There's something wrong with my love letter system

Chapter 21 Core Essentials
The wind curtain does not move, and the oriole speaks, sitting and watching the shadows of the flowers in the courtyard move.

Unknowingly, the sunlight has overflowed the balcony and poured onto one floor in the living room.

Lao Wang and the three students were looking at Tang Yimo holding their breath.

The sunlight from the floor reflected onto Tang Yimo's face, making her entire face seem to have a brightening filter added to it.

Looking at it, people can't help but be in awe.

"The reason why this "Education" is successful is precisely because it chooses an angle that is beyond everyone's expectations."

Tang Yimo's voice continued to echo in the living room.

"While this was a very strong-smelling essay, there was no doubt that it impressed the judges very much!"

"Clap~" sound.

Jin Xiaodong suddenly patted his thigh.

"I'm sure. In this preliminary competition, I will use shit as a problem to create. I have done a lot of research on this stuff!"

Except for Lao Wang's pale face, everyone laughed happily.

"People write shit, and you write shit, so there is no innovation. You'd better write something that has never been seen before or since, so that it can become a blockbuster and fly into the sky."

Jin Xiaodong rubbed his nose vigorously: "It's easy for you to say, but our cognitive range is so narrow, how can there be so many novel points to discover?!"

Tang Yimo nodded approvingly: "That's right, this is the hardest part! I have an immature idea, and I don't know if it's right?"

Lao Wang hurriedly moved his body forward, and urged impatiently: "It's okay, just say it."

Tang Yimo got up, went to the whiteboard, and wrote five words on the whiteboard:

【Associated thinking】

Seeing these five words, everyone's pupils shrank for a while, and they fell into deep thought.

"Still taking the "Education" article just now as an example, I will try to restore the author's thinking process now."

Tang Yimo wrote down the four words [virtue education] on the whiteboard, and drew a circle on it.

"It is not difficult to speculate that what the author got should be a composition topic about 'virtue education'."

"But 'virtue education' is too vague, he had to find a foothold, so he thought of two related materials."

Tang Yimo picked up a pen and extended two branches behind [Virtue Education], writing [Positive Material] and [Negative Material] respectively.

Afterwards, Tang Yimo ticked off [Negative material].

"Obviously, the author decided to start with negative material. Then, the next question to think about is, what are the unvirtuous things?"

Tang Yimo extended a few lines behind [Negative material], and wrote on the back respectively——

【littering】

【High-altitude parabolic】

【Smoking in public places】

【Poop shovel officers don't shovel shit】

……

"In the end, the author turned his attention to shit."

Tang Yimo ticked off the item [Poop shovelers don't shovel shit].

"It is not difficult to see from this that the author starts from the central theme, then slowly diverges outwards along the trajectory of relevance, and finally settles on a unique and novel point."

"When writing, see the big from the small, and push back to the central theme."

Tang Yimo put down his pen, patted the non-existent dust on his hands, and then looked at everyone inquiringly.

There is a solemn atmosphere in the air...

It seemed as if they had just listened to a speech by a certain scholar or expert, and everyone hadn't woken up from their contemplative state.

Lao Wang picked up a pen and "scratched" notes on the paper.

ashamed...

I'm really ashamed!

I have been engaged in Chinese teaching for 30 years, and no little girl has a thorough understanding of the essence of composition.

But he soon turned his shame into joy, just like Wu Mengda in "Shaolin Soccer", although he has no "golden right foot", but he can become the coach of the "golden right foot"!
Lao Wang put down his pen and slowly raised his hand...

"Papapa~", applauded.

"Hahaha... Very good, very good, student Yimo, you really taught us a lesson today. Don't mention them, even I, a Chinese teacher, have benefited a lot."

Although such a result had been expected, Tang Yimo's pink face still felt slightly hot when he heard Lao Wang utter such kind words with his own ears.

Oh hehehe, it's really embarrassing to praise others like this!
"Teacher Wang, you are too generous!"

Lao Wang originally wanted to say that he never said anything about awards, but he held back after thinking about it.

It would be bad if Tang Yimo's arrogance was bred and affected her performance in the game.

It's not too late to say the praises after Tang Yimo wins the laurels.

Damn, it's so sad not to praise her.

Throat itching...

cough cough~~~
"Teacher Wang, do you... have a cold?" Everyone asked with concern.

Lao Wang waved his hand, unscrewed the thermos cup, took a sip of wolfberry and chrysanthemum tea to moisten his throat, and then said:
"I'm fine, it's just that my throat is itchy all of a sudden. That, the way of thinking that Yimo said just now, have you all remembered it?"

Everyone nodded.

"After you go back today, you all practice hard with this way of thinking, and find more novel entry points for the composition competition."

Everyone buried their heads and solemnly recorded this task in their notebooks.

"Okay, let's invite Yan Junxi to share his experience with us."

Yan Junxi pushed the black-rimmed glasses on the bridge of his nose, glanced at Tang Yimo, and said:
"What Yimo just said was very good. It reminded me of Jin Yong's Dugu Nine Swords. Although there are many complicated sword moves in it, the essence of it is only a few simple words, which is 'to attack the enemy, one must defend' .”

"I have to say that Yimo is really strong, and she actually comprehended the essence of the composition so thoroughly. Originally, I had prepared a lot of composition skills, but now it seems that those are just skills and have not gone deep into the core."

"Hehe, no more." Tang Yimo smiled and waved his hands, his cheeks were smudged with a blush.

If she didn't get the 30% writing ability buff from the system, how could she get this point?

Yan Junxi sighed: "Oh, suddenly I don't want to talk about my skills, I always feel...a little low."

Lao Wang on the sofa wanted to go over and pat Yan Junxi on the shoulder, "Brother, I understand how you feel."

But held back.

The way to be a teacher is to give more encouragement.

"Junxi, how can you be so self-deprecating? A composition is a whole. If you compare it to a car, the novelty of the engine is important, but other parts such as the gearbox, chassis, and tires are also indispensable. ah."

"So, please continue to share your experience. Even if it is a small skill, if it is used well, it can bring a lot of extra points in the game."

After hearing what Lao Wang said, Yan Junxi felt relieved a lot, so he picked up a pen and wrote down a few key words on the whiteboard...

(End of this chapter)