optimizing the work.

Feng Xiaoxiaoxi: "The number one strange person in ancient and modern times, you are too awesome. I only read the book to get a rough idea, but you even brought up the theory of fatalism. It's really amazing!"

User 2564378165334: "Looking at the book, what I read is a cool word. King Zhou can only say that the original author wrote it like that. The main thing is to read the continuation of Yinyue. It is really amazing. I suspect that this guy is learning. It’s about ancient history, and many of its historical descriptions are almost indistinguishable from those in history books, even if it’s a fairy tale novel, it still makes me feel like I’m reading a historical novel.”

Old Wang next door: "This book is based on the Song and Yuan history-telling story "Wu Wang's Ping Hua".

Drawing extensively from folklore, and taking advantage of myths and legends' ability to imagine and exaggerate, they give various characters unique appearances.

In fact, I find it quite interesting, especially the continuation of Yin Yue, which perfectly presents a mythical world, as if a battle to confer gods really happened in history.

Yang Ren can grow magical eyes in the palm of his hand after gouging out his eyes, Lei Zhenzi has fleshy wings under his side that can fly, and Nezha can turn into three heads and eight arms.

Immortal arts and Taoism are also mysterious and unpredictable, such as the methods of earth escape and water escape by Tu Xingsun, and Lu Ya's art of bowing to kill people, etc., all left a deep impression on me.

Moreover, such as Daji's insidious and cruel, Yang Jian's cunning and boldness, Wen Zhong's honesty and loyalty, Shen Gongbao's malicious provocation, etc., these characters' characteristics are also clear and clear, and they all have a certain personality.

Some plots are also quite tortuous and vivid. For example, in the section "Nezha Troubled the Sea", a seven-year-old Nezha played by the river, leading to an unexpected fight. Zha's character development process from naive and naughty to brave and fierce.

In addition, there are Huang Feihu's rebellion against Chaoge, Guangchengzi's three visits to Biyou Palace, etc., which are also very complicated and detailed descriptions. "

Erlang God here: "The upstairs is full of great gods. After reading the book, you even have such a good impression after reading it. I only have two words, which are beautiful."

Three Dozens of Bone Demons: "Let me tell you, it doesn't matter if it's a masterpiece or not, it's a good one anyway."

User 5201314: "If you want me to say, Yinyue is limited by the innate nature of this book, otherwise this guy might really write a great book, what a pity."

He said affectionately: "Feng Shen Yan Yi was originally written by the original author who wanted to compare it with Journey to the West. I heard that there are plagiarized content in the original work, but there is no such thing as Yinyue here. It can be seen that Yinyue really put a lot of effort into it. I have written this book, and I have read his other four books, all of them are good-looking, and the Trilogy of Shooting the Condors is even better than Fengshen!"

In the end, everyone was talking and it was confirmed that the new version of Fengshen Yanyi, even if it was written quite well by Jiang Zhexu, unfortunately, because of Xu Zhonglin's own reasons, it is difficult to make it into the list of famous works like Journey to the West.

This was also in Jiang Zhe's expectation. After all, he had known for a long time that Fengshen Yanyi was published as an ordinary work, and Jiang Zhe didn't expect its status to rise to a high level.

And Jiang Zhe is not without his trump card.

In this world, after the Ming Dynasty, there has been no court talk, so the great work "Dream of Red Mansions" has never appeared on the stage.

Even if this era is not clear, can Jiang Zhe not be written as a fictional background?
In other words, it is directly about the past events of the previous dynasty. As long as he does not write too much, many people will only see the interest of the story and want to see the characteristics of the times behind it, so let them study it carefully!
A Dream of Red Mansions is a truly literary book, and Jiang Zhe didn't plan to publish it so early, after all, he was too young.

Writing the Romance of the Gods can still be used for reference, and there are myths and legends to support the stories in it. After reading Fengshen, it is similar to reading a fairy tale novel.

But Dream of the Red Chamber is different.

It is definitely not a good time for Jiang Zhe now. If he waits until his reputation reaches everyone and is recognized by Chinese officials, it will be a matter of course for him to come up with Dream of Red Mansions.

This time will never be too long.

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(End of this chapter)