Finished spreading flowers!
The main plot of this book has basically been told. I personally feel that there are no shortcomings. It is also the most satisfying novel I have ever written. There is no peeing throughout the whole process, and the rhythm is wave after wave.
I had written several novels before, but I felt disgusted before they were finished. I couldn't wait to start a new book. Only The French White Tiger was reluctant to part with me after I finished it. I wanted to continue writing, but unfortunately there was no plot, so I just gave it a thumbs-down.
Yes, this book still has many shortcomings.
First of all, Lu Jun's cultivation improved too quickly in the later period. I thought that the game between the three roofs, the dark king, and even the ten masters would be a long volume.
Helplessly, once Leng Yuemou died, he couldn't stop the car.
However, I feel that the handling of the Pacific Empire should be considered responsible. It is not as anticlimactic as the original work. The handling of the Holy City is the same.
Sometimes I think that maybe in the ancient capital of Shayuan, Lu Jun did not dare to bear the ancient king's armor robe (looking back at this point is somewhat risky), maybe it will not collapse so quickly, and the future battle against the Pacific will be a more balanced game.
The Battle of the Kingdom will also be written in a more balanced way, and Mo Fan will have more scenes later on.
Well, this can be considered the second shortcoming. The Battle of the Kingdom is too short, and Mo Fan has almost no sense of presence.
The third shortcoming, some people think it is, some people think it is not, is that this book is not as depressing and dark as the original work, that is to say, it has no inner flavor and is too complete.
But my original intention of writing a fanfic is to make up for the regrets of the original work. The whole method is very special. There is no solution to big disasters, but small regrets can be reversed.
Then, since you can make up for the regrets of such big disasters as the Bo City disaster and the ancient capital of Shayuan, why do you deliberately ignore the small regrets such as He Yu, Xu Zhaoting, and Jiang Feng?
Lu Jun's behavior trend coincides with the trajectory of these people, so there is no reason to deliberately avoid easy things.
There are still some problems, such as insufficient branch plots, thin characters, and no plot worth pondering, etc. These problems are beyond my ability and can only be made up for slowly with writing experience.
Next is the issue of new books that everyone is concerned about. Well, I have no idea for the time being. Let’s have a good New Year first, and then ask friends for their opinions after the New Year.
Quanfa Fans don’t want to write anymore, Douluo has an idea, it belongs to Dou Er, but I feel that I can’t beat those great writers who write about Douluo. They come from a more novel angle, so I might as well go back to my old job and write something original.
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Finally, I would like to express my gratitude to the only ally in this book [Evening Star Bright Heart]. Readers have been relatively silent. They have almost never commented on the chapter, and have not joined the group, so I cannot express my gratitude in person.
The protector [Sakura1314] has been with this book for a long time, and he rewards me with coins almost every once in a while. He is a big benefactor. I have to admit that sometimes when I feel depressed while writing, he will always appear magically and coincidentally, which makes me feel more motivated. Full.
Well, the disaster-stricken Lu Weixi is his friendly guest appearance. What's sad is that he lacks personal ability to write the supporting role vividly and interestingly.
Including the protector [Black Cloud], who used to chat with me every day, talk about the plot, and even guessed my pants. However, after I graduated and started working, I had no time to chat, but I always kept my encouragement in my heart.
Jun Yaojin is his guest role. This is the first time I have seen a request for a female character. Hey, you're welcome.
The helmsman [Young Master of the Ye Family], as everyone who reads Quanfa Fans must know, is the angel investor of our entire Quanfa fandom. He appears in almost every Quanfa fanfic, and he has also given rewards. Mark of.
A year ago, when the author who wrote French fanfics didn't have much income, he was the one who silently encouraged us. He actively spoke in the comment area and was full of positive feedback for the author.
This person is also one of the first readers. He appeared in the fourth chapter of White Tiger Pendant after it was published, and he has been reading it every day since then.
The helmsman [Milk Tea Addiction] is also a major sponsor of the French fandom. Well, the winner in life, skip it!
The helmsmen [Rui Ci] and [Bring a bottle of 82-year-old mineral water] are relatively quiet, but they frequently vote monthly, which makes me feel like I see them every day.
[Tsing Yi Holding Umbrella] is a little expert in speaking in the group. Without him, there will be no one alive in this group. Secretary Qing Yu is his guest role.
Both readers [Professor Yuan] and [Shadow’s Mission] are very active in the book review section of the group. The latter is the group manager, which makes me feel very comfortable.
Ruiping: The only group manager who is willing to standardize his speech.
Professor Shiyuan, Qingyi, and Milk Tea are all fake group management, they can’t do anything, and they are the first to take the lead in pornographic pictures.
[Linmao Selling Toys], a cat-loving expert, was the first person to join the readership of this book. His memory at that time was clear, and he was indeed a veteran.
There are many, many readers. I remember you all and sincerely thank you for your company and support. Unfortunately, the space is limited and I cannot write another 10,000 words.
Next, I would like to express my gratitude to the authors. They are all authors of French fandom. If you are interested, you can take a look at their works.
The first is [Crows Crossing the Cold Pond]. The eldest sister is the leader in the Quanfa circle. He is a cute boy. I had a sudden idea to write a Quanfa fanfic before, but I was afraid that I would not grasp the plot setting of the original work accurately, so I decided to Found him.
I asked for the complete document of the original work and a little master who answered all the questions and asked the French Encyclopedia.
[Lan Lingye], hey hey hey, this is the eunuch’s first all-French fanfic, but many people still read it, which shows that the author is good at writing about sweet love.
[Draft] Master Ling himself, the founder of stocking magic tools, has updated from daily to weekly to monthly, and now he updates every year.
[White Clothes], it’s hard to describe in one word, the xp is strange, let’s just look at it, now it’s on Manzhu Shahua, I heard that next time it’s going to be on Leng Yuemu, okay.
[Dragon Throwing], ahem, very punishing, melee mage, summoning ancient dragons from major games, movies, and comics, very well written.
There are some other authors later, so I won’t mention them one by one.
Alas, the fandom in France is small and not very popular. I hope everyone can encourage me more. After I finish writing, I will write original works for The Crow Crossing the Cold Pond.
That’s it for the final words. Looking back at the past year, I realize that I have experienced the most things in this year of my life.
This year I have suffered from acute gastroenteritis four times. The gastritis was over, but the enteritis came back, and the enteritis was over. I had to take leave twice for the gastritis, and twice it was because you didn’t know.
Now I have gastritis, but since I am almost done with the book, I don’t want to procrastinate. I might as well just finish it and then rest and recuperate.
Well, don’t worry, it’s a small problem and you can slowly recover after exercising every day.
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