Hogwarts: Becoming a god from reselling fresh food

Chapter 120 of this volume...

It's actually a bit long.

However, the campus plot is only one volume, and it has crammed in everything I want to cram into it, so if it is longer, it will be longer.

I was quite tired writing this volume. I don’t really like to follow the plot, but I have to rely on the original plot and timing. This is one of the reasons why this volume is so long.

In this volume, the protagonist actually plays the same role as Dumbledore. They are both chess players. They do not personally take part in the matter of the Sorcerer's Stone, but indirectly control their respective chess pieces through other methods.

However, Dumbledore did not take the initiative to regard the protagonist as an enemy or opponent. His moves were more defensive, which also resulted in him putting little pressure on the protagonist. It was difficult for me to make the protagonist suddenly jump up and kill him. Damn it - that's not the right mood.

This makes this volume emotionally dull. However, for the author, I tried to grasp a larger plot and rounded out Tom's line well. I also used the original plot to make a story that looks similar to the original plot. It's almost the same in the beginning, but it's actually a completely different twist. I hope everyone can get some fun out of it.

At the same time, because the protagonist is behind the scenes, he appears too little in this volume. A lot of space is given to Murphy's chess piece - Tom. Readers who like to see the original characters will find it interesting, but readers who want to see the protagonist will find it boring. .

My handling of this point is not mature and rounded enough. In essence, my grasp of the readership group is not accurate enough.

This is probably one of the inherent disadvantages of writing fan fiction, so I won’t write about fan fiction in the next book, because there are too many constraints.

Another point that I need to review is that my portrayal of the character's growth is not clear enough.

Readers who see this should also feel that the protagonist is changing.

The original Murphy is different from the current Murphy. Even the Murphy who just entered the school is different from the Murphy at the end of this volume.

He has become more confident and more certain about his own path. He is less violent and even more tolerant.

When he first entered the school, he still had a natural awe of Dumbledore, but in the end, he was able to talk to him from an equal perspective, or even a slightly higher perspective.

There are changes in the characters, but I didn't make it more specific.

How to put it, because Murphy is too lonely, he doesn't even have a real "friend" around him. No one can discover and summarize his changes from the perspective of a friend, and no one can discuss this issue with him in depth. .

Although people like Celica, Patrick or the Queen will be his companions for a certain period of time and under certain circumstances, it is difficult to establish a long-term close relationship with him.

A similar plot is considered a B story in the play, or an emotional drama. I'm not sure whether I should include such a plot in future plots.

Because there are risks, if it is not written well, it will be superfluous and become a poisonous point. Moreover, the main line of this book is not feelings, and this is not what everyone is here to read.

However, if the plot goes smoothly, a little bit may be added to flesh out the story and make everyone like Murphy more.

Most likely it won't feel like love, but more like a friendship of deep mutual trust.

Anyway, let’s try it little by little. I’m not sure if I can write emotional scenes well – for example, I suppressed the Queen’s marriage proposal because I didn’t want to spend too much time on such unplanned subplots.

Finally, the campus chapter is finally over. The protagonist in the next volume is getting more and more mature, and it’s time to take a drastic action on the world.

And this is bound to cause a backlash.

I just finished the outline...I haven't even finished the details yet...

I really hope someone can lend me a brain to help me figure out the details...

Finally, I would like to thank everyone who has read this. Your support is my biggest motivation to continue writing.

I love you, okay.