Evening Bell Church

After reading yesterday's chapter, I felt a little confused and felt very uncomfortable. I didn't write a single word yesterday.

I have been writing these chapters very seriously recently, but some brothers still say that they are watery. I am not sure about the definition of watery now, and I am in self-doubt.

I read the latest chapter at least seven or eight times at night, but I still don't understand where the problem lies.

Some brothers said that I wrote too detailed and trivial, and gave a lot of unnecessary explanations to treat readers as idiots.

To be honest, I have encountered many situations before, and even this book has appeared several times. If it is a little obscure, someone will jump out and say that there is a bug or that they can't understand it, which leads to my writing method.

Some brothers said that the key points are not obvious and it is very messy to read, and some brothers said that it is too procrastinated and intermittent.

The core of this small climax is not about pretending to be cool or cool, but the transition of the protagonist from weak to awesome, from no cool to cool.

The power of the protagonist is a bit complicated, and because of the power system of this book, I have to explain it in detail after such a huge improvement, otherwise it will be easy to have a gap later.

You may have noticed that the protagonist's battle did not improve at all in the last climax.

This volume is to make the protagonist transition from nothing to something. The foreshadowing and improvement of the entire volume are all preparing for the next highlight, the next volume "Whisper of the Ancient God".

Of course, I definitely have problems myself, but I don't think it's the kind of attitude problem of just getting by and making up the word count. It should be that my writing skills and control of the rhythm of the story are really not in place.

I am working hard to improve these. You may not feel it, but in the process of writing, I do feel that I am making little progress.

I am still thinking and researching now. If I feel it is necessary, I will rewrite yesterday's chapter.

If you have any suggestions and ideas, you can leave a message, I will read and reply. Thank you for your support, thank you!

Today's update will be late, please forgive me.