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Chapter 151 That feeling.

The document Fang Min sent to Su Jing was only 6 words long, so it only took Su Jing five or six minutes to read it.

Rubbing her face and dry eyes, Su Jing typed out a message.

"Since Lao Fang let me see it, I have to seriously evaluate it."

Su Jing suddenly felt a little tricky.

Fang Min seemed to ask Su Jing to evaluate, but in fact, if Su Jing didn't handle it well, it would be a bit dangerous.

Su Jing also knew that Fang Min wanted to ask for advice with an open mind, but no matter who the author was, no matter how much he wanted to ask for advice with an open mind, he would feel somewhat uncomfortable when faced with other people's corrections.

This has nothing to do with personality or morality. It's just a subconscious point in the heart. There are really too few people who really put aside all their arrogance to ask for advice.

But Su Jing didn't want to see Fang Min being hit by reality because of this strange psychological reason, so he had to tactfully bring up Fang Min's shortcomings.

If you are not careful, it is very likely that you will miss.

"Old Fang, I'm pointing this out in the most objective manner. In order to avoid unnecessary situations, I have to show you something first."

After Su Jing sent another message, he clicked on Writer's Assistant and came to the subscription details.

At present, the average subscription is more than 3 close to 12, and yesterday's subscription was more than [-].

The latest chapter has more than 7000 updates.

This data, in the entire starting point, is being serialized in the new book, not to mention the top five, but the top ten is a must.

But on the bestseller list, Su Jing's new book is actually number one.

One reason is the high follow-up subscription, and the other, the most important reason, is that Su Jing's daily update volume is really too large.

I took a screenshot of this picture, then returned to the author's information page, and took a screenshot again.

Then return to QQ.

First, Su Jing edited a message.

"Old Fang, I am very serious now, because I still hope that you can make some achievements at the starting point. The next thing I send is not to show off, but just to let you know that I am qualified to give you opinions."

Taking a deep breath, Su Jing sent out the two screenshots just now.

Only then did he begin to express his opinion.

"First of all, the title of the book is well obtained, it is more suitable for the starting point, and the name is also very interesting."

"Then it's about the content."

"The beginning is very good. If you are only writing for the first time, it means that your talent is scary. The arrangement of Shuang Dian is very reasonable, but Chapter 1 is still a little lacking."

"Maybe because you are just starting to write, so your writing skills will be immature, so Chapter 1, your sense of substitution is not very strong."

"This is very critical. The explosion of excitement is based on the sense of substitution. Without the sense of substitution, the whole article will look boring and tasteless, just like watching a middle school student write a narrative."

"Of course, Lao Fang, you haven't reached this level, but compared to your cool arrangement, your sense of substitution is relatively poor."

"You can explain more about the current situation of the protagonist. At the same time, you can focus a little more on the psychological description of the protagonist. It is best to arrange both resistance and comfort. This will be much better."

"In the second and third chapters, there were basically no major problems, but when it came to Chapter 4, your problems were exposed."

"After the first wave of refreshing points, you failed to grasp the rhythm, which made me look a little tired from the reader's perspective, so you should intersperse some small refreshing points in the middle, or arrange a slightly Bigger resistance."

"I haven't seen the later ones, so I can't give too much advice. At present, your problem is not very big, just pay attention."

After typing hundreds of words of advice in one breath, Su Jing's fingers were a little tired.

It was almost six o'clock in the morning, but it was still dark outside.

But to Su Jing's surprise, the phone suddenly vibrated!
"Ding ding dong dong..."

A special concern alert sounded, and Fang Min replied!
Su Jing quickly looked at the phone, only to realize that Fang Min only sent one message: "..."

A long ellipsis.

Su Jing knew that Fang Min needed to take it easy.

Apart from the fact that the subscription can surprise Fang Min, the most important surprise is actually the pseudonym "Lao Fang".

After all, Fang Min said just yesterday that her favorite author is Lao Fang.

It's like, one day you suddenly find out that a very good friend by your side is usually very ordinary, but he suddenly tells you that he is a big star!

Such a contrast is usually unbelievable.

Although Su Jing is unlikely to be a big star, the effect he brought is actually not much worse.

"Ding ding dong dong..."

The phone rang again with a voice of special concern.

"Su Jing, you...couldn't be the picture you found online."

After reading this sentence, Su Jing expressed his understanding.

This kind of thing, no matter who put it on, will be surprised, let alone Fang Min.

"Wait a minute, read the latest chapter of Lao Fang."

After speaking, Su Jing clicked on Writer's Assistant, clicked to create a new chapter, and edited a sentence.

"Do you believe it now?"

Click Send Now.

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Fang Min was wearing pajamas, sitting on the bed, holding the phone in his hand.

She kept the lights on, because since the incident in the third year of high school, she had to turn on the lights at night.

The light that was turned on clearly illuminated Fang Min's beauty, and at the same time illuminated the dark circles around her eyes.

It was an idea she had long ago to try web writing, otherwise she would not have attended any web writing training classes in her third year of high school.

But the real action is in the recent period.

Usually, she reads novels on the Internet to accumulate experience, and then reads the experiences posted by the authors who are crazy about the novels, as well as the various teaching posts in Fengkong.

Although many of them are relatively one-sided, it cannot be denied that those are really helpful for newcomers.

After reading those tutorials, Fang Min had a clear understanding of many passages in the novel.

Especially the most popular "Dou Po Analysis" in the tutorial, the analysis in it made Fang Min feel that it was in place.

Of course, Doupa is almost broken by analysis, but there are many methods in it that Tudou may not have thought of at the time, but the effect of those words and sentences is really very good.

So even though it was Fang Min's first attempt, he had reached a certain level.

Talent is one aspect, the key is that she can understand.

Otherwise, no matter how talented you are, you won't achieve much.

In the past few days, she has been busy writing articles on the Internet, but it was her first time to stay up until two o'clock last night.

After posting at two o'clock last night, she fell asleep directly, but woke up inexplicably this morning, and couldn't fall asleep anyway.

When she had no choice, she could only play with her mobile phone.

What surprised her was that Su Jing got up so early.

However, what surprised her even more was that Su Jing actually called him Lao Fang!

Compared to this news, Su Jing and Fang Min's pointers and suggestions seemed less important.

At this time, Fang Min's heart was turbulent, and there was a huge wave: he couldn't really be Lao Fang, could he?
At this time, Fang Min had a faint feeling in his heart that Su Jing might really be Lao Fang.

The tone is one reason, in fact, the most important thing is Su Jing's last sentence.

With a restless mind, Fang Min clicked on the starting point to read.

With slender and slender fingers, slide a few times on the screen to refresh the page.

soon.An update prompt pops up in the background.

The latest chapter of Laofang’s new book, untitled.

By this time, Fang Min had already believed in seven or eight points in his heart, but this kind of thing really wouldn't die until the Yellow River!
She opened Lao Fang's new book.

"Do you believe it now?"

When he actually saw this sentence, Fang Min finally believed it completely.

Then, there is that kind of magical psychology.

The most important of these is accidents.

What a surprise!
A boy who had been chasing after him for some years turned out to be the master of the starting point!

The kind with a monthly income of hundreds of thousands!

It really surprised and surprised Fang Min.

Immediately, Fang Min felt a strange feeling in his heart.

If you experience it carefully, you can find that it is a kind of sweetness.

Whether you like it or not, you have been pursued by a person for more than four years, and half of the time is left out by yourself.

There will be a sweet feeling no matter what.

Saying that I like the feeling of being loved by someone, is actually rather one-sided.

Because it is impossible to say that Fang Min has no feelings for Su Jing at all. What she didn't even notice was that even if the other party wasn't by her side, she was used to the fact that the other party was everywhere in her life. felt it.

Say good morning and good night every day, give blessings every year and holidays, post about his recent situation from time to time...etc.

All these gave Fang Min a feeling of habit.

After waiting for a long time to calm down the turbulent waves in his heart, Fang Min clicked on the QQ contact Su Jing, and typed a sentence on it with his slender fingers.

"I really don't know what to say."

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"I really don't know what to say."

Seeing this news, Su Jing also understood Fang Min's inner feelings at this moment.

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Temporary change, because I am short of money, so I will live on the subsistence allowance, and the NO.30 will not change.

(End of this chapter)