All Heavens Dragon System

"You and Sui Zi discussed how to correct this article. Xiaoping helped you fetch water or something. You are busy first. I will go if I have something to do. I will send it to me when it is corrected." Wanning political commissar left, leaving the ward to them.

"Sister Sui Zi, I ... I'll pour water for you first!" He Xiaoping took the pot and walked away, looking at Shen Long's eyes. In addition to gratitude, he added another worship.

"I don't know what's going on, I just ... I just want to remember something, I feel awkward to see it myself, and I don't know what the political commissar thinks." Shen Long said innocently.

"In fact, writing is not as difficult as you think. The so-called text is born from the heart, and it is an article that can write out your true ideas." Xiao Suizi does not see it that way. She also believes that Shen Long's text has a simple power. In fact, in the books she has read, there are many people's texts in this style.

For example, Zhao Shuli ’s writing is full of rustic, but Wang Zengqi ’s innocent and naive text gives a special aesthetic. This kind of writing is much more beautiful than those with gorgeous words; this kind of writing is either from someone who has never been exposed to literature. The hand of Chi Zi is either the hand of a master who has reached the realm of Fa Pu.

So she is not surprised that Shen Long can write such words. Perhaps only Liu Feng can write such words; she knew that Shen Long had been a writer of Zheng'er Ba Jing, and had won an international award. It is not uncommon to write this kind of article after being a soldier for many years. Of course, those crooked characters and frequent typos are intentional. Is this in line with Liu Feng's true cultural level?

"Your article is all about your heart, which is very good." Xiao Suizi said sincerely, "I can't change much, that is, to help you correct the typos, adjust the sentence slightly, and then help you The article was transcribed on the manuscript paper; oh, yes, and the political commissar told me just now that you just wrote us, why did n’t you write yourself? Let me add some of your deeds. "

"What is there to write about the things I did?" Shen Long smiled again, and scratched his head embarrassedly. "Besides, haven't the superiors already praised me?"

"If you don't do anything, our little things are even less." Xiao Suizi smiled. "What's more, you are a model model in our military area. If you don't have your name, the superior department will find it strange. What. "

Suddenly she came up with an idea, "If not, just follow your article in front, I will revise it for you, and finally add your deeds, and write in my tone, so that it can be more objective." She felt that Liu Feng's own deeds about Liu Feng were definitely inappropriate. It would be much better if he wrote in the tone of his comrade-in-arms.

"I don't understand. If you say it, just write it." Shen Long secretly gave Xiao Suizi a compliment. It is indeed a person who can eat on words in the future. This idea is indeed good.

After a while, He Xiaoping came back after fetching water, and poured water to Shen Long and Xiao Suizi slickly. This was also what she had learned from her mother since childhood, and Shen Long asked her about her situation in the army after she thanked her.

"Sister Shuwen and Sui Zi take care of me, and there are so many comrades in arms to help me progress. I think it's good." He Xiaoping smiled sincerely. Although she had just been here for a few days, she already felt that this and that made her Compared to a family that does not feel depressed all the time, this place is simply too happy.

Although I have encountered some problems these days, but with Hao Shuwen covered, He Xiaoping's life is still very good. Hao Shuwen has always been spicy, but no one has deliberately provoked He Xiaoping.

In fact, He Xiaoping ’s most grateful person was not embarrassed to say that she was not a fool. She thought about it when she rested at night. Without Shen Long ’s instructions, she would definitely not have had a good relationship with Hao Shuwen so soon after coming to the group. Of course, she would n’t be able to integrate here so smoothly. She had already taught the things between girls.

Xiao Suizi's writing is indeed good. He quickly helped Shen Long correct the article and added a few pieces of Liu Feng's deeds afterwards. Shen Long scratched his head after reading, "Oh, write a little too much, or not? Reduce again? "This is not a highlight of my own article. It preaches the entire group. If your length is too long, it will be a bit overwhelming.

But seeing Xiao Suizi remember so many things about Liu Feng, Shen Long is still very happy. It seems that not everyone takes Liu Feng to do those things for granted.

Xiao Suizi read it carefully and found this problem, "Hey, you really did too much work for the group before; otherwise, I cut down all the other deeds, leaving only you to help The disabled people are good at picking water. Most of the deeds of other comrades are internal. They also need a model of a military and civilian family. "

She is also a connoisseur, she knows what deeds have the most highlights and can get the approval of the higher level unit ~ www.wuxiaspot.com ~ So the article modified by Xiao Suizi was quickly approved by the Ning Political Commission, and Liu Feng and Xiao Sui Zi's name was submitted to the propaganda department of the military region.

He just went to Beijing to accept the commendation on behalf of the military region. The name Liu Feng still has an impression in the hearts of the staff of the propaganda department. In the case of the posterity, he has not been hot searched, and the big guy must remember him.

So as soon as they saw Liu Feng ’s name, the staff of the propaganda department quickly paid attention to it, and after reading the article carefully, they also felt good, so they quickly submitted the article to the leader for review, and the leader saw it. I'm glad that the army is a place that pays attention to collectives. Is the individual model better than the collective model of the unit?

So I immediately arranged for publication and published this article in the next issue of the newspaper. This time the head and political commissar would be happy. This is our collective honor.

After getting the newspaper, the head immediately summoned the whole group to study the article seriously, and even Shen Long was invited by the doctor. After reading the article, the head praised Shen Long and Xiao Suizi and decided to continue Promote this spirit and strive for a higher honor.

For example, if you do those things in the article, do you want to continue to do it in the future? The people in the audience are still a little dazed, not realizing the meaning in the Chief Executive ’s words, but Shen Long is secretly laughing in his heart, which means Let you learn from Liu Feng and do more good things in the future.

Oh, you used to just sit there and watch Liu Fengqian. Now it ’s your turn to do it. Shen Long does n’t believe it. After having this article, the head can still let them throw everything to Shen Long.