Daming: I have a showdown, my father-in-law is the emperor

Chapter 223 Official Tucao
Chen Fan originally planned to take a good stroll in the urban area.

After all, he hasn't been back for a long time, and he misses the prosperity of the Magic City.

But thinking of Erlong's warning, Chen Fan dismissed the idea.

Erlong said that although the negotiation is going smoothly now, it is still right to be careful.

be careful and live long!
Don't hang around outside when you have nothing to do, so as to avoid accidents, it is best to stay at home.

Moreover, the community has already arranged personnel to stand guard, and the safety is also guaranteed.

So, after thinking about it, Chen Fan decided to go home and just stay there.

Just like that, Chen Fan and the two bodyguards drove back to the community.

When Chen Fan came home, Zhao Jun was typing by the balcony of the living room!
Chen Fan quietly walked behind Zhao Jun, watching his crackling code words.

Zhao Jun was so serious about the code that he didn't notice that Chen Fan was behind him.

Chen Fan looked at it for a while, and finally heaved a heavy sigh!

"Stop writing, you are not fit to eat this bowl of rice!"

It stands to reason that Chen Fan, as Zhao Jun's best friend, should be encouraged, not punished.

But after Chen Fan finished reading Zhao Jun's novel last night, he almost died of poisoning.

After all, Chen Fan has been a bookworm for ten years, and he has read countless high-quality novels.

But after reading the novel written by his best friend, he didn't know how to evaluate it.

To paraphrase what a reader in the circle of book friends said, I am the reincarnation of Shennong. Since I read this book, the grass on my grave is now five feet high.

The key is that this comment has a lot of likes.

From this we can see how toxic the novel written by Zhao Jun is!

I don't know how many readers have been poisoned!

and so.

For the consideration of readers and friends, Chen Fan still suggests that Zhao Jun change careers!

He would starve to death sooner or later if he ate this bowl of rice.

Zhao Jun smiled awkwardly when he heard his friend's offensive words.

He also knew that he was not good at writing.

After he sent the novel to Chen Fan yesterday, he knew that there would be the current result.

He has long been immune to criticism.

Almost all the book friends scold him, and very few praise him, so he is very helpless!
but.

Even if he doesn't write well, he will finish the novel.

After all, this is his first time writing a novel, with a beginning and an end, giving himself an explanation and giving an explanation to the readers.

After finishing this novel, he also has writing experience.

If you open the next book, you can avoid many pitfalls, and it will no longer be as poisonous as this one.

"I'm only halfway through it! Wait till I finish it!"

A determined look flashed across Zhao Jun's face.

Chen Fan stared at Zhao Jun for a long time, then sighed:

"Why didn't I realize you were so stubborn before!"

In order to dispel Zhao Jun's idea of ​​writing a novel, Chen Fan gave Zhao Jun a good analysis.

"Look, there are a lot of comments in the book review section of your novels! They are all full of complaints, and I haven't seen a single positive comment!"

"What does this mean? It means that the novel you wrote is so bad that it poisoned the readers away."

Speaking of this, Zhao Jun was not happy, and retorted:

"Who said no readers praised me?"

As if afraid that Chen Fan would not believe it, Zhao Jun took out his mobile phone, opened the Qidian Reading app, and clicked on the details page of his novel.

Pointing to an elite post in the circle of book friends, proudly said:

"Look, this reader called Habai praised me, and I even added some essence to his post!"

Chen Fan frowned, and readers praised you?
impossible!

It's so badly written, how can any readers see it right?
It can only be said that the readers of the starting point are not all poisonous tongues, but some are kind!
When he was reading the novel last night, he didn't notice the essence post!

Chen Fan took the phone and looked at it carefully.

really.

On the main page of the novel, there is a post that has been marked red and refined!
It said, "Come on, the subject matter is quite novel, but it's not enough to watch, it's too short."

Chen Fan was a little surprised, he didn't expect that there are people who like such a toxic novel.

It can only be said that the anti-drug ability is too NB!
but.

Chen Fan quickly discovered something was wrong.

As we all know, there are three book circle posts displayed on the starting page of the novel.

Of course, if you are a reader who reads pirated copies on Biquge, you may not understand what Chen Fan means!

Chen Fan stretched out his thumb and swipe to the left, and found that the other two posts were all complaints.

The cause of death of Hua Tuo of Breaking Bad: The introduction has already made me mad.

This prosperous age is as you wish: I am the reincarnation of Shennong. Since I read this book, the grass on the grave is now five feet high.

Seeing this, Chen Fan couldn't understand.

"You are the author, can't you refine the readers' posts? Can't you find two more posts that praise you and refine them?"

Zhao Jun smiled awkwardly, he even suspected that Chen Fan was looking at him seriously.

"Only one of the posts in the book friend circle praised me, I improved him, and the rest are all complaining about me!"

Hearing this, Chen Fan was speechless.

He noticed that there were 84 posts from readers in the book circle.

result.

After looking around, I found a post that can be refined.

Chen Fan didn't know how to comfort Zhao Jun.

Looking at Zhao Jun was full of sympathy.

What a pity the author, who has rushed to such a situation, is still persevering in the code words, which is really courageous.

"When readers first posted these posts, you should have deleted the posts. Look, the posts in the book circle have been distorted, and they are all complaining about you."

Zhao Jun smiled bitterly and said:
"I think so too! But as you can see, 84 of the 83 posts are complaints. If I delete the post, there will be only one post left in the comment area, and the popularity will be even less."

After finishing speaking, Zhao Jun sighed and said helplessly:
"Black powder is also powder!"

Now, Chen Fan was completely speechless.

The best friends are already so humble, do you have to rely on these black fans to support your appearance?
Chen Fan let out a heavy breath.

Hey!
He reached out and patted Zhao Jun on the shoulder, cheering him on!
It was already so miserable, if Chen Fan hit him again, it would be a bit inhumane.

Chen Fan took a deep breath and decided to comfort his friend.

"You don't need to be discouraged, there are still many readers who like your novels. Look, there are more than 100 red hearts on the main page of the novel, which shows that there are still many readers who like your novels."

Speaking of this, Zhao Jun's expression was a little unnatural, and he said awkwardly:

"The more than 100 little red hearts were ordered by myself. I can order once a day. It has been 103 days since I wrote this novel. I ordered 103 little red hearts for the male lead and 97 little red hearts for the male supporting role."

Zhao Jun is also very helpless!
Readers only read books and don't order little hearts.

All he can do is to make a little red heart diligently every day.

Only in this way, the data will not be too ugly.

Chen Fan has been completely defeated by Zhao Jun, and he doesn't know what to say.

(End of this chapter)