Fast travel counterattack: black-bellied boss, please guide

Chapter 348 Go to hell with all the magic words! (31)

She corrected the wrong sentences and typos in it, and then carefully checked it several times from beginning to end. After confirming that every word was correct, she sent it to An Yu.

There was no reception there, so I guess I went to lunch.

Thinking of lunch, Yexi herself felt hungry. She tidied up and went out to the supermarket with her arms around her to buy some food, preparing to make some nutritious home-cooked meals for herself.

When she came back from the supermarket, An Yu had just received the documents. She thought that even if she was browsing, she would have to look at it for a while, so she plunged into the kitchen and made lunch first.

The two dishes were out of the pot and the rice was steamed. Ye Xi came out of the kitchen, but An Yu had already sent her a message.

An Yu: If you don’t pass, write some normal type, and you can use old sayings on campus.

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"I'll go! There's no comment at all?"

This result was somewhat unexpected for Ye Xi.

Although she fantasized that An Yu would directly accept her as an apprentice, she also thought that it would be impossible to succeed in the first attempt, but anyway... you should give her some evaluation!

Xia Weiwei: No comments?
An Yu: The language is naive, the logic is illogical, the conflict is not big, and the contradiction is not obvious.

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Somebody wants to vomit blood.

These four comments are worse than the no comments just now. What she worked so hard to write was just rejected?
Xia Weiwei: I stayed up until four o'clock in the morning to write this. Don't you have something pertinent here?
An Yu: Leaving aside the genre innovation, with this kind of beginning, readers will be removed from the bookshelf before turning the third page.

Xia Weiyi: ...But I think it's great!My friend also said it looks good, so why don't you say no?Do you want to go according to your preferences?

An Yu: Just because I am an editor, you are not.

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OK!

Ye Xi gritted his teeth and smiled.

Well, if you say no, you can’t, you are the editor and you are the biggest!
Xia Weiwei: What genre do you want me to write, and I will give you the manuscript tomorrow.

An Yu: As I said above, you can choose any of the four types. Give me the beginning at this time tomorrow. There are [-] characters, and you must not miss a single word.

Xia Weiwei: Yeah.

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Yexi started to write a new beginning after lunch.

She chose the ancient sayings from the four types mentioned by An Yu, and set the hero as a prince, and the heroine as a wealthy lady who was abandoned outside.

With the experience of last time, she paid great attention to setting up contradictions and conflicts in the first three chapters, and then described the scene as perfect as possible.

She started writing [-] words this time, and finished writing from noon to evening, which took more than five hours.

After typing, she was relieved. To be on the safe side, she asked Rou Tuantuan to read it for her first, and then corrected some of the minor problems, and then sent it to An Yu at noon the next day.

An Yu's attitude this time is much more relaxed than last time, but Ye Xi's current level is not even a little bit worse than Mu Xia's. How could someone as powerful as An Yu not be able to see it.

Xia Weiwei: Alright, now we can start the evaluation.

An Yu: There is no major problem, the plot is a bit old-fashioned, the characters are not prominent enough, and the contradictions at the beginning are not enough. Also, pay attention to the segmentation.

Xia Weiyi: How do you think the contradiction at the beginning is big enough?
An Yu: The rebirth of ancient words and the time travel of ancient words are both slaps in the face at the beginning. As long as the slaps are satisfying enough, readers will be satisfied.

Xia Weiwei: Slap in the face?But I don't like face slapping, I like the quiet and peaceful life, why can't it be set like this?
An Yu: Do you know why almost all of the ancient Chinese prose written by female fans start with a slap in the face?
(End of this chapter)