A middle school cartoonist

Yoshida, with a tangled look on his face, was standing in front of Makoto Takahashi's house, hesitating! It’s not that he’s hesitant about going in... If he’s hesitant about such a simple thing, Yoshida should resign as soon as possible and go back to his hometown to get married!

What really makes Yoshida tangled is how to convince Makoto Takahashi after reading the manga manuscript, so that a certain second-year manga artist can willingly change the content of the manga "CLANNAD" and change Nagisa Furukawa's death. fate...

Yes...it is to change the fate of Nagisa Furukawa's death in the manga "CLANNAD"! In other words, let the manipulator of the world line change this tragic world line!

Relying on Makoto Takahashi's previous unintentional spoilers and repeatedly observing the previous serial content of the comic "CLANNAD" during this period, Yoshida has roughly guessed that the next plot of the comic "CLANNAD" will definitely be very sad, and also It will definitely make readers burst into tears...

Although there have been a lot of deaths of female characters in Makoto Takahashi's comics before, such as Yuffie in "Rebellion", such as Kikyo in "Inuyasha", and several magical girls with tragic endings in "Madoka" ...But compared to Nagisa Furukawa in the manga "CLANNAD", the nature is completely different!

Platycodon died because Platycodon himself knew that as a resurrected undead, he should not indulge in the things that he should have been obsessed with when he was a living person... So when Platycodon realized that he could no longer love and be loved, he understood that he could no longer love and be loved. Only when he could no longer intervene between Kagome and InuYasha could Kikyo accept death, be willing to let his confused soul no longer be displaced, be willing to give up all persistence in living, and die peacefully and happily in InuYasha's arms. !

As for Yuffie in "Rebellion" and the cute girls in "Madoka", although it is equally difficult for readers to accept it, looking at it from another perspective, compared to the death of Kikyo, in a sense, It can be regarded as a kind of fate, which is what a certain middle-class cartoonist often says...the choice of Steins;Gate!

For example, Yuffie-sama in "Rebellion", although judging from the comics, it was Lelouch's joking order that led to all subsequent tragedies, but from the perspective of the original author, the real cause of Yuffie-sama's death is Perhaps it was because of his confrontation with Lelouch, who had the protagonist's aura, that he was forced to death by the [Destroying Enemy] effect attached to the protagonist's aura...

In the same way, take another example of the magical girls in "Madoka". Sayaka turned into a witch on the surface because of physical and mental injuries. Kyoko used "Travelling" plus "Big Bang" to deceive and yin people. The top-notch moves are taken away in one shot, but the truth is... Magical Girl Sayaka dies! Spoiler! As for Tomami Mami, who appeared as the leader, it was because she set too many death flags, even too frequently, to the point where even Makoto Takahashi, the [timeline observer], could not save her. ...So death and other things can be said to be natural!

But what about Nagisa Furukawa in "CLANNAD"?

Perhaps compared to several other female characters in the same work, Furukawa Nagisa has certain weaknesses in terms of body shape, appearance, and personality. She does not have Tomoyo's heaven-defying martial arts, or Kotomi's genius-like brain. He doesn't have the courage and violence to love or hate, but in Nagisa Furukawa's sickly body, there is a gentle heart that can heal all wounds!

The reader may choose to sympathize with Nagisa Furukawa because of her frailty, but when the reader truly understands Nagisa Furukawa through the comics, he realizes that the person who really needs sympathy should actually be himself! Furukawa Nagisa would be depressed because of his frailty, and would be sad to miss the graduation ceremony because of illness... However, Furukawa Nagisa never complained a word about this, and lived an enviably happy life surrounded by his family every day. life!

Of course, the reason why human beings always show sympathy and kindness to the weak is out of sincerity driven by moral conscience, or is it out of the hypocrisy and vanity of being a giver... I won’t go into it here. [Gaoqiao Honesty Philosophy] Theoretical classroom branch line!

So... Nagisa Furukawa, who lives in happiness, needs sympathy from others?

If sympathy is still acceptable, then death is an absolutely unacceptable event!

Obviously living in a happy family, obviously finally getting together with the one he loves, and even having the fruit of love... Makoto Takahashi actually planned to let Nagisa Furukawa die in the manga under such circumstances. !

Whether it's the evil taste of ghosts or the needs of the plot... For Yoshida, Takahashi Makoto's crazy behavior is absolutely unforgivable!

"This state of shrinking and looking around... As expected, my beloved cat, have you rebelled?" Yoshida, who was pacing in front of Makoto Takahashi's house, suddenly heard Makoto Takahashi's voice coming from behind. He hadn't come yet. As soon as I turned around, I felt my body was hit hard by an unknown object! "...It's me! I've captured one of the organization's minions, and now I'm requesting permission for execution... Nani? It's already this time, do you still need to conduct identity verification?"

"...Speaking of Cheng, why did you come back from the outside?" After using the [Advanced Wound Medicine], Yoshida got up from the ground with difficulty and looked at a certain middle-level cartoonist in a white coat who was talking on the phone with some confusion. , "At this time, you should stay at home and draw the comics of "CLANNAD"..."

"Mr. Yoshida, I'm very sorry!" Of course it couldn't be Makoto Takahashi who was so polite! Rina took off her sunglasses and apologized to Yoshida with an apologetic look on her face, "Originally, I thought Cheng-kun should finish the manga draft at home, but Cheng-kun said..."

"Witch, when we went out in disguise before, it wasn't for shopping or anything else. We were just strategically checking places and inserting eyes to conquer the human world... And how could such a thing be revealed at will?" Makoto Takahashi said. Didn’t you already reveal this yourself?

"Yes, yes..." Although Rina's tone of voice was full of helplessness, the smile on her face was so dazzling with happiness!

"Hey! Sure enough, after being sealed, in addition to the decline in your own abilities, there were also some strange side effects... Sure enough, witch, you are still not used to the human world! Real man! Return to the barrier, and I will help you. [Demon healing]..." Although he didn't understand what Makoto Takahashi meant by "Repairing demons", looking at the serious look on Makoto Takahashi's face, Yoshida thought that Rina was feeling unwell. ] It’s an act like taking a rest... Ah, as expected, the function of [purity] is to completely [blaspheme]!

"Makoto-kun, really... please don't say such things!" Rina's crimson face at this moment should be the legendary shyness... right?

What exactly is the so-called [Magic Replenishment]... Yoshida said that he understood it instantly!

Takahashi Makoto and Rina's [X Couple X Couple] combo is activated!

Yoshida suffered a strong mental attack!

Outstanding effect!

Yoshida has fallen into chaos!

When Yoshida recovered from the chaos, he found that a certain loving couple who had been shining brightly before had entered the barrier... Obviously, as the editor in charge, as the target of attack, he Being completely and completely ignored!

"...So heterosexuals and whatever, should be tied to the stakes and burned a hundred times on the day of the bloody battle of the great [FFF team]!!!" I tried to interrupt several times but couldn't. During the conversation, Yoshida, who was destined to live a lonely life, expressed angrily!

After completing [Self-venting], a certain editor began to knock on the door hard... By the way, Yoshida, where is your moral integrity?

"Hey! What, it turns out to be you, my beloved cat!" Makoto Takahashi, who was guarding the door, had a look of disgust on his face... The reason for this situation was obvious. The person Takahashi Makoto saw when he opened the door was It's Yoshida... not someone who has repeatedly told and asked and threatened to come!

"Cheng, don't think that by pretending to be dumbfounded, you can get away with what happened before!" Yoshida really wanted to slap the guy in the white coat in front of him at this moment!

"Before?" Makoto Takahashi looked at Yoshida in confusion. After a moment of silence, he clasped his fists together in realization, "...I see! My beloved cat, you are thanking me for the actions I took to kill the innocent soul that resides in you. Don’t worry about it, there’s no need to worry about such trivial matters!”

"...Yes, is that so?" Yoshida had a strange look on his face. After staring at Makoto Takahashi for a long time, he suddenly switched to a look of panic, "Ah! Cheng, there is a cockroach on you!"

Speaking of Yoshida, I personally think that if you change the original surname that belongs to you to [Murong], this may improve the hit rate of the [Return on the other side] skill...

"Speaking of Cheng, have you finished your manga manuscript?" After finally being allowed to enter the barrier, Yoshida looked at Makoto Takahashi in surprise! After all, I see that Takahashi Makoto is still thinking about going shopping with Rina at this moment. It doesn’t look like he has piled up a huge amount of unfinished manga manuscripts! "If it is completed, according to yesterday's agreement...can I advance..."

"Now is not the time!" Makoto Takahashi put his hands in his white coat and looked at Yoshida expressionlessly!

"Eh? But, but before, Cheng, you..." Seeing Takahashi Cheng suddenly switch to [One-eyed Facial Paralysis] mode, Yoshida felt that it was difficult to continue the conversation, and sighed feebly, "Okay! Then when will it happen? Only then can I see it?”

"You will see it when you are supposed to see it! Even if you don't want to see it, you will see it!"

"Why does it feel like the way you spoke today, Cheng, makes me want to whip you so much?"

"That's because your heart hasn't calmed down yet!"

"..." Yoshida, who has never read Master Gu's novels, said that he no longer knows how to continue communicating with Makoto Takahashi at this moment!

However, this predicament is only a temporary phenomenon!

Yoshida, who did not obtain any useful information from Takahashi Makoto, began to rummage through Takahashi Makoto's desk, trying to find the manga manuscript hidden by Takahashi Makoto, but...

"Speaking of Cheng..." Yoshida looked at Makoto Takahashi doubtfully, "I don't want to rush you. After all, I also know that cartoonists need inspiration and time to create comics... Are you sure that all your manga manuscripts have been completed? Really? Although with Cheng’s speed in completing the manga, you can definitely finish it before the deadline, but it’s better to finish it earlier, right?”

"Here it comes!" Ignoring Yoshida's suspicious question, Takahashi Makoto hurried to the door the moment the knock on the door rang! "You were one minute later than the agreed time... Did you encounter interference from organized spies on the way?"

"Hug, I'm sorry! There was a traffic jam when I came here..." The weak voice sounded familiar, but it was completely blocked by Makoto Takahashi, so Yoshida didn't immediately figure out who was coming!

"Traffic jam? Huh! That's just an appearance! In fact, it's the organization's interference...forget it!" Makoto Takahashi turned sideways and let the people outside the door come in, "Since you are already here, let's get started! I But I’ve been waiting for a long time!”

"Eh? Mr. Jinghe?" After finally seeing the person clearly, Yoshida was confused, "Aren't you..."

"I asked Liuzi to come... My beloved cat, do you have any opinions?" Makoto Takahashi took off a white coat from the hanger and threw it to Jinghe River, and said forcefully, "Even if there is someone at this moment I’m not allowed to express any opinions, my companion cat! Because next time... it’s the real cartoonist time!”

"It's time to start, Teacher Phoenix Academy!" After nodding to Yoshida, Jinghe put on his white coat and sat down at his usual working position, preparing to enter assistant mode!

"Before that, Ryuko, have you forgotten what you should say?" Makoto Takahashi, who was also preparing to enter cartoonist mode, did not start drawing immediately, but looked at Shizuka River seriously...

After hearing what Makoto Takahashi said, Jinghe's body trembled, and his somewhat unnatural eyes wandered between Takahashi Makoto and Yoshida. Finally, under Makoto Takahashi's cold snort, he seemed to accept his fate and deeply Take a deep breath and then...

"Burn! My little universe...burn!"

"Liar, you're lying, right? Say this...this..." Yoshida, whose mouth kept twitching, saw a cartoonist in a white coat and an assistant in a white coat, and they entered with enthusiasm. into the working mode of cartoonist and assistant! "This...really works?"

I finally caught up with what I said before. I was delayed by some things in the past two days. I am extremely sorry to say that, dear readers~meow~