Dad's comic life

"Teacher, is the storyboard of this work you gave me a bit... um..." Liu Yuxin was a little worried about offending Hao Ren, so she thought for a while and said politely: "Isn't it a bit satisfactory?"

In fact, this is an exaggeration to say that it is quite satisfactory. It should be said that it has no intention at all and is too cliché.

The storyboards in the first episode are almost all daily life. What about the magic of the magical girl that was promised?

There is also a little bit of magic element at the end,

But Liu Yuxin didn't dare to say it.

"I knew you would say that. This work will subvert the magical girl theme. You will know if you continue reading." Hao Ren smiled: "The plot of this comic does tend to be juvenile in the early stage, and the characters The edges and corners are not clear-cut, but the more so, the more it will explode in the later stages of the reversal!”

Did the teacher know?

Seeing Hao Ren's confident look, Liu Yuxin couldn't help but breathed a sigh of relief.

Since the teacher knew that the characters were younger and the characters were not clear-cut, but he still took it out so confidently, the follow-up must be as the teacher said, right?

So Feng Jialin continued to read.

The storyboard of the second episode is still quite satisfactory.

If it weren't for what Hao Ren said before, Liu Yuxin might not be able to stand it anymore.

Coming to the storyboard of the third episode, Liu Yuxin took a rough look at it. This is the last storyboard given so far. Since the teacher said that there will be surprises after reading it, there must be a big twist in this episode. .

But when watching the first half, Liu Yuxin still felt quite bored.

I'm afraid it's another narrative mode of fighting witches one episode at a time, right?

Watching her senior knock down the witch, Liu Yuxin sighed.

It was just as she thought, so where is the reversal?

Thinking like this, Liu Yuxin turned to the next page.

Then she saw a scene that she couldn't believe.

The head of the witch she thought had been knocked down actually began to swell, detach from her body, and transform into a monster with a human face.

As the bloody mouth opened.

The senior's head is gone.

"Fuck!!"

Seeing this scene, Liu Yuxin, who usually remained elegant in front of Hao Ren, finally couldn't help but blurt out something dirty and yelled "Fuck."

What is this special development?

Is she watching a horror movie?

Is this a magical girl-themed comic? This kind of work can actually kill people? And he died so miserably, with his head bitten off?

Is this the work that the teacher said would subvert the magical girl genre?

Not only did he subvert the subject matter, he also subverted her three views on the magical girl subject!

Seeing Liu Yuxin's shock at this moment, Hao Ren's face was filled with a smile: "How is it? It looks good, isn't it? Is it surprising? Is it unexpected? Is it exciting?"

"..." Liu Yuxin nodded stupidly.

Subconsciously he touched his neck.

So exciting.

"Teacher, the reversal is indeed good, but...if the first one or two chapters fail to attract the audience, the manga will easily be cut in half, right?"

"Indeed, this is true if it is applied to ordinary people." Hao Ren nodded, raising his head slightly, with a proud look on his face: "But the company belongs to my wife, and she doesn't want me to be beheaded. Who can behead me? "

"……"All right.

Liu Yuxin almost forgot about this matter.

"show me!"

At this time, Ma Tao and the others, who had been watching Liu Yuxin eagerly, couldn't wait to take the storyboard in Liu Yuxin's hand and start looking at it.

They were also quite interested in this work that Hao Ren said was a subversion of the magical girl genre.

Especially after seeing the shocked look on Liu Yuxin's face, their curiosity was greatly enhanced.

A moment later, three 'fuck' sounds came one after another.

The other three looked at Hao Ren.

In fact, the plot of the third episode of Puella Magi Madoka Magica is far from bloody. The reason why it shocked these people so much was because of the huge contrast.

After all, from the perspective of the painting style, fighting and the plot of the first two chapters, this work has the feeling that it is biased toward younger comics for children.

At first they thought it was a cartoon specially drawn by a teacher for their children.

So they didn't subconsciously think there was any darkness in this thing. The bloody scenes in the third episode told them the fact that magical girls' works can be drawn like this?

However, what will this work look like in the later stages?

What plot will they be curious about in the future?

Several of them were very curious.

However, they didn't look at the other character design. If they did, it would feel like they were spoiled.

"Teacher, you are so awesome!" Ma Tao looked at Hao Ren with admiration.

Speaking of which, the two of them are actually about the same age, but now Ma Tao admires Hao Ren more and more.

"Jicao, Wu Liu." Hao Ren waved his hand modestly, and then asked casually: "What do you think of your copy of "Ultraman Tiga"?"

"good!"

After hearing Hao Ren talk about the comic in his hand, Ma Tao suddenly became excited: "From the storyboards, the quality of this work is quite high, the rhythm of the story is also very good, and it is very novel! "

Every man has a heroic dream, and so does Ma Tao.

Ma Tao felt great when he saw the huge monster and the scene where Dagu, who transformed from a stone statue into a giant, fought with the monster.

"But, teacher, what does Ultraman mean?" Ma Tao suggested: "It feels a bit unclear. I think it can be called Salted Egg Superman or the Giant Mountain Super Power that you mentioned in your work, teacher. How about Ba?"

"It doesn't sound good. It's worse than Ultraman." Several other girls looked disgusted: "At least it sounds good to the ears. Your Super Power thing sounds like it's not worth reading anymore."

"The word Tiga means the sacred number 3 in Indonesian. As for Ultraman, it refers to ultraman, which is a variant of superman, which roughly means superman."

There is no way, who made this time and space already full of Su Po? So Hao Ren had no choice but to do the next best thing and continue to use the Ulu Drag Man.

"That's it!" After hearing the name, Ma Tao nodded thoughtfully, but then thought of one more thing: "But, teacher, I think this work is more suitable for special photography rather than painting. Into comics..."

…………

At the same time, Sun Jiali, who sent the little girl to learn dance, also returned home.

When passing the door of the room, he suddenly stopped. After about a minute, he continued to walk towards his room.