Cultivation: When you do things to the extreme
I sat there all night and thought about it all day
Many readers said that the first few chapters were too watery.
I thought about it all night, well...it is indeed a bit watery, but I can't figure out how to streamline it.
The further a book develops, the bigger the plot, the more settings there are, and the more "moisture" there will definitely be.
It's impossible for the protagonist to train hard for a long time, finally master the advanced skills, get the best equipment, and then go over to see the villain and solve it with one move without saying a word, right?
There must be some cause and effect, to show the effectiveness of the level and the significance of the equipment. Otherwise, what is the point of practicing?
Therefore, the "water" problem cannot be changed. I can only say that my personal writing style is like this. If some book friends can't accept it, then goodbye. I have no choice, and it will collapse in minutes.
Anyway, that’s it, I need to update today’s stuff and make up for yesterday’s stuff, so let’s start writing now.
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