A middle school cartoonist

Takahashi Makoto's resentment towards Sorata comes from the name that determines the difference between him and Eiji Niizuma!

Why is Eiji Niizuma qualified to be called a teacher, while he has to be called an uncle, a popular cartoonist of similar age? At least add a modifier such as "Demon King" or "Devil God" before "Uncle"!

Therefore, the reason why Takahashi Makoto chose to tease Sorata in this way is naturally to retaliate against the simple boy's previous mispronunciation... Of course, it is not ruled out that all this by a certain middle school cartoonist is to get the so-called "pleasure" from Sorata!

Ignoring the fact that Sorata knelt on the ground and cried like a dog after enduring a mental attack, the satisfied Takahashi Makoto did not pick up the comic manuscript completed by Eiji Niizuma, but turned his attention to the girl Mashiro!

"Teacher Hououin...are you planning to start with Mashiro's comics?" Although there was no communication, Eiji Nizuma understood what Makoto Takahashi meant...Although he was a little depressed at the beginning, after considering Mashiro's painting talent, Eiji Nizuma's original depressed mood was instantly replaced by full of expectations, "Although it's a bit regrettable...but Mashiro's comics...I'm also looking forward to it!"

"Oh? King of Black Flame, are you also optimistic about Mashiro?" Makoto Takahashi put his finished comics on the table, and then took Mashiro's finished comics in front of him, and invited Eiji Nizuma to observe at the same time! "Should we say that [Devils think alike]... Hey, King of Black Flame, do you want to observe the world created by Mashiro together?"

"Of course!" Upon hearing this, Niizuma Eiji immediately sat down next to Takahashi Makoto, and while urging a certain chuunibyou cartoonist, he did not forget to talk to himself, "Just like Mr. Mashiro in the past, the look in Mashiro-chan's eyes is the look that only the protagonist of a comic book has..."

"The look of the protagonist of a comic book...?" Sorata, who had gradually come to his senses, was a little concerned about what Sorata Eiji called Mashiro, but after hearing what Sorata Eiji said, he immediately turned his gaze to Mashiro, "Uh... It seems that there is not much difference from before..."

"Huh? Mashiro's eyes are burning with a fiery fighting spirit..." In response to Sorata's doubts, Niizuma Eiji immediately roared! "Can't you see it?"

"Even though she is facing two demon gods, there is no confusion or hesitation in the eyes of Mashiro, nor is there any fear or dread..." Takahashi Makoto took over what Nizuma Eiji said and launched the crazy [Cognitive Inculcation] skill towards Kota, "What she has is just the spirit of not giving up and the determination to catch up urgently... Well, King of Black Flame, please forgive me! After all, Kota is just an ordinary person now, and his shallow knowledge is naturally forgivable!"

It is actually possible to detect such rich emotions from the expressionless eyes of Mashiro. Are cartoonists all monsters that are not human beings... Originally, Kota wanted to sigh like this, but when he saw Takahashi Makoto, who had just spoken seriously, shamelessly took out the annual ring cake and started to play [temptation] and [feeding] on Mashiro, Kota instantly felt sick!

"I'm sorry, I was wrong..." After noticing Takahashi Makoto's provocative gaze filled with [joy], the young boy Sorata decisively clasped his hands together and admitted his mistake...

Not only because he interrupted Takahashi Makoto and Nizuma Eiji's preparation to observe the comics completed by Mashiro, but more importantly... Sorata suddenly realized that the real mistake he made was to discuss so-called common sense with two abnormal cartoonists as a normal human!

Regarding the method of summoning heroic spirits, Takahashi Makoto had provided it to Nizuma Eiji and Mashiro before... But providing it is providing it, how to show it through comics, this is completely dependent on the cartoonist's own ability!

For example, long sections of summoning chanting lines that do not conform to language logic need to be filled in different scenes by the cartoonist... If all the text is concentrated in a certain draft, it will become a light novel with illustrations instead of a comic!

The scenes of summoning are switched from different angles. In each scene, the magician's movements and expressions have subtle changes, and there are also mysterious magic circles interspersed in them...

From the calmness at the beginning, to the excitement when chanting the spell, and then to the change of the magician's expression after summoning the Heroic Spirit...

Although it is just the plot of the magician summoning the Heroic Spirit...but it must be said that the control of the drawing by Mashiro girl has indeed reached the level that makes Nizuma Eiji and Takahashi Makoto amazed!

From quiet to fast, from calm to excitement, from unknown to expectation and even astonishment...In the comics completed by Mashiro girl, the entire ceremony of summoning the Heroic Spirit is fully described with her imagination!

In particular, the rhythm shown by Mashiro girl in the comics in just a few pages through the storyboards of the drawings made Takahashi Makoto and Nizuma Eiji, who are observers, breathe faster as the rhythm of the magician chanting in the comics speeds up!

"...It's amazing, it's really amazing!" Makoto Takahashi put down the drawing, stared at Mashiro Girl, and praised him unabashedly, "Mashiro Girl, you are actually able to do this..."

"It's really interesting to say!" Eiji Niizuma, who was observing the manga draft with Makoto Takahashi, also had a gleam of surprise in his eyes, "Although I already knew the subsequent development of the manga because of the spoilers from the Phoenix Academy teacher. However, after reading the manga you completed, Mashiro-chan, I still had the idea to continue reading... From this point of view alone, the manga you completed, Mashiro-chan, is enough to be serialized in a weekly magazine. explain!"

"Where is the part that needs to be added...?"

The Mashiro girl did not feel complacent because of the comments of the two cartoonists. Instead, she stared at the two people who had just read the manga manuscript with a serious face... Although she usually seems a bit stupid in daily life, as long as it involves comics , but the white girl has a perception that is close to [intuition]!

"Well... although the plot of summoning the heroic spirits is very exciting, the ritual of summoning the heroic spirits is very rhythmic, and the painting skills are also quite good..." Eiji Niizuma pondered for a moment, then raised his head and looked at the Mashiro girl seriously, saying one word He said seriously, "But according to the plot of the entire comic, the scene is too monotonous...or it is too simple!"

"Monotonous? Simple?" The Mashiro girl tilted her head and pondered for a moment, her doubtful eyes wandering back and forth between Takahashi Makoto and Shinzuma Eiji, "Didn't the white coat ask to draw the plot of the summoning of heroic spirits? I have already completed it... "

"You have indeed completed it, but you have only drawn the entire process of summoning a heroic spirit..." Makoto Takahashi turned the manga manuscript completed by Mashiro Shoujo to the end and said in a very flat tone, "If it is just a single Summoning Heroic Spirits, Mashiro Maiden, the scene you described is better than mine... But haven’t I said it before? The so-called [Holy Grail War] is a battle between seven Masters and seven Heroic Spirit Servants. !”

"..." The Mashiro girl seemed to have realized the mistake she had made, so she did not defend herself!

"In other words, in this manga, the protagonist is not a fixed character, but seven masters and seven heroic servants!" Eiji Niizuma looked at the silent girl Mashiro, Immediately, he added seriously, "Although the seven masters and the seven heroic servants will be prioritized depending on the frequency of appearances and the length of time... But if Mashiro-chan, you are completely biased towards a certain master. If you use it with other heroic spirit followers, it will drag down the level of the entire comic and make it boring!"

Although Mashiro Shoujo wants to complain, the reason why she focuses on portraying a certain pair of Masters and Heroic Spirit Servants is because among all the characters and plots provided by a certain middle-class manga artist, that pair has the most information. The most detailed... However, after hearing the analysis given by Eiji Niizuma who had obtained the same information as herself, the Mashiro girl truly realized the gap between herself, who was regarded as a genius painter, and a truly popular manga artist. What exactly is it!

The gap in the way of thinking...and the degree of mastery of the plot of the entire comic!

According to the characters and plot given by Makoto Takahashi, the Mashiro girl herself only considered how to draw the scene when a certain heroic spirit was summoned... while Eiji Aizuma, who obtained the same information, based it on a certain middle school student. The information given by the cartoonist analyzed the character design and plot direction of the entire comic!

The gap between dots, lines and surfaces... is also the gap between myself and the popular weekly cartoonist!

"It seems that the King of Black Flame has also realized the key point of the entire manga!" Although Takahashi Makoto did not make any comments on Eiji Niizuma's analysis, such a statement confirmed Eiji Niizuma's analysis!

"Looking at the development of the manga from the perspectives of multiple characters..." Eiji Niizuma flashed a hint of wonder in his eyes, "No wonder the teacher from the Phoenix Academy regarded this manga as a masterpiece... Just based on this kind of alternative plot development This method is enough to leave a name in the history of comics!”

It’s no wonder that Eiji Niizuma would express such admiration... After all, according to the characters and plot provided by Makoto Takahashi, the way the plot of this comic unfolds is completely different from most comics serialized in the weekly "Shounen Jumk"!

Let’s not mention comics with a single character as the protagonist. Among comics with multiple protagonists, whether it is "Naruto" or "One Piece" that have been regarded as national comics, although there are multiple main characters, most of these characters are In the same camp, or in other words, they belong to hostile camps... But like this comic, seven masters and seven heroic spirits, because each master and heroic spirit follower has different personal wishes, but they are Belonging to multiple different camps, this is the first time in the history of the comics industry!

"Of course! King of Black Flame, I've said it before..." Makoto Takahashi showed a matter-of-fact expression in response to Eiji's praise of his new wife, "This manga... can be regarded as a [god] The existence of author!"

I originally planned to update yesterday, but because I was drinking with my family, it didn’t happen anymore (┬＿┬)

Dear readers, I am very sorry!