Full-time mage: I have a demon killing system

Chapter 186
Luo Fang continued shopping in the post bar.

Soon, Luo Fang saw another very interesting post.

This article actually went through the perspective of God, as if readers were complaining about the writing problems of certain novel authors.

These are some readers' impressions of the full-time mage after reading it. They think the storyline of the full-time mage is really good.

But it also has two big flaws.

First of all, the description of the full-time mage's writing is too inky, and secondly, the protagonist Mo Fan has no IQ, and has no personality charm except strength.

The protagonist is so aggressive, if it weren't for the plot, he would have almost lost sight of it.

I think that although the writing style is average, the words are very down-to-earth.

Maybe it's because the setting is very similar to the real world, unlike most fantasy, it is more in line with the ancient atmosphere.

So speaking and doing things look more substituting.

The author wants to describe the protagonist as a person who is a bit of a nerd but has courage and great wisdom.

Could it be that all the protagonists have to be like Tang San and Xiao Yan to be called writing?

Although Xiao Yan was cold-eyed when he was a child, and he was relatively indifferent in the early stage, he was actually very funny in the later stage.

Tang San's words were more similar to Lin Dong's.

Apart from his strong strength, none of the bar friends could find any advantages of Mo Fan.

Every time he goes to a place, he will be looked down upon inexplicably, and that kind of unreasonable targeting will give readers a pleasure of punching passers-by.

But it doesn't matter any more.

Women don't dare to push anyone, they just do it when they encounter things, they are reckless, relying on themselves as the protagonist, they can always win recklessly.

I have never given a friend a feeling: "Fuck, the protagonist has a good IQ."

Not being confused by Apas, and secretly putting trackers on the people in Xiayu, isn't this showing IQ?
The main reason is that there are too many words, so the plot is a bit ignored.

The most important thing is that the IQs of other books are spoken, and forced to do it!
Basically, the protagonist's IQ is online for a long time only when he encounters similar incidents such as the Black Vatican.

Of course, Mo Fan's IQ was indeed crushed by his mother-in-law.

Contacting the main line of the Black Vatican, Mo Fan still has growth.

He went from being an angry young man in Bo City who only knew the Mu family, to facing up to the difficulties of the Xu Zhaoting incident, and then to being put to death in the catastrophe of the ancient capital and then reborn.

In the end, Mo Fan turned the tide of the Beiyuan crisis at the last moment.

Even in the chapter of the Asian Magic Association, for the sake of all beings, they worked with the entire Intercontinental Magic Association.

At this moment, Mo Fan has been able to dedicate himself to love and morality regardless of his own safety.

This also shows that Mo Fan is indeed a righteous person.

If you don't go back, you don't go back.

Mo Fan has explained the righteousness and righteousness of friends to the fullest.

Half of them are describing that a person who fights in the field is better than a person who cultivates alone.

Everyone understands, is it necessary to explain more than half a chapter?
Friends complaining about this is simply making up numbers.

Yes, yes, the author has been explaining the plot, and if there are too many explanations, the reader will be annoyed.

In order to set off the awesomeness of the protagonist, the author has to make a lot of mistakes again and again, and then describe them in a wrong way.

After the face is slapped, I will use a long story to describe it. It feels very refreshing once or twice.But every time I do this more often, I feel that whether it is fighting or this kind of text that is deliberately looking for something cool, it is meaningless.

The overall story structure and plot of the novel are not bad, but unfortunately they are all ruined by the author's purposeful behavior to find something cool.

In terms of being a hunter and fighting the Black Vatican, IQ is always online.

More experience let him know what to do.

And from a character point of view, Mo Fan doesn't like mental work.

This really reflects that Mo Fan is a relatively reckless person, who only knows how to use his strength recklessly, but cannot solve many things dexterously.

At the same time, the writing style of full-time mages is relatively poor, and hydrology appears more frequently.

It is difficult for the protagonist to resonate. Every time there is a big battle, all kinds of foreshadowing before the battle, it is just a brushstroke when it comes to the duel, and there is no pleasure.

This kind of feeling is like the feeling of constipation in the middle and suddenly stops going up, which makes readers very uncomfortable.

To be reasonable, I am annoyed by the protagonist of the Virgin Mary who can do everything.

It’s good for Mo Fan to be unique, isn’t it?

The protagonist should also have his own shortcomings and look like an ordinary person.

In short, old book fans don't really buy into the perfect protagonist.

As for the writing description, the writing style of the full-time mage is indeed average.

But other readers, what kind of fairy books are you reading? Isn’t the writing style of online novels so ordinary?

You can call Uncle Luan only the plot, after all, he still handles some details rough.

Some netizens read UC's tweets, and more than 90.00% of netizens think that Quanfa is better than Dousi.

However, more than 90.00% of those netizens think that chaos is a water curse.

This shows that Uncle Luan, the author of the full-time mage, really likes the number of water words very much.

Friends thought for a while, isn't Luan the legendary holy-rank mage, when did he fall into the forbidden spell?

It seems that this also confirms the fact that Chaos is a big water monster.

In the eyes of many people, Quanfa is indeed much better-looking than Dousi.

The Douluo series has always been good, but later on, some thinking has solidified.

There is also the setting of Douluo. Basically, the protagonist has been in the world since he was 12 years old, and he has killed several people at the age of 14.

This is really exaggerated, thinking that it is a very absurd thing to put it in reality.

What are those 14-year-old friends doing?
Are they still watching cartoons and chatting about mobile games?
Killing, how is it possible.

So this point of Douluo made it seem that the Douluo Continent's folk customs are relatively sturdy, and it is indeed unimaginable to do such a super-superior thing so early.

Some netizens said that they were still watching cartoons at home when they were 14 years old.

Relatively speaking, the all-French protagonist starts from the first year of high school, that is, at the age of 15.

But there is very little content in high school, and the real start should be the graduation of the third year of high school, that is.

In this way, what the protagonist does makes a lot of sense.

Doupa is also better, Xiao Yan should have gone out to enter the rivers and lakes at the age of 16, and the killing time is almost here.

Anyway, compared to the group of 12-year-old kids in Douluo, it seems logical to think about killing people and falling in love all day long.

This also deeply reflects that the values ​​of Douluo Dalu should be precocious with other novels and even real life.

In fact, netizens think that it is enough to have an IQ in the protagonist group, why make the protagonist so perfect.

When he watched Force Fan fight, he enjoyed cursing.

This also shows that Mo Fan's mouth escape technique is really superb, and it can actually attract readers' interest in reading.

But the benevolent see benevolence, the wise see wisdom.

Sometimes this kind of frequency is too much, and my friends don't like it.

But it's okay when it's time to be smart.

The character of the protagonist, without strength and IQ, cannot support his style of doing things.

People in this country pay attention to the style of being humble, and at the same time have EQ and IQ, as well as benevolence, righteousness, propriety, wisdom and trustworthiness.

(End of this chapter)