A perfect life starting from a light novel writer
Chapter 243 Comments
Also, why can’t I be with my dad when I have a boyfriend? Is there any necessary connection or conflict between my boyfriend and my dad?
Li Zeliang is relatively simple.
After all, comic novels, animations and other works are not realistic literature. Even two-dimensional works in the Dragon Kingdom plane will basically not have plots that abuse the master.
In addition, his preconceptions were too deep. From the first chapter of this comic to the present, he always thought that Natsuki and his father had a real father-daughter relationship.
But this can’t be blamed on Li Zeliang. There are also a lot of Initial D fans who have been tricked in the parallel world. I don’t know how many teenagers watched the plot of Natsuki and his father as a warm father-daughter daily drama when they were watching the Initial D animation. .
So Xia Yan also took this situation into consideration. In order to prevent his fans from misunderstanding, he added an extra scene to the comic scene.
This plot was originally about Xia Shu's relationship with Tu Hai warming up, and she felt that she was sorry for Tu Hai's underground relationship with her godfather, so she took the initiative to show off her cards and chose to break up with her godfather.
But in the Dragon Kingdom version of the plot, Xia Yan added a scene where Xia Shu's former godfather kissed Xia Shu for the last time when the two finally parted in the parking lot.
This scene.
He happened to be seen by Tu Hai who had just arrived at the parking lot.
A dozen or twenty meters away, the girl he liked was kissing a middle-aged rich man in his forties who drove a Mercedes-Benz in a place he didn't know.
Li Zeliang is as confused as Tu Hai in the comics.
What the hell is this?
But what Li Zeliang didn't expect was that the perspective of the comic storyboard shot changed again and came to Shiraishi who was studying in a villa.
In the animated version of Parallel World, the title D does not name who sent a note to the protagonist in this plot to report and expose Natsuki, but in the manga, it is directly stated.
Natsuki and Shiraishi were best friends in junior high school, and Natsuki's rich godfather is the father of his best friend Shiraishi.
In order to take revenge on Natsuki, a good friend who made her family a mess, Shiraishi exposed the affairs between Natsuki and his father to the boy Natsuki liked, Tu Hai.
In the Dragon Kingdom version of the comic, Xia Yan later presented this plot to the comic readers through Shiraishi's memories.
At this time, Li Zeliang's mouth opened wide.
The relationship between Xia Shu and her father is not that of father and daughter, but that of Xiao San and nurturing relationship?
Li Zeliang was completely stunned. This plot only shaped Li Zeliang's outlook on life, values, and worldview through less than ten pages of comic scenes.
This...what is this?
The main character is Tu Hai. He is so pitiful.
It's heartbreaking to kill someone!
The girl he likes has this kind of relationship with Uncle Benz behind his back.
And he saw it with his own eyes.
Who can withstand this?
The last shot of the comic in this chapter shows Tu Hai leaving the parking lot with angry eyes and driving directly to Akagi.
Originally, he was still hesitating whether to go to Akagi to compete with Keiichi, but now, there was an unquenchable anger in his heart.
The last shot of this chapter of the comic is of 86 disappearing into the street
Li Zeliang put down the Beizhou Comics Journal in despair.
Oh.
hehe
He has a very good memory and can recall most scenes from the first chapter of the comic to the present.
In the first chapter, Xia Shu was surprised when Tu Hai only made so little money after working at a gas station for a month.
And later on, every time Natsuki and Tu Hai go on a date, they have to go to their father's place.
It’s so uncomfortable! ! ! !
Li Zehao was so angry that he was disturbed by this plot.
Why, why do you want to arrange this plot?
Li Zeliang clicked on his Xia Yan fan group and the comment area of Xia Yan's creator account on the Jiuxiao Forum.
"Teacher Xia Yan, why are you doing this?"
"Natsuki, my Natsuki has been destroyed."
"I feel sorry for Tu Hai."
"In the two-dimensional world, the plot of Teacher Xia Yan's chapter is also quite explosive."
"I have been reading comics for more than 20 years, and this is the first time I have seen a comic author dare to create a plot where the heroine is the mistress."
"Actually, I think it's okay. Anyway, I read this comic to see the protagonist Tu Hai's cool car skills. I don't like Natsuki in the first place."
"Didn't Wu Lei say something in the early stages of this comic? Racing drivers don't need women. From Wu Lei to Chi Gu, to Zeng Zhi, and now to Tu Hai, there have always been characters in this comic who want to fall in love. All ended tragically.”
"I feel really uncomfortable, but it's hard to scold him. After all, he is Teacher Xia Yan. The plot is arranged like this, and I am worried that there will be foreshadowing later and I will be slapped in the face."
"What kind of foreshadowing can there be? Xia Shu even kissed that Mercedes-Benz man and why is he foreshadowing it?"
"My goddess Natsuki, why did it happen all of a sudden? I'm also looking forward to the romance between Natsuki and Tu Hai in this comic after they officially start dating."
"Stop giving out sweets. Tu Hai should cut off the relationship with Xia Shu as soon as possible. If Tu Hai can forgive Xia Shu, I will definitely not be able to read this comic anymore."
"Actually, you haven't figured out what this comic is about after reading Initial D? On the surface it depicts racing cars, but in fact it depicts the inner growth process of the protagonist Tu Hai. Teacher Xia Yan probably wants to focus on portraying Let’s take a look at the psychological growth of the protagonist Tu Hai.”
"To be honest, the author is Xia Yan. For the sake of Magic Circle and Sword Art Online, I can't hold back from complaining about him. If it were another cartoonist, for this plot, I would call the fan group to comment on the author. The area is broken.”
"You can bear it, but I can't. I think the plot of Teacher Xia Yan is a failure. It is the biggest plot mistake of Initial D. This plot is like a manga about gods falling from the altar.
"It's just a comic where the main character is raped. This is really ridiculous. No matter how powerful the racing plot is, it can't hide the fact that Tu Hai was raped."
"Well, is there a possibility that Xia Shu and her godfather met first, and then Tu Hai was the third person who intervened in her and her godfather's life. If you think about it carefully, the godfather uses money to support Xia Shu, but Xia Shu Shu took the opportunity to have a secret affair with Tu Hai, a young hottie. To be precise, the person who was cheated on should be the Mercedes-Benz male godfather, right? "
"That's right, isn't the godfather hurt the most in this relationship? Money has been spent, but the girl's heart is not with him, and she still wants to break up with him."
“Uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu.. (You guys, if you say that, I feel a little sorry for Natsuki's godfather."
"."
"It seems true. Strictly speaking, Tu Hai is the third party between godfather and Xia Shu."
"Also, the plot of this chapter is cut off at the right time. The protagonist Tu Hai has just seen the scene of a girl he likes kissing a Mercedes-Benz man and is about to go to Chicheng to compete. I am really worried about Tu Hai's mental state."
"Damn it, Teacher Xia Yan has broken the law again."
The plot of the latest chapter of Initial D has stirred up waves. Initial D comic fans are all confused after reading this plot.
But after all, Xia Yan's fan base is complex, including novel fans, comic fans, and animation fans. Although comic fans responded strongly, the trend of vigorously complaining and criticizing Xia Yan on a large scale has not yet formed.
Xia Yan spent the whole day at home paying attention to the comments on his creator account, and he breathed a sigh of relief when he saw that overall he was only lightly trolled.
Although comic fans all have opinions on the plot, when it comes to reader comments on the Internet, I haven’t seen many people threatening to give up the comic.
All I can say is that this plot does challenge the limits of readers' patience, but it hasn't really broken through yet.
"It seems... not bad." Mo Ran also looked at the comment area of her own creator account with a nervous expression tonight.
Basically no one complained about her, they just told her to work hard.
She is just a cute girl who is responsible for drawing, and fans are still very sensible towards her.
"I can only say that the comics fans in Dragon Kingdom are quite tolerant." Xia Yan said with a smile.
He also knew that after this plot was serialized, it would definitely be criticized by fans.
The plot between Natsuki and Mercedes-Benz Man is an extremely important plot of inner transformation and growth for the protagonist Tu Hai in the comic book Initial D.
After seeing the scene of a girl he likes being a mistress, he became angry and had a duel with Jing Yi. The 86 car exploded and was defeated.
This plot made Tu Hai finally understand what racing meant to him?
Xia Yan could delete this plot, but in that case, Xia Yan felt that it was a point-reducing choice.
after all
Even in the parallel world, so many Initial D fans regard Mercedes-Benz climbing a tree as a meme and circulate it, but few people don't watch Initial D because of the plot.
In other words, the reason why Initial D has maintained its popularity for so many years is largely due to Mercedes-Benz, Natsuki, 86, and the various funny sentences composed of these vocabulary words.
During the comic serialization process, this plot may be questioned by fans.
But what about a few years after Initial D was born in Dragon Kingdom, or even more than ten years later?
There is a high probability that this plot will become a meme just like the parallel world, making the work Initial D's popularity in the Dragon Kingdom never fade away.
Of course, Xia Yan will definitely not copy it directly. For example, in the original comic, the protagonist Tu Hai actually forgave Xia Shu later, and the two continued to date for a while, knowing that Xia Shu was preparing to leave Qiu Mingshan to pursue her ideal life. Stick to two people before they break up
Xia Yan himself couldn't accept this plot, let alone the comic fans of Dragon Kingdom.
Therefore, for the follow-up plot, Xia Yan's approach is based on the D in the movie version of the parallel world. After clearing up his inner confusion, the protagonist Tu Hai completely cuts off the relationship with Xia Shu and concentrates on racing.
The next day, inside Beizhou Comics Club, the operator received complaint calls from fans from all walks of life early in the morning. They complained that the editors of the comic club were doing nothing but doing nothing. Teacher Xia Yan let himself go and made fun of the plot. At this time, as a comic editor, he should Give him suggestions to put the brakes on decisively.
Because Xia Yan has moved them so many works in the past, most fans are very patient with Xia Yan and will not yell at him just because the plot of a comic book makes them uncomfortable.
But towards the staff of Beizhou Comics Club, the attitude is different.
Many people in the editorial and agent departments are having a headache today.
However, after the voting data for each work in this issue of the journal is released,
Initial D still ranks first among journals with 3,236,598 votes. Not only did the number of readers’ votes not drop, it even increased by tens of thousands of votes compared to the previous issue.
The editorial and agent departments all laughed out loud and felt relieved.
Data represents everything. If readers are really unhappy with the plot, it will be difficult to accept it. Then the number of votes for Initial D in this issue must have plummeted.
But soon, the smiles on their faces disappeared again, because they remembered the plot of the next chapter of Initial D comics.
The comic plot of Initial D is full of saucy routines not only in this chapter, but also in the next chapter.
Akina Mountain Racing God was defeated by a cylinder explosion on the Akagi Mountain Road!
"These fans may complain on the surface, but they still vote honestly."
"There is no way, just like my own son, even if I occasionally make you angry, can you really deny him?"
"Looking at the situation, this week's plot has been blurred. Next is the plot of the next week, the plot of ae86's defeat in Qiu Mingshan."
"Alas, Mr. Yuanqing is too willful. Our editorial department has communicated with him many times and told him that in the comic plot, Natsuki will be the mistress and the main character Tu Hai will fail. The risk is too great. There is no need for this at all. Creation. But Teacher Yuanqing ignored it!”
"I don't know if the defeat of 86 will lead to a wave of fans abandoning this work. In any case, the risk of this plot is too great, alas."
"Young people always have various ideas."
"The main reason is that he did not sign a long-term contract with our comic agency, so he can create as he pleases. How can those cartoonists with long-term contracts be like this? When creating plots, you must first respect the opinions of the comic agency, otherwise the contract will block you every minute."
"This is the privilege and self-confidence of a genius! Even if it is our comic club's current flagship work, which has increased the sales of our comic club's periodicals from 13 million to 14.5 million, Initial D, he can create whatever he wants, even if this It doesn’t matter that this plot may cause Initial D’s reputation to collapse.”
"After all, the current situation is that our comic club cannot do without him. As for Xia Yan, if he stops drawing comics, he can write novels. If he can't continue writing novels, he also has his own animation company. He has many retreats. Naturally, he can create his own works as he pleases. I like the comics. From this point of view, I quite envy this young man Xia Yan.”
The entire Dragon Kingdom comics world was agitated by the plot of the latest chapter of Initial D in just one day.
Discussions about the plot of Initial D are everywhere on major forums.
Comic fans suppressed their anger.
On the other side, after the matter fermented for a day, fans of Xia Yan's novels and animations got the news one after another.
The protagonist of the Initial D comic is Tu Hai.
This plot.
Delight fans of Sword Art Online novels.
Many people left happy messages on the official website of Beizhou Comics.
"Fortunately, the plot of our Sword Art Online novel is very stable. It is a true pure love novel. A moment of silence for the fans of Initial D comics."
As the author, Xia Yan, saw the speeches of these Sword Art Online fans, and he had a strange expression.
It's too early to be happy.
Not to mention other works, at least Initial D and Sword Art Online.
In the tauren realm, we must be brothers.
Although Xia Yan will greatly delete or downplay the plot of Sugou's pervert coveting Asuna when serializing the ALO chapter, trying to make readers less uncomfortable, but...
The protagonist's wife's soul has been imprisoned by a perverted man for several months. Even if Xia Yan doesn't describe anything, readers will definitely not have an easy time.
Now Sword Art Online fans are laughing at Initial D fans, but after a while, the situation may be reversed again.
I coded these before twelve o'clock, nearly 7,000 words. Let me see if I can code 8,000 words tomorrow, so I can make up for what I owed yesterday.
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