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Chapter 147 Want to Give
Lin Pingfan's reaction is very real, and Lin Pingfan is not a fledgling, he also survived in this big environment, you don't think Lin Pingfan usually doesn't say it, but at the critical moment, Lin Pingfan still knows these things .

"So this can be regarded as blessings and misfortunes depend on each other, and misfortunes and blessings follow each other. Without these documents, we would not be able to create in such a clean environment. Although some of our hands and feet are restricted, it is obvious that the good is heavy and the bad is bad. , we are not saying that we must praise the good and the beautiful, but in this world and which one is good is always more than bad, you can't say that in this world there will be more dark side than bright side, during this period, We live in this world, we are alive, there is no war for no reason, no sudden violence, and we have not experienced too much of the dirtiest and messiest things in this world. We are lucky, and some unfortunate people live in this world , but in contrast to the people of our country, there is a tyrannical motherland that protects us, how can we still complain about it. "

Lin Pingfan's words made Jiang Bin and Li Shuqian deeply agree with them, and expressed their agreement with this relatively positive statement of the three views. Oh no, but it's much more comfortable than dancing around in the dark with no spotlights.

Lin Pingfan looked at Li Shuqian's script and said to Li Shuqian seriously: "To be honest, if you talk about the content of the script alone, there is no problem with the content, it's just the form of expression, do you want to use it? What, is it for praise, or for satire? If it’s a compliment, you’re almost ready. If it’s a satire, you’re even worse. Let me give you a suggestion. Of course it won’t work. In addition, you just listen to it first. How about it."

When Li Shuqian was told by Lin Pingfan, the arrogance in his heart also came up. This is the script he wrote after so many days of retreat. In fact, this can be regarded as his hard work. Although Li Shuqian You know, in just so many days, this script has not been polished or modified. This is just a simple first draft of the script. In the next few days, Li Shuqian will make modifications and add some plots, and even some of the The bright spots have to be reprocessed by Li Shuqian in a wave of art, so for what Lin Pingfan said, although Li Shuqian knows about it, but you say it so thoroughly, you are a bit of a fool.

"Okay, let's talk about it. You have to think it through before you say it. In case we don't have any ideas or suggestions for what you said, it will be a little embarrassing. So Smiley, let's choose which one we choose. , it is still necessary to be cautious.”

Lin Pingfan smiled and said, seemingly not hearing the dissatisfaction in Li Shuqian's words, "As for the protagonist of this story, we can first change this to a brother and sister. The theme here remains the same, and it is still the background of the earthquake. , but the main plot can also be changed to the brother and sister being buried in the ruins at the same time after an earthquake, and then their mother waited for the rescue team, and the rescue team could only make the choice to save her son for the time being, but these words But the daughter heard it, and the son came down smoothly. The mother did not dare to look for her daughter in the crowd, but the daughter was rescued by another person, but she lost an arm. Someone asked if her parents were there, and the girl said no. , then he was adopted, grew up, and a series of things happened, and then he recognized his family, and finally climaxed in the recognition of his family. "

Li Shuqian was dumbfounded when he heard this. Is this a story? As a screenwriter’s self-cultivation, Li Shuqian’s first concern was the heroism and bleakness of the text, but when Jiang Bin heard this, as a director, Jiang Bin The first thing to do is to pay attention to the images embodied in this story. After Jiang Bin listened to what Lin Pingfan said, there were already some people who couldn't see clearly in his mind, following Lin Pingfan's narration, they were interpreting this story. The story, especially the scene where the mother struggles with the son and the daughter and the moment when he recognizes the relative, the daughter's questioning, and the mother's crying, on this point, Jiang Bin has already thought about these scenes.

At this moment, I can only be dumbfounded to prove that the script of Lin Pingfan's story is really powerful. In fact, there are many such conflicts and foreshadowings in it, but just a few short sentences, Lin Pingfan has now proved Language has a sense of picture and feedback.

The reactions of Li Shuqian and Jiang Bin were within Lin Pingfan's expectation. Lin Pingfan is still very familiar with these reactions, because this is the memory of Lin Pingfan back then, and the hit movie "Tangshan Earthquake" was well received Of course, there may be some differences in the content of the script, which are some differences in Lin Pingfan's memory. These are just some minor details, which will not affect the rationality of the story in the slightest.

Just like what Li Shuqian thought before, his script is only a first draft, and it still needs to be polished. You should understand some unreasonable things. Screenwriters and screenwriters, you have to make your script reasonable, otherwise it will be obvious. Mistakes, you don’t even know, when it’s filmed, how do you let the audience watch the movie or TV series?

Jiang Bin said to Lin Pingfan: "If you change it like this, it will be like another script. The direction of the story and the main line have all changed. If this is not the one modified by Li Shuqian As for the script, I guess people will only regard it as two scripts, and some people even make a comparison, they are both about earthquakes, but the two stories are very different."

After Li Shuqian stopped, he just sighed, "Yeah, the difference is indeed too big, Xiaolin, I told the script before that you are a talented child, as reflected in the script of this painful disaster. Human nature and the connotation of your script are far beyond mine, and this is something that was accomplished in a short period of time. People are really dissatisfied. It seems that I have to let go of what I joked about you before in the script. It's on me."

Lin Pingfan didn't have much to say. He wanted to tell Li Shuqian about the difference. He didn't ask for it. He wanted to give this script to Li Shuqian. As for putting it on himself, Lin Pingfan actually I don't care, because to be honest, Lin Pingfan doesn't need such a script.

(End of this chapter)