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Well, I received the feedback from the bosses yesterday.

From my point of view, the last 2k words are mainly to explain clearly the source and reasons of the subsequent fight, as well as the internal struggle form of the group branch, that is, why and how to fight. It can be regarded as a microcosm of the overall situation in the central area, and also Some details, such as the treatment that Gong enjoys, will be the treatment of the protagonist. In addition, combined with the steps of pulling out the superior body and the effect of the electrocardiogram, these will also be the next steps for Ji Jingqiu...

But for now, this narrative method seems a bit old, and everyone thinks it is watery. Then I will try to describe this kind of contradictory background in a more refined way.

To be honest, this is also my first long Gaowu novel. My writing method mainly comes from the books I have read before, and there is still too little research... Stand at attention and be scolded. I'll try my best to correct it.

If you have better opinions, you can put them in the chapters. This chapter will mention them. Of course, I may not necessarily use them for everyone. After all, I cannot satisfy everyone...

yours truly. (End of chapter)

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