Dragon Clan: Fujimaru-san is saving the world

This volume is finished!

As usual, I will give you some comments. I am definitely not writing it here because I can't write the code.

As I said before, I'm the kind of person who fantasizes about a famous scene and then devotes an entire volume to that scene.

If the second volume is Sakura Yabuki's fall, then the two most important scenes in my mind in the third volume are the embrace of Erika and Erika under the sunset, and the confrontation between Ritsuka and Ange in the windy mine car.

——But one thing to say, before writing this book, the better scene in my mind was "Eri, who lost control and went crazy for some reason, went on a killing spree in a densely populated urban area, and the trial plunged the world into hell. , the broken walls and ruins of the human hell, and Titsuka approached it step by step while protecting the civilians. Every time he took a step closer, he was stabbed by the judge. Finally, he came to Eri on the verge of death, hugged her gently, and dyed her with dye. The bloody hand touched her cheek and told her it was okay."

Tsk, what I said is boring, but the picture in my mind is still very touching.

Ah. But because when I was actually writing the book, I found that if I brought myself into Ritsuka, there would be too many contradictions in Herzog anyway, and it would be difficult not to notice this enemy and eradicate it, so there is no such plot. use.

Eventually, the overall tone of the third volume turned into a nonsensical and funny style.

Well, my failure.

Just scold me, I won’t delete the comments, so far I haven’t deleted a single comment (except for Oatmeal Brother)

I've always been happy to be criticized for plot and writing. I'm just rubbish, as long as I don't use bad words.

I only break my guard when the protagonist is evaluated as "no different from the male protagonist of a system novel", which is really hurtful.

My only serious love for the character is love.

Ah, I’m not saying that system novels don’t create protagonists, don’t talk nonsense! It’s just that I think that’s what other people mean when they scold me.

It's not good if the reviews for the third volume are not good. What can I do after I have written it? Although I enjoyed writing it, if I get scolded, I will continue to work hard.

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I believe everyone has seen the main battlefield in the fourth volume. I can’t guarantee whether it will be interesting or good. The most I can say is that I came up with an awesome reverse character-shaping plot.

Mainly about the character Chu Tianjiao.

First of all, I haven't watched Long Wu, but it is said that Duan Nan has a big forehead and a melancholy male god in Long Wu.

A mixed race who works outside the home, forgets he can't control his big brother and special boy. He relies on cheating to get married. After cheating, he doesn't let anyone enjoy much material life, while he just listens to small songs in the basement.

Hiss. Not even the last one can be perfect. The fifth part was specially written like this.

But first of all, I haven't seen Dragon Five, so I don't know if it's true or not, and secondly, it doesn't matter whether it's true or false.

This is a new world line, and the characters are not exactly the same. In fact, you should be able to see the slight differences.

At least, I want to change the character motivation. At least I want to make a character not too scumbag, but a little charming.

I think the original novel with a rounded plot that I came up with is pretty good.

Just like even if I was scolded for being poorly written in the third volume, at least I think the minecart battle scene was well written - ah? Written rubbish? If you don’t listen, I will act like an ostrich.

Anyway, let’s talk about the main characters first

Fujimaru Ritsuka.

Chu Zihang.

Lu Mingfei.

Xia Mi.

Appearing roles:

Eriyi

Uesugoshi

Mai Shutoku

potato chip girl

Boss (Lu Mingze)

Angers

Odin (laughing)

By the way, let’s put aside these trivial matters and let’s do a routine Amway session.

The book I recently read on cwm is called "The Evil Party's Road to Taming the Protagonist". It's so good that I haven't had such a book in a long time that I couldn't help but keep reading.

No, after all, after you start writing a novel, you can’t help but start to get distracted when reading other people’s books, and you don’t have much time to read, ugh.

Finally, I would like to ask you to recommend some sports anime fanfics (Kuroko’s Basketball and the like are fine, I want to watch Blue Prison recently) or simply recommend sports articles, giving priority to football articles. I can't find it myself.

In the past few years, the field of anime fandom has been in a stagnant state. They are all about mobile games, otherwise they are Tao Zi. I just want to watch a new hot-blooded fanfic. Is it easy for me? The only spell that is suitable for writing fanfics in the past few years has been banned.

Finally, Blue Prison is so suitable for writing fanfics and no one has written it yet, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh (Crying in the Storm)