Dragon Ball Master Wu Tian

Some people say that water has been written recently.

First, a group of brothers in the group said, I will update a chapter and say it once, and I will update a chapter and say it once.

I don’t read book review sections much now.

But I couldn't help but look at it again tonight.

Others say water.

So I can't sleep.

Couldn't sleep all night.

Really water?

There are some things I don’t know whether I should say or not.

Because I don’t know how many readers can really read these words objectively and impartially.

…

There are some things that, as an author, you cannot actually admit by speaking out.

Not even if it's self-deprecating.

This is some experience and lessons I have summarized myself.

You can't just state the problems yourself that may not exist, because some readers actually didn't notice them at all and won't think anything of it.

And once you...whether it's sincere or self-deprecating, in short, once you point it out yourself, hey, he will understand, he will understand.

When I wrote my last book, The Seventh Generation, I had the audacity to laugh at myself in the chapters, saying, "Oh, it's really water."

I don't necessarily think so.

But the readers took it seriously and listened to it as soon as they heard it.

Eh~ He remembered it firmly.

From then on, no matter which chapter he read, he felt that it was watery. No matter how you wrote it, he felt that it was watery.

Sometimes you are so anxious that you want to smash the keyboard.

The development of events is nothing more than the cause, process, and result.

If you really want to keep these things concise and to the point, just two or three lines will be enough.

Then the two thousand words of this book are basically complete.

One more word and I lose.

Three-speed electric fan on live broadcast day.

…

Anyway, it was late at night and my mind wasn't very clear.

I don’t quite understand why Gan Mao writes such messy things.

Anyway, let’s talk from the bottom of my heart.

So far, I think that these recent chapters have been written with intention.

After one or two chapters, I feel quite satisfied.

The guy writes well.

Make your hair look pretty for a few seconds before sending it out.

I don’t think this is any different from the rhythms I wrote before.

Maybe a little nagging.

Maybe the so-called plot advancement is a bit slow.

But think about it carefully, in fact, the writing before was not that fast, right?

If you insist on saying that there is really any difference between the current plot and the past.

Maybe it’s the background of “demon invasion”.

Frankly speaking.

This paragraph was deliberately set up to imitate the fantasy articles on the main website.

This kind of scene has only appeared before when Wu Tian came back from the Demon Realm and was blocked in the Musen Ryu Gym.

In the original outline, this paragraph did not exist.

The original paragraph is not in the outline either.

Originally, Wu Tian came back from the universe peacefully and retired peacefully to the island. Well, it was the island where the spherical aircraft killed a demon warrior.

Originally, Wu Tian came back from the demon world peacefully and lived in seclusion in Wu Xianliu.

But when things came to a head, when the plot developed to this point, I couldn't help but make such an adjustment and add this paragraph.

Just to add a little bit of drama to the plot, to add a little bit of interest, to create a little bit of emotion.

Maybe I messed up.

Such a background has been created, but we still follow the same rhythm as before, step by step, and tell the story bit by bit, instead of immediately beating those demons to a pulp and destroying the points that should be stepped on. Trample it to pieces...

some type of.

Maybe it caused unpleasantness.

I really don't seem to be very good at grasping the rhythm of this kind of plot.

But I really mean it.

Hope this book is better.

Looks better.

Write two chapters every day...

There's a lot of pressure.

After all, the book did well.

The editor said not to feel pressure and write at your own pace. With such good results, you should be more motivated.

but……

I haven’t got the motivation yet (laughs), but the pressure is on me every day.

Every day when I open Word, I am afraid that this chapter will not be written well.

Often mired in self-doubt.

They all say that my book is incredible, that it is so awesome, that you are incredible... and so on.

But I know my own business.

In fact, there is not much in my mind and stomach.

Moreover, the original path of fandom is relatively wild, and it is not easy to write brilliantly.

In addition, the original work of Dragon Ball, which is full of loopholes and contradictions, is still framed by you like a big sieve. From time to time, one or two setting parties will come out to test the party. A pointer here, a lesson there, it is also very uncomfortable.

How can I write a full chapter on such a trivial matter?

When this kind of self-doubt becomes serious, it becomes...

With such a trivial matter, how many words can be written in this book?

Sometimes I feel very scared, not knowing what will happen in the future.

Maybe this is why some people think the content is watery.

I wanted to write out the plot I wanted to write in detail, but ended up with not much so-called practical information in one chapter.

Maybe I subconsciously want to write more.

Let this story stay with you longer.

I'm not so sure either.

…

The editor said that a chapter of 2,000 words, of course, no matter how you write it, some people will find it watery.

If you think about it carefully, it seems quite reasonable.

Maybe... it would be better to go back to the previous three thousand and one chapters?

I feel so tired thinking about it (tears).

…

This late-night text was also messy.

I don’t know if you have discovered it.

They are all short sentences.

One line.

Another line.

Maybe this way of writing will make it seem less nagging?

(laugh)

…

It can be regarded as a little self-review and reflection after five days on the shelves.

In the next chapters, I will try my best to adjust and think more about it.

Accept criticism and slowly improve.

After all, it all depends on your support.

Without you, I am nothing.

But of course, as you can see, I stayed up all night. I don’t know if I dozed off during the day or something, so maybe tomorrow, oh, today’s update will be later, I don’t know for sure, but probably it will be later.

Anyway... I will continue to write and write well.

Do my best to satisfy you.

Have fun with you.

(laugh)

above.

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July 13, 2016 5:08 am

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