Green Life

I finally finished writing this volume. The author’s mood is like taking a sauna. There are many ideas, and the writing is still very immature. There are many feelings in my mind. Writing, while coding. .

The author's thinking is relatively jumpy. I don't know if there is any unnatural expression when writing, which causes dyslexia.

I wrote the first volume. Looking back, I still agree with some chapters, and some are not satisfied. I may change it when I have time.

For the first time writing a book, the control of the plot, and more specifically, the feeling of readers' reading habits is not in place. Sometimes the writing is very smooth, but in fact, there are too many words, and the detailed description is not in place. Very blunt, very hypocritical.

Although this is a football novel, it has added a lot of trivial life and feelings, because the theme of this chapter is actually nostalgia and commemoration.

What do you commemorate and commemorate? Of course it is youth, of course it is the past life that Ma Keqin will never forget, but youth is not always sunshine in the eyes of those who have experienced it, and it has little to do with age. It is a state of mind, a reflection on life.

This is a novel, of course the author designed a lot of plots, there are joys and setbacks, why does Zhang Wuji have to fall into the hole to learn from Jiuyang, why does Duan Yu have to eat toads? It doesn't explain...

Finally, I would like to thank the friends who supported this book again, especially those who asked questions, who can promote the author's improvement, thank you!

Please look forward to Ma Keqin's new journey: Volume Two - Moving forward in the wind and rain.

Another: The issue of nationality and blame is really not a problem. In the author's opinion, this is just a scenery in the protagonist's journey.