The Necromancer in American Comics

Chapter 115
The new book lasted 57 days, and it is finally going to be on the shelves. Thanks to the book friends who have been giving me rewards and recommendations. Without you, I probably wouldn’t be able to keep going.

I would also like to thank my editor-in-charge, Lu Ming, if he hadn’t signed me, this book would probably have stopped writing [-] words ago.

Well, that's the end of the thank you, let's talk about the first volume.

Originally, after finishing the first volume, I had the idea of ​​posting a testimonial at the end of the cursive, but I thought it would be put on the shelf, so I gathered in the testimonial to say it together.

First of all, the first volume is barely written according to the outline, although there are some changes in the details, but in general, it still develops according to the context, which can be said to be the only plus point, [for me]

Then there are the shortcomings found in the first volume.

First of all, the initial character design was not well established, especially the Iron Man plot that everyone complained about. There was a problem in the outline, but I didn't find it in advance. It can be called the first large-scale persuasion in this book. The poisonous point of quitters.

Second, in the sixty-odd chapters of this book, in the part about hating, the character of Bonnie who appeared was very important in the outline at first, but in the later revision and deletion, I was asked to delete the role of this character. Reduced, when I wrote it at the time, I was holding the idea of ​​​​writing it out temporarily, maybe when it will be activated, but looking back now, it just feels awkward. PS: There are also some autistic factors that were sprayed by everyone during that time.

Thirdly, I don’t think many book lovers have noticed this, that is the chapter about the Blacks family in the seventy chapters. After writing it down in detail, the development of the whole plot is no longer compact, and the plot seems a bit boring...

Fourth, well, this is my own factor, because I happened to read Japanese translated light novels at that time, {light novels are all written as No.1} so in the 70-odd chapters, to the 80-odd chapters After a while, I also tried to use the third-person pronoun to write similar to No.1 pronoun, that is, the chapters where the protagonist's name is mentioned are not seen throughout the text.

Although the meaning is still the same, but it is quite different from the overall style of writing, and now I feel quite regretful.

Fifth, I am also very dissatisfied with the ending plot of the first volume. I did not write positively about the cooperation between the protagonist and the Witch Heart Demon, but wrote it at the end. I wanted to create a feeling of surprise.

But obviously, my writing style did not meet the standard, and the response was mediocre, and I also re-read it. Although it can be roughly explained, it also seems to be a forced explanation, and I need to be cautious in this way of writing in the future.

Sixth, it is about the writing style. Some words seem redundant, and some words seem to be unfinished.

But I didn’t do it on purpose. How should I put it, writing and reading novels are completely different things.

When writing, not only what is written, but also what is in the author's mind, but the reader can only see what the author has written.

It is also difficult for the author himself to read his novels from the standpoint of readers, unless he reads them again after a while.

But obviously, the characteristics of online novels, and authors who post codes every day, cannot do this. I can only say that on this point, I will try my best to correct it in the future.

Uh, the number of words written is thousands of words, and after a quick look, you can still read a novel with so many shortcomings, and you all have poison resistance to the full point!

But in any case, since you have read this, it means that this book still has a little bit of desire for you to read it. Then, seeing the selfless dedication of the author in the past two months, give me a first order. Not too much!
As an author, I also promise to provide you with a better reading experience in the future.

Well, speaking of which, it's time for every author to issue a declaration of a new release on the shelves at this time.

Let me explain here, when I wrote this testimonial, the author didn't even have a single chapter in his hand.

So, don't even think about putting the tenth and eighth chapters on the shelves.

Preliminary reservation, four chapters of the basic update will be released tomorrow! ! !

Then, let me take a look, the current collection is 10486, calculated according to the average subscription ratio of 20 to 1... The author of Pujie only has this expectation, please subscribe! ! ! ...The first order is based on 500, and every time you increase 100, a new chapter will be added! ! !
Then there is a reward plus a change, let’s just add a reward of [-] rewards, and add a change for a single reward of [-] rewards! [This is valid for a long time]

In the end, according to the usual practice, it is a monthly ticket, well, but that’s fine, the author still has a plan in mind, and things like monthly tickets are reserved for super newcomers and great gods from all walks of life. The single digit is too ugly, so I don’t make any changes.

Well, that's all, and, although I think it's completely impossible, I'll say it anyway.

No matter how much the average subscription is, or how much the reward is owed, don't expect the author to pay it off all at once.

Authors with handicapped hands can at most write one more chapter every day to pay off their debts. If there are too many, it is really impossible to get it out, but!I will definitely pay it back!

Finally, please subscribe! ! !Ask for a reward! ! !Please recommend! ! !

(End of this chapter)