Blue Prison: Legends Tour

Today is just one chapter of the main text. Please allow me to shamelessly use the usual nonsense to fill in the remaining part.

It's all nonsense, you can skip it

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Emm, in fact, many people should have seen that this book will probably end after the second stage of the new hero war.

In fact, it's not that I can't write further. How to transform after joining the national team, the first place in each position except Noah has not yet appeared, and there is also the strongest club that has been laid in the comics. In fact, these plots can support me to continue writing, but I think, forget it, stopping here should be the best result.

In fact, it is not a problem of data, because writing books is really not profitable these days, but there is an advantage, although the data is getting worse and worse, I have already reached the bottom, and there is really no room for decline, so except for the time when I was opening the book, I was very anxious as a newbie, and I cried about the bad data, but later I really didn’t care about the data; there is no rule for adding more chapters from gifts; there is no request for gifts or urging for more chapters, and I haven’t even opened any fan groups or other communication channels.

At least I can say with confidence that until now, I still write books for interest, at least money is not the main reason for me to continue writing, that’s enough.

As for the ending, it's mainly due to my personal reasons. First, after leaving the original work and starting the original stage, I personally think that my writing rhythm is basically completely messed up, which leads to a problem. Sometimes when I get excited, I will waste a lot of words in a stage that seems unnecessary in the later review (such as the trial training stage. In fact, I personally feel that the joint trial training can be deleted and the corresponding plot can be put in the actual combat). Then I feel that it is too watery and I am afraid of being scolded, so I rush to end this stage, making many small chapters anticlimactic. This is probably the disadvantage of new authors. The rhythm is really not well written.

Another thing is that I gradually have no enthusiasm for writing, because as I said, I just wrote out of interest at the beginning. You can probably see from the way I updated randomly in the first month that the updates during the signing stage of the book signing, which is the most needed to attract fans, are only one day a day.

So the more I write, the more I feel that writing a book is like a job. It's really painful to force myself to write 4,000 words every day. So when I write about a section that I'm not interested in, I will be very perfunctory, which leads to the uneven quality of the whole book. There may be chapters where I am very interested and inspired, and the quality is higher, and the plots that don't feel good will be very tedious.

And the most important point is that there is actually nothing to write. On the one hand, I personally think that Blue Prison itself is mainly an alternative sports show, so it is obvious that the number of comments soared when Shen Yi was scolding people, hahaha.

However, now the characters in the original work have actually been scolded by Shen Yi, and I personally hope that these characters will improve after being awakened by Shen Yi, and I don't want to shape the characters into pure clowns and idiots.

For example, I can completely follow some of the current public opinion and use the two controversial characters, Mikage Reiou and Nagi Makoto, as counterexamples, and use their dependence as the starting point to criticize them all the time, but I still feel that I don't want to shape a character into a real clown.

So I followed the rhythm of the original work, and criticized them once in the early stage and the new hero war stage, and completely solved the problem in the new hero war stage. For this reason, even for someone like Igarashi Kurumi, I want to write out his shining points while criticizing him. By the way, the comics seem to use Igarashi Kurumi as well. I feel that I am one step ahead of the original author, and I am a little proud.

For example, in some chapters, like when Shenyi looked down at Rin and said you are so weak, and when he scolded the passerby in the ghost catching stage at the beginning, when I wrote these plots, I couldn't help but sigh when I wrote my own book, wow, I can't be a genius. But after everyone was scolded by Shen Yi, and I didn't want to scold the same person again, so the inexplicably weird plot had no explosive points, which resulted in nothing to write about later, especially after the last Lao Ba was scolded, there was no one to scold...

As for those national team players who rarely appeared and even original characters, I actually had some ideas at the beginning, such as Adam provoking Shen Yi, saying some standard sports anime racial discrimination, some yellow monkey,Then he was knocked down by God and knelt down. His dark eyes looked down at the mortal who knelt down and begged for forgiveness in a miserable state like a god of destruction, and whispered indifferently: "You raised your head too high, you scumbag." Such plots.

But to be honest, I really think it's meaningless to scold for the sake of scolding, because the original book didn't fully describe their personalities, so I deliberately put characters like Ji Dada Silva and Leonardo who are easy to argue in the loser group and were directly killed by Noah.

And I personally don't like this kind of plot. I personally think that the best thing about the original Blue Prison is that it doesn't deliberately create conflicts and do clichés such as maliciously hurting people or bribing referees, which are often seen in sports themes. Even the betrayer at the beginning was a variant of the game rules that completely followed the rules of the game at that time. It didn't break the rules of the Blue Prison, so it was added.

This shows that one of the good things about Blue Prison is that football is football, and football should be used to speak on the field, and no boring little actions should be used (I suddenly thought of the comic plot later, won’t it hit me in the face)

Even if the president who was completely portrayed as a clown did not bribe the referee, even if the author had a certain intention to sell homosexuality, when it came to the field, no matter how popular the group was, it had to lose. So, I also wanted to inherit this point of the original work, so I actually deliberately ignored these watery plots, but without these plots, Shenyi really had nothing to conflict with these international players.

After all, the current Shenyi is at the level of Noah. Is it necessary to make Shenyi like the male protagonist in the brainless and cool novel for the sake of watery plots, who is obviously very strong but is provoked by the soldiers on the roadside? Thinking about it makes me sick, so I gave up continuing the subsequent plot with these people as the core.

On the other hand, I guess you can all see that the ending I set at the beginning is not here. As I said before, the U20 game, and then coming to China to form a new national team and enter the professional league, there are plenty of spaces for me to write. At the beginning, I just wanted to finish all these plots. And to be honest, writing like this, even a newbie like me, it is probably easy to write 1 million words, and there seem to be many functions to unlock in Tomato Million.

But, the plot has come to this point, defeating Noah, and then what? Is it necessary to continue when you are already the world's number one? Maybe it's a bit boastful to say this, but I personally think that, apart from the writing style, at least in terms of the plot arrangement, this book is still relatively unconventional. I feel that this book is not a clichéd streamlined system article, and Guangxian Shenyi is also a protagonist that everyone can remember.

But what if I continue to write? Like an ordinary football article, writing for several seasons, dozens of games in a season like a running account? Then list the data to show how powerful the protagonist is?

I think that would be a cliché. It can be said that continuing to write is just a waste of time. I hope that you can occasionally think of this man named Guangxian Shenyi, who is very strong, wins first, and likes to curse, in your leisure time after dinner. He is a little special fan fiction hero, rather than a cliché Long Aotian who is indistinguishable from the crowd.

So, let's just leave it like this. Shenyi was crowned the king and became the world's number one in the last game of the Blue Prison. What about the story after becoming the world's number one?

The Blue Prison is the beginning of the legendary journey, and the journey after that is left to the readers' free imagination. At the same time, it does not deviate from the original work. Since it is a fan fiction of the Blue Prison, the end of the story stops at the last stage of the Blue Prison, which is also a kind of romance.

Finally, even if I finish writing, I probably won't finish this book directly, because my author level is not high enough, and it seems that I can't add a side story to a finished book at will. So after the plot of Blue Prison is almost over, I will put this book there, and maybe occasionally I will come up to add a chapter or two of the side story when I think of it, or let Shenyi go to other sports animations to play.

(The current idea is to go to the world where the worldviews of Kuroko's Basketball and Slam Dunk are combined, and build an alien blue prison there, and then rank them like the NBA draft, haha, why does it feel a bit repetitive?) In short, it's possible. As for whether I will open a new book later, I'm not sure, it depends on the situation.

By the way, whether it is finished at the end of the month or not, I will take a long vacation to go back to my hometown during the National Day in October, and I don't care about whether I am fully present or not, and I can't do it even if I want to be fully present, because my hometown doesn't have that condition.

After all, I have been updating for several months without a break, so I'll take a few days off.