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Chapter 77 Guan Xiaoheihu [Second update please subscribe]

In the dark surroundings, a desk lamp suddenly lit up.

I saw a large notebook and a signature pen on the mahogany desk.

Hao Huan was thinking, maybe this big book is the script of "Returning to the Soul Night", right?
And here...

He looked around!
Little black house?
Is this locking me in a small dark room for me to change the script?
Hao Huan found himself in a narrow room with no doors and windows and surrounded by black walls.

This scene is quite scary!
I thought it was a studio, but I didn't expect it to be a small dark room where not a single person could be seen except myself.

Perhaps, this means that the script must be revised before the on-set experience can be performed?
Then the set shoots according to the revised script content?At the end of the movie, if the system thinks there is no problem, it can pass the level.If it doesn't work, 200 million prodigal points will be deducted, and then continue to close the small black room to revise the script until the script is approved?

Hao Huan has a headache...

Fortunately, 4000 million yuan was transferred to Pamela before this, and the 4000 million worth of losers was obtained. Unexpectedly, this wave must be looking for a loan from the system again!

And things like scripts are not so easy to change!Moreover, judging from the system arrangement, he can only refine and perfect the plot of the script, and cannot make major revisions.

This is even more difficult!

After all, not everyone has the same style ideas!
Hao Huan pulled the chair and sat down. He took the signature pen on the script, opened the first page of the script and began to read the content of the script carefully.

After a while.

Hao Huan frowned!
How does the story style of this script feel similar to "Happy Ghost"?
It seems that they all belong to the nonsensical comedy style!
He also admires the idea of ​​incorporating a comedy style into a thriller and horror movie. I am afraid that few screenwriters and directors dare to try this kind of idea.

"Happy Ghost" is not a horror movie, but a pure comedy movie.

But "Return to Soul Night" is different!
This movie itself is a horror movie, but some of the storylines incorporate humorous and nonsensical plots.

After reading the script, Hao Huan felt a little bit at a loss.

Because comedy is not his style.He can try to refine and modify the content of the suspenseful and thrilling story, and try to improve the main line content of the script according to the requirements of the system.

But he is a bit stretched to refine and perfect the comedy plot, mainly because he doesn't know how to change it for the better.If it is deleted, I am afraid it will not pass the system's review. After all, comedy is also the main component of this movie.

What's more, the comedy plot occupies a lot of space in the movie script. If it has to be changed, it will really affect the whole thing.

Hao Huan recalled the set experience process of "Happy Ghost", to see if he could have a little inspiration, and perfect the comedy plot in the script of "Returning Soul Night" to be more humorous and exciting.

long time passed...

This time, Hao Huan didn't know how long he stayed in the small black room.

He took a pen and revised and revised the script, sometimes he was satisfied, and sometimes he shook his head and thought it was not possible.

After a long time, he put down his pen and sighed: "Let's try it first! After all, I don't know what the system's review standards are!"

Script submission, scene transition.

The small black room disappears, and the real set experience begins!

"Return to Soul Night" started filming.

Hao Huan watched the whole filming process on the spot, and was shocked by the system's amazing skills!

What the hell did these people do?
Could this be the scenes and characters intelligently generated by the system?

Otherwise, why would they make this movie according to their own refined and perfect script?
With all kinds of doubts and a hint of anticipation and apprehension, when the filming is finished and the filming is announced.

The system prompt sounded mercilessly: "This time the score is 81 points, the script modification and improvement failed, and 200 million prodigal points will be deducted, please continue to work hard."

The scene changed, and Hao Huan was imprisoned in the small black room again!
"A score of 81 is considered a failure, which means that the score of the script must be at least 90 to pass this special experience?"

Hao Huan frowned, so what was the score of the original script?Am I getting worse, or am I getting better?
He decided to spend 200 million yuan to make sure!
Submit the original script directly!
The movie started to be filmed step by step until it was finished, and then the system prompt came: "This time the score is 78 points, the script revision failed, and 200 million prodigal points will be deducted, please continue to work hard."

Ok!

The original script scored 78 points, and my revised script scored 82 points, which means that my revised and improved plot added 4 points to the script!
Although 200 million prodigal points were wasted, Hao Huan didn't feel distressed, because he was sure that he didn't change the script, and didn't change it to make it worse!

This news gave him the confidence to continue revising and perfecting the script!

"The revised script only has 82 points. Which plot is not rigorous enough, is it not perfect enough?"

Hao Huan looked at the script he revised with serious attention.

"Maybe we should make some changes here!"

Li's wife suddenly took a red dress and put it on before jumping off the building. This is a bit unreasonable, because she is going to kill people to silence her, so it is impossible to hide a red dress on her body!

Since what the system requires is to perfect the script, it is better to deal with this kind of place that will be complained about more rigorously.

"If it is changed here, then the details of the plot that will be drawn later will also be changed. In this way, the two characters of the Li family have to be further improved from the original setting."

According to the original script and the footage seen at the filming site, Hao Huan thought about it carefully. The two characters of Li and his wife did seem a bit awkward in the movie. Their appearance and the plot of forcing the security guard to jump off the building. Now thinking about it, Hao Huan felt Not very good indeed.

"If you say that, the security plot is not strict enough, and the supporting role Jiang Zhi seems to be a bit serious!"

Hao Huan frowned suddenly after revising for a while!This really affects the whole body!This section of the plot has been modified, it is indeed rigorous, and it has become a lot more thrilling and exciting, but the following plot is a bit off, so it has to be modified accordingly to match the previous plot!
"In this way, the plot of Mrs. Li accidentally falling from the building and Mrs. Li's attempt to commit suicide by jumping off the building will be difficult to arrange!"

three hours later.

Hao Huan finally finished changing the plot. Li Fu still accidentally fell to his death, and Li's wife still wanted to commit suicide by jumping off the building. Then she attempted suicide and wanted to shoot herself. In the end, the hero threw out a throwing knife to prevent her from committing suicide. The flying knife exploded her dog's head and successfully sent her on the road to hell.

This is the black humorous plot in the original script. Hao Huan knew that he could not delete this black humorous nonsensical plot, otherwise the movie would become a pure thriller movie without the cost of a comedy movie.

In this way, I am afraid that the script score given by the system will only be lower!

Therefore, he cannot substantially modify the script.I can only pick out some flaws from the original script, and then refine and improve it to make the story content more rigorous, so that when the movie is released, the audience will not be madly complaining about a certain plot.

And this is probably the system's review standard for his revised and improved script!
"Changed!"

The third submission of the revised script of "Return to Soul Night".

The film is shot mechanically again, but the shooting process is different every time, because the details of the content of the script change every time, so the details of the shooting will also change accordingly.

When the third time is finished!

The system prompts: "This time the score is 87 points. The script modification and improvement failed, and 200 million in prodigal value will be deducted. Please keep up the good work."

Hao Huan's face turned dark. He had stayed in the dark room for a long time this time!He knew the entire script by heart. He tried his best to improve and modify all the parts that he thought were not rigorous or exciting enough. But this time the script failed to pass the review!

87 points...

If 90 points can really pass, then I have to make the content of the script another three points more exciting.

"How long?"

Hao Huan muttered to himself.He submitted the script three times, except for the second time which was the original script, which means he has already revised the script twice in a small dark room.

For the first time, he spent at least two days perfecting the revision.

This time when the score of 87 was just announced, he didn't even eat or drink, and was locked in a small dark room to revise for nearly ten days!

Fortunately, this is experiencing system life.

Otherwise, if he did this in reality, Hao Huan felt that he might be driven crazy!

The worst failure is that if you fail once, the system will deduct 200 million prodigal points, and if you fail three times, you will directly deduct 600 million!

hemp bark...

The system is deliberately defrauding the worthless, right?
Why do I feel like I won't be allowed to leave the small black house until the 4000 million prodigal value is deducted?
Next, Hao Huan, who changed the script to the point where his hairline would move upward, submitted his fourth script.

After waiting on the set for the filming to finish, he nervously waited for the system's verdict!
"This time the score is 86 points. The revision and improvement of the script failed, and 200 million prodigal points will be deducted. Please continue to work hard."

"I call you the fairy board of the system!"

Hao Huan couldn't help cursing, the score for the third revision of the script was 87, but this time it was only 86!

So, the more I changed, the more I went back?
He found a problem, probably because he modified the nonsensical plot of black humor, so the score was low.

He calmed down and recalled the groups of shots he noticed during the filming on the set.

The thriller plot is already perfectly scripted, and there is nothing to say, so the next thing that can add points may only be the comedy plot.

If I perfect the comedy plot better, maybe this score can go up, and then I can leave this damn little black room!

Hao Huan decided to try again. Although black humor is not his style, and those funny and nonsensical plots are not his favorite style, but if you want to become a top director, you can't just limit yourself to one theme and one style!
Perhaps, this is the reason and advice that the system locked me in a small black room to change the script!

Suspense and thriller movies can also perfectly integrate comedy themes!In addition to comedy, other themes can also be integrated, such as science fiction, such as love!
Hao Huan thought of a movie called "The Love of Ghosts" that he had seen in the system mall earlier. This may be a suspenseful thriller movie that combines love themes.

But now, he wanted to successfully leave the small black room and get the script approved by the system.Then he can only perfectly integrate the theme of comedy with the theme of horror, so that the audience can be surprised and laugh!

Shouting in the front scared the baby to death, shouting in the back made the baby laugh to death!
Perhaps, this is the real success?
He took a deep breath, threw away all distracting thoughts, picked up a pen, and continued to revise and perfect the script.

This time, he had a clear direction.

Human beings are creatures with the strongest learning ability. Comedy may not be his field of expertise, but he can learn, think about what kind of plots people will laugh at, and think about the nonsensical humor in the original script. To amuse the audience.

I don't know how long he was locked in the small black room. Hao Huan submitted the script for the fifth time.

In the end, the system prompted: "This time the score is 89 points. The script modification and improvement failed. 200 million prodigal points will be deducted. Please continue to work hard."

"A little bit!"

Hao Huan continued to write furiously in the small black room!
Sixth script submission...

"This time the score is 90 points. The revision and improvement of the script failed, and 200 million prodigal points will be deducted. Please continue to work hard."

Being imprisoned in a small black room again, Hao Huan almost couldn't hold back his curse!
"I can't pass with a score of 90? Why don't you ask me to write a script with a score of 100?"

He's going crazy, how can he play like this? The 1200 million prodigal points are just gone, plus the 800 million prodigal points for unlocking "Returning Soul Night", this frankly costs a full 2000 million prodigal points!

"For the last time, if I can't pass with more than 90 points, I will be in a hurry!"

Hao Huan continued to rack his brains to perfect the script content of "Returning to the Soul Night".

He didn't even know how many days he had been locked up in the small black room, he only knew that now it felt like years.

A few days later, the script was submitted for the seventh time.

The film was shot on set for the seventh time according to the script.

Hao Huan was by the director's side, looking at the series of shots taken by the camera, and couldn't find any faults in the storyline.

When the original script was being filmed, he still had a lot to complain about.The plot is not rigorous, the characters have lower IQs, etc. These are the key points that lowered the script's rating. Now, these problems have been corrected. The last rating has reached 90 points. This time he feels it is better than the last time. , if he still can't pass the test, it can only be said that the system is cheating his prodigal value!
The time of on-set experience passed day by day, and finally ushered in the tense and desperate finale moment.

Immediately afterwards, the troublesome system prompt sounded: "The score this time is 93 points. The script has been successfully modified and the viewing permission for the script has been automatically unlocked."

Hao Huan gritted his teeth and said, "I have memorized this script by heart! Who cares about your viewing rights!"

Finally, there is no need to be locked in a small black room!

I can finally get out of this damn place!
Hao Huan was about to go crazy, but at this time, there was a knock on the door, and the voice of the little aunt came: "It's almost nine o'clock, and I haven't woken up yet! Hurry up and have breakfast, you went to be a thief last night, didn't you?" !"

Wow!
What a sweet and sweet aunt's voice!
Hao Huan woke up moved. After the long experience in the small dark room, he almost vomited after hearing the system's notification sound!
But there are great rewards in the little dark room!
"Return to Soul Night", a script with a score of 93!

A movie that combines horror and comedy!
Will it create a miracle if it is released in the Spring Festival next?
Thinking about it, Hao Huan can't wait to fly back to make this movie now!

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PS: The code words are too sleepy for a while, the second update is [-] words, and the third update may not be finished until around [-]:[-] in the morning, so don't wait for me, you can read it when you wake up tomorrow.

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