A middle school cartoonist

Chapter 452: Observing the comics of Yajo Mumengye (Part 2)

In a world full of school idols, [singing a song when disagreeing] is a behavior that everyone can understand, just like in the Dragon Ball world, [exploding clothes and transforming into battle when disagreeing] and so on... In the world of cartoonists, this behavior has a new way of spreading, that is, the combination of [reading comics when disagreeing] and [serializing multiple works when disagreeing] exclusive to a certain middle school cartoonist!

However, for Yashiro Mumenye, it is only at the level of [reading comics when disagreeing]...

When I first read this comic, Lan Dai didn't think it was that exciting, because apart from the opening chapter where Misaka Mikoto and Shirai Kuroko used superpowers, the content afterwards was no different from ordinary school comics, such as girls going shopping together after class, buying things, and eating sweets together... The plot of the first half of this comic is basically based on the little things that the girls experienced in their lives to show the different characteristics of the girls!

If the comics had continued in this style, then this comic would at most be just a daily comic under the guise of [Superpower Academy]... So when the [Bank Robbery] incident appeared in the comics, Lan Dai changed her previous careless attitude and observed the comics seriously!

Shirai Kuroko, who has the ability of [Space Movement], showed her strong strength as a member of the Discipline Committee and easily solved the two robbers; Hatsuharu, who looked weak, contacted the guard team as soon as possible and also supported Shirai Kuroko as a member of the Discipline Committee; and Saten Ruiko, who did not have any superpowers, did not feel afraid of this sudden incident, but helped the tour guide to find the missing children...

The superpower battle between Shirai Kuroko and the bank robbers, perhaps because Shirai Kuroko's ability was too domineering, was not described in many chapters in the comics... This disappointed Lan Dai! However, after Lan Dai finished reading the following plot, he realized that the previous content was just a foreshadowing for Misaka Mikoto!

"Kuroko, what follows is my personal behavior..." After seeing Saten Ruiko being kicked by a bank robber in order to save a child who was almost taken hostage, before Shirai Kuroko took any action, Misaka Mikoto ignored Shirai Kuroko's warning and intervened in the battle between the ability users with an angry face!

Misaka Mikoto, with lightning flashing all over her body, faced the robbers who were driving towards her in a desperate manner, and just threw the game coins in her hand up... and when the game coins thrown high fell, Misaka Mikoto used electricity to drive them, and turned them into a beam of light, directly hitting the oncoming car driven by the robbers...

"...The pride of Tokiwadai, the invincible electric princess!"

No matter how surprised the trapped robbers were, no matter how proud Shirai Kuroko was, and no matter how violent the explosion was after using a [A Certain Scientific Railgun]... The page of the comic where Misaka Mikoto used [A Certain Scientific Railgun] made Lan Dai feel extremely shocked!

“Let’s not talk about the comic by Cheng and the others. Jinghe’s “Zhan” is really great!” After putting down the comic manuscript, Lan Dai looked at his good friend with a serious face, “And the style of this comic feels very similar to our comic… According to the words of editor Hattori, it is also a comic of [evil ways]!”

“Indeed! When I first read it, I thought Tatsumi would take the noble lady on an escape journey… I didn’t expect there would be such a turn later!” The yellow-haired man with glasses pushed his glasses, and his tone revealed admiration, “It starts with [the kingly way] comics, and then turns to [evil ways] comics! It seems that the evaluation given by the editor of [the manga artist who is better at evil ways comics than Yashiro Mumeha] is really true…”

“Hey, Akito, didn’t you say that as a cartoonist, you must first be confident in your own comics?” Lan Dai felt a little resentful about the evaluation given by his good friend, “Although I also think Jinghe’s comics are great, ours are not bad either…”

“It’s not like that, the most Great! A comic can start with [Royal Way] and then reasonably turn to [Heretical Way] in the middle... Although I am a little unwilling, I have to admit that even I can't do this! "Looking at his good friend's astonished expression, the yellow-haired man with glasses took off his glasses and wiped them gently, and continued to speak in a comforting tone, "But as I said just now, there was indeed a gap between us and Jinghe-kun in the past, but now... If it's just a competition of [Heretical Way] comics, I am confident that I can compete with Acheng or Nizuma-kun!"

"… ...Akito, I take back what I said before! You are not unconfident, but overconfident, right? "Lan Dai complained to his friend unhappily, "Leaving aside the plot, there is a certain gap between my handling of comics and Cheng and Eiji..."

"But at least I am not as bad as I was a few years ago, right?" The mean-spirited man with yellow hair and glasses used a finishing blow on his good friend... This is one of the special ways for friends to improve each other's favorability, and people who don't have this talent can't learn it!

"Uh..." After a moment of awkward silence for his good friend's amazing finishing blow, Lan Dai decisively chose to use his amazing skill of changing the topic, "Speaking of Akito, why did you ask me to finish reading Cheng's comic today?"

"Of course it's because this comic by [Makoto Shinkai] can solve the shortcomings in our comics... at least I think so!" The man with yellow-haired glasses was very careful in choosing his words when he spoke, so as to be able to explain his own opinions. Thoughts, but also take into account the hearts of good gay friends... In a sense, Mr. Huang-haired glasses, you are really lucky!

"What's the flaw in our comics?" Lan Dai looked at his good friend in surprise and asked suspiciously, "So... what is that flaw? It really is a gap in the plot, right?"

"Well, in terms of plot... it's not right!" The yellow-haired glasses man, who had his birth point distorted by his good friend, reacted very quickly. He immediately used the magical manipulation of [pushing glasses] to cover up his embarrassment, and changed his words without changing his expression, " The flaws I mentioned were the portrayal of female characters in our comics at that time!”

"Is the heroine poorly portrayed?" Recalling the heroines in my previous comics, it seemed that they were basically designed in the image of the seiyuu sister... Lan Dai instantly became weak and turned his head away, muttering in a low voice. He said, "This, this is something that can't be helped! Because in order to complete the comic manuscript, we stay at home most of the time and don't have too many social activities at all..."

"The best, I'm not just talking about the heroine, but also the female characters that appear in the comics!" The yellow-haired glasses man interrupted the weak speech of his good friend very forcefully, and then took out an issue of the weekly "Shounen" from the bookshelf Jumk", start to give examples of good gay friends! "Just like the previous weekly series "Madoka", that comic was completely dominated by female characters, but each character has its own characteristics, which is easy for readers to distinguish... However, among our comics "The male characters are already pretty good, but in terms of female characters, compared to other cartoonists, I personally feel there is still a certain gap, let alone Cheng or Eiji!"

"This... seems to be..."

"To give a simple example, due to the lack of experience in shaping female characters, even if I wrote a plot similar to "A Certain Scientific Railgun Kai", the comic we completed would most likely not be able to even the editorial department. Even the serialization meeting cannot be passed!" The yellow-haired glasses man pointed to the comic in the newly released monthly magazine and continued to analyze to his good friend, "But the best, you have also read this comic, whether it is Soft Girl Chuchun or The optimistic, cheerful and courageous Ruizi, or the girl Kuroko with a variety of attributes... Every female character that appears in the comics is memorable! Misaka Mikoto’s electric shock from the manga heroine!”

"Indeed, after reading this comic again, I discovered that the portrayal of female characters in our comics is still far behind!" Only by truly realizing one's own shortcomings can progress and improvement be achieved... This may be one of the reasons why Ajou Mumenha has become a popular cartoonist!

"And the style of this comic..." Mr. Huang Mao and Glasses seemed to be at a loss for words. After pondering for a long time, he finally said, "I think it is very different from the previous styles of Acheng and the others! Tsk, how should I put it? What about the last page of the comic..."

"Obviously it just knocked up a speeding car, but it demonstrated the power of that [railgun] to its fullest... It made me feel as if the power of that [railgun] could penetrate the sky!" After listening to his good friend mentioning the last page of the comic, Lan Dai naturally remembered the previous page of the comic that shocked him so much, and said something that made his good friend stunned, "Well... that's an exaggeration. That’s how it should be!”

Although Lan Dai has been working hard to improve his painting skills through serialization over the years; although through the training of serialization over the years, Lan Dai's painting skills have improved significantly compared to when he debuted; although Lan Dai has once Several times, I felt that the gap between Eiji Shinzuma and Makoto Takahashi was gradually narrowing... But it was not until today, after reading the last page of the comic, that Lan Dai realized that while he was making progress, Eiji Shinzuma Be it Takahashi Makoto, they are also making progress!

"Supreme, you... do you also feel this way?" The yellow-haired glasses man sighed helplessly, and complained helplessly, "This is just the content of the first episode, and you create such a scene... …Speaking of which, Cheng and Eiji, are those two monsters?”

"Monster...?" Classmate Landai whispered...

As for those two people, maybe they are... so-called monsters...

But precisely because of this...

It is precisely because when facing powerful monsters that I can better understand my shortcomings and understand where I am lacking...

"Hey, Qiu Ren, now that you've finished reading the comic, you should think carefully about the next plot of our comic!" Lan Dai picked up the brush on the table, with a bright smile on his face, "Remember to paint the next chapter of our comic!" Make up for the time you spent reading comics!”

"Hey!" Spreading out the notebook where he wrote the comic plot, the man with yellow-haired glasses twirled his pen and agreed calmly...

"I want to draw a better comic draft today..." Lan Dai clenched the brush in his hand, "I feel that this mood is stronger than before... ten thousand times!"

Being unable to defeat monsters is nothing to be ashamed of! But...

If you don’t even have the courage to face monsters, will you still have the courage to challenge or even defeat monsters in the future?

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