I like traveling the most

I have some complaints to complain about, so I wrote this.

The 500,000-word writing can’t be called a failure, it can only be called Internet garbage.

[Clock Girl] volume is hard to write and hard to read, the author and the readers torture each other, sometimes I really feel sorry for the old men who subscribed.

So I want to find out the reason.

First of all, it should be the wrong topic.

Admittedly, as a work 10 years ago, [Clock Girl] is very successful, even now there will be people playing memes when it is mentioned. But apart from that, whether it is the character setting (part), background or plot, it is a bunch of defense.

I know it is wrong to look at the work 10 years ago with the current perspective, but the purpose of writing this volume is to use the other party’s elements to drive the whole novel. But now I think it is purely for this dish of vinegar dumplings, wasting a great period of growth, and even more than half of the readers have run away.

Of course, if it is a simple mistake in topic selection, it can be accepted, and the readers will subscribe with the mood of reluctantly reading.

However, I made another mistake during this period.

——The growth of the protagonist.

In order to lay the groundwork for the next volume, I wrote a little bit about growth, which led me to completely ignore one thing, that is, my protagonist does not need to grow.

Yes, he does not need to grow.

The point is not whether Hanayusai Shoko is qualified to say, but that the protagonist I wrote is a mature one, the kind that turns into a dragon when encountering wind and cloud, and does not need growth attributes at all.

I have already talked about this with the industry leader.

He said:

"The protagonist you wrote is very mature, whether it is thoughts or practices, so the growth you wrote is very strange, giving people a sense of confusion. Especially when you are still being criticized even though you have done nothing wrong, it will make readers have a rebellious mentality of not being understood, which will lead to such great flexibility. You ask for a solution? Not writing is the best solution, your protagonist does not need to grow."

Thanks to the boss's request, I forced a reversal at the end of this volume, which should be considered to be barely passed.

Of course, the above are all mistakes in writing, and the most fatal is the troubles of real life.

I have been flying in the sky since last month, and I may not have spent as much time on the ground as I have in the sky. But even so, except for the problem of flight turnover in Chongqing, I asked for leave, and I asked for leave when I really didn't want to move when I got home, I have been insisting on updating every day.

I really, really, really want to stop updating!

I want to stop it for a month!

But I know my personality. Once I stop updating, I will definitely not be able to continue writing, so I force myself to write.

The price is that the quality has dropped sharply, and there are mistakes in both work and writing. I want both, but I can't grasp both.

Even the hidden line that was laid before - the OVA elf line, a very important line, was forgotten by me. It was not until I updated the last chapter last night that I suddenly remembered it, and I felt wronged all of a sudden.

But no matter what, I finally finished this volume. Although there are regrets, it is complete.

Summary: Not stopping is a success.

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ps: It should be back to normal after that, and the level should be back. In addition, it is easier to write about the other world, and the main theme in the future will be the other world.