Han Zong: Starting From Chinatown, Dominating South Korea
[15] A Night Spent With Joan
That night, it was dark.
Because it had just rained, there was no moon or stars in the sky.
The dark night shrouded the apartment building, and the two phases were deserted.
Inside the elevator room of the apartment building,
Yang Qiaoan's petite face leaned on Bai Chengze's shoulder, and she was already asleep at this time.
This pose was something she had to find with great difficulty.
Previously, the two leaned back to each other, talking and laughing, chatting a lot of parents, and each told each other a lot of things.
Later, sleepiness struck, and Yang Qiaoan gradually lost his strength.
Sleepy and cold, she unconsciously rubbed on Bai Chengze's body, seeking a small warmth.
Because I was sitting on the ground, my posture was very stiff.
Yang Qiaoan wanted to fall asleep, but couldn't sleep,
Tormented by sleepiness and cold for a while,
She repeatedly adjusted several poses,
Finally, he leaned side by side with Bai Chengze on the inner wall of the elevator and slept lightly.
"Why is it so wet?"
Bai Chengze touched Yang Qiaoan's forearm,
At this moment, Qiao An lowered her head slightly, with her small mouth half-open,
The saliva is like a line, dripping and drooling.
Out of kindness, Bai Chengze wiped her.
He gently rubbed Yang Qiaoan's arm,
Joanna's skin is smooth and refreshing, like a baby covered in talcum powder.
Bai Chengze pulled Yang Qiaoan's arm into his arms and wiped his saliva on his clothes.
Then, with light hands, he unfolded his coat and covered himself and Joan.
The two curled up together like this, covered by a small "quilt".
Yang Qiaoan's breath was very steady, her breathing was even, and she fell together in Bai Chengze's ears, and she couldn't breathe out.
A burst of heat made Bai Chengze's neck itch.
After a while, Yang Qiaoan seemed to be a little cold in his sleep, subconsciously hugged himself, and leaned two smooth and slightly cold beautiful legs against Bai Chengze's body.
The back of Bai Chengze's hand was passively attached to her leg.
Really, she leaned on herself.
Thinking of this, Bai Chengze gently brushed the back of his hand over Joan's calf and put his warm palm on her knee.
He hoped that this would bring more or less warmth to the other party.
Bai Chengze's palm continuously released heat, as if instilling internal strength in Joan.
After a while, Yang Qiaoan's originally cold knees really became much warmer.
Good guy to the end, Bai Chengze put his hands on Joan's cold thighs again.
In this way, he worked hard for a while, and felt a burst of satisfaction in his heart, as if he had done something great and big.
When his hands came all the way to Yang Qiaoan's ankles, Qiao An finally couldn't help but move.
"That..." In the darkness, she gently spoke in Bai Chengze's ear, "Mr. Chengze, have you touched enough?" ”
"Huh?"
Bai Chengze quickly withdrew his hand and explained in a positive tone: "Your body is so cold, I want to warm you up." ”
"I know, Mr. Seungze, you don't need to explain." Yang Qiaoan said.
With that, Joann yawned and leaned back on Bai Chengze.
The two snuggled together, and Joan's little hands hooked up and gently held one of Bai Chengze's fingers.
It wasn't long before she fell into a deep sleep again.
After Qiao An fell asleep, Bai Chengze searched the carry-on space for a while, found two thicker clothes, and gently covered himself and Qiao An's bodies.
In fact, for tonight's events, Bai Chengze is still a little too careless.
Because, with his strength, easily breaking open an elevator door is like drinking cold water, and it is not a problem at all.
In addition, he is not without a mobile phone,
Instead, Bai Chengze's carry-on space contains many mobile phones, all scavenged from the corpses of the Viper Gang.
It's just that out of a little selfishness, Bai Chengze dogged at the beginning, and it turned out to be wrong, and the dog is now the current scene.
Anyway, the matter has come to this, and what has come is safe,
Let's spend this unforgettable night with Yang Qiaoan for the time being.
Soon, Bai Chengze's sleepiness struck, his head tilted slightly towards Yang Qiaoan, and he closed his eyes.
The two heads touched each other, and you and I gave a smooth and long breath.
......
The next day, Bai Chengze woke up.
The inside of the elevator was still pitch black, but through the gap in the hatch, a faint light came in.
Bai Chengze put two clothes into the carry-on space.
He heard the sound of footsteps outside the elevator doors, and the sound of two people talking.
"Did you stop here?"
"There should be no mistake."
At the same time, Yang Qiaoan was leaning on Bai Chengze's shoulder with her mouth open on her back, sleeping soundly.
Bai Chengze gently shook her awake, "Miss Joan, someone has come to rescue us." ”
"Ah, is that so?" Yang Qiaoan woke up with a murmur and let out a long yawn.
Taking advantage of the dim light, she secretly glanced at Bai Chengze beside her, and then straightened up and said, "I should really thank you, Mr. Chengze." ”
"Why do you say that?" Bai Chengze said lightly.
"If you have a chance," Yang Qiao paused, "I might be able to invite you over for a meal at home?" ”
Both of them live alone in the apartment and are neighbors separated by a wall, so it is very convenient to visit the door to eat.
After thinking about it, Bai Chengze immediately agreed.
It's just a meal, it shouldn't be a big deal, right?
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ps: Thinking left and right, decided to talk about it,
This book, as the introduction says,
The content is mainly composed of Korean comics and Korean comics.
Since there are two aspects,
That's bound to create some inevitable conflict.
Han Manga, mostly talking about YY, is pure love, dog blood, and children's love.
Han Zong, the range is much broader, like a pot of stew.
When writing the outline, the author thought a lot,
Because of the current platform, there are many lessons from the past.
Those who simply wrote Han Zong, ten out of ten books, and finally cut about 200,000 words.
This also shows that the market of Han Zong is indeed limited and has little future.
So the author took a desperate step and melted Han Man in.
I have to say that the attraction of Han Manga is indeed stronger.
You can also know by looking at the wind direction in the comment area,
Most readers come for Han Manga.
This also shows that the author has to serve two groups at the same time.
If you come to see Han Zong, you will feel that the content of Han Manga is disgusting and greasy, and you don't like it from the bottom of your heart.
If you come to see Han Manga, you may prefer that the author puts most of the pen and ink on the key heroines and does not pay much attention to other content.
Therefore, it is difficult to balance the relationship between the two and plan for the intensity of ink.
At the same time, everyone also knows that if you simply push women as the main line, you will definitely be killed.
In terms of the main line, the author chose the underworld theme that is relatively popular and he is also good at.
Because the author wrote about Hong Kong comprehensive before, there is a yardstick for upgrading routines in this regard, and the possibility of collapse is very small.
In the theme pool of the underworld, the focus is on "Crime City", "New World", "Yellow Sea", "Despicable Street", and "Bad Guys".
The comics that appeared during this time are "Fitness", "Neighbors", "Vacant", "Lawyer", "Hatsuki" and so on.
In addition, at this stage, Gu Ziyun, who was adopted as a child, will have a heart-warming branch.
Everyone also knows that the same humanities are the same as the humanities, and since everyone comes in to see it, it is for the same people.
So many times, the protagonist has to break into the plot, so that there can be a connection between the two.
So when to do something, it has become a very critical thing.
Can't the protagonist live in an apartment with the four sisters in the vacant house after becoming president?
Can't you meet the neighbor Yang Qiaoan after moving into the villa, right?
Therefore, in order to make some characters appear less contradictory, the identity of the protagonist must have a transition to appear silky and normal.
Therefore, the slow pace of the plot is because some characters must appear in this period, and after this period she is not fragrant.
For example, the heroine Yang Qiaoan in the early stage, if the foreshadowing is not enough, the ink is too little, the ambiguity is not enough, and the dog blood is not enough, then when pushing, the cool point will be much less.
Of course, you can choose to boost and choose a round of travel, but it is not interesting to write it like that, without YY things, it is better to go directly to read the manga.
Another example is the mid-term love Aunt,
People like to watch affection because they like the step-by-step process.
An inch in, an inch of joy.
If Zihao had pushed Aunt in the first chapter, then the coolness and sense of expectation would have been completely gone, and "Teaching" would not be as popular as it is now, right?
Speaking of the medium term,
After the underworld theme is written, the protagonist has a foundation for development, and with a career and manpower, there will be a period of farming.
Because it was written earlier that the protagonist has a "white simple" identity.
There's no hiding here.
Bai Pu is a buxiao who has been away from home for many years, that is, the homeless man who was killed by the protagonist at the beginning.
His father was a big chaebol, just such an heir.
Bai Pu ran away from home because his father married Aunt, who is his stepmother.
His father was terminally ill because he was looking for his son,
Saw the famous Bai Pu (that is, the protagonist) on TV, mistook him for a long-lost son (because the protagonist held his ID card, and looked alike, and had a tooth mark on his butt), got him back and let him inherit the family property.
As soon as we met, our wishes were over, and the people ate their meals.
So the protagonist picked up a group in vain, a loving stepmother, and three sisters.
Here, the patch for Love is that from the moment she entered the door, Bai Pu's father fell ill and has been lying on the hospital bed, so the two have never been in contact.
That is to say, although Aunt is still the same Aunt, the character is still the character who does not know how to refuse, but she has another identity, that is, she has a spring in her heart, likes to peek at small movies, has rich theoretical experience, and has zero practical experience, such a tangled state, she must be flooded with maternal love, she especially loves the protagonist, and especially hopes to make up for the mistakes she has brought.
(Regarding the key characters, the author will make a patch, it will definitely not be dirty, and it will not be NTR, but the character must not be changed, and if it is changed, it will not smell that way, so Aunt is still that Aunt, Joan is still that Joan, each has its own characteristics, and everyone understands.) )
The protagonist is wearing a brother who is not related to Love and his three sisters, but they all regard the protagonist as a younger brother who is not deeply involved in the world and has suffered a lot outside.
Of course, the plot is still based on the theme of "teaching", and everyone also understands that the sister and love teach little by little, and the protagonist learns little by little.
In addition, at this stage, "Penthouse" and "Druna" will be added, focusing on Teacher Qian, Zhang Manyue and Shen Xiulian.
The reason why I moved into the top floor is because the protagonist has made a trace, and it is understandable to enter the top floor, and it is a main line from the 30th floor to the 100th floor.
The reason why Zhang Manyue appeared is because the protagonist killed too much in the early stage, and there were many unjust souls entangled with him.
In addition, the protagonists of this period are already chaebols, so they will be harassed by the official organizations in "TheK2" and "IRIS", and the introduction of Kim Sun-hwa, Kim so-hwa sisters and Choi Youjin, Anna mother and daughter (Choi Youjin is Bai Pu's distant Aunt, which is also reasonable).
In terms of comics, it is "Teaching", "Supermarket Sister" (there is an older sister who works in a supermarket), "New World" (the protagonist owns an office building), and so on.
Gu Ziyun was discovered by the organization, so there is the super power of "The Witch", and there is the light and weird plot of the yin and yang realms of "Druna", and the protagonist's opponent has also upgraded.
So throughout the middle term, there are still more things that can be written, and according to the outline, the subject matter must be completely sufficient.
In the later stage, the protagonist sat on the Blue House for a while and became president for a while (related to the election of Mrs. Cui Youzhen's husband).
Then the zombie crisis broke out, the protagonist 100% fusion degree Fan Ma, plus 20 skill goldfingers, with everyone to fight monster brush points.
In this period, there will be survival flow, tower defense flow, and leading the mainstream, and the theme is to eliminate the zombie crisis, there is nothing to say.
At this stage, after experiencing strong winds and waves and ebb and flow, the protagonist is also more divine, will abandon some human things, his opponent is no longer a person or organization, but rises to the level of right and wrong, and becomes a decision-maker of the right to live and kill.
In terms of plot, it enters the story line of "Trip to Busan", and the "Zombie Campus" will be dreamily linked with the popular characters of "The Walking Dead".
In terms of comics, some heavier things such as "Slave" and "Correctional Institute" will come in.
The overall idea of this book is this, because the collection results are quite satisfactory, so the author spent a little time to make an outline and write a little detailed outline, hoping to write a longer Han Zhen.
The author of the overall routine has nothing to hide, which is probably it.
If the content is not what everyone wants to see, then you can already stop when you see this, there is no need to find yourself unhappy, right?
Of course, reality is definitely skinny, and the author is prepared in his heart.
How long can you write, mainly depends on the comprehensive score.
Finally, cheekily asked for a wave of data, I haven't asked for data much, I hope to get more flower tickets and monthly passes, thank you first!
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