I summon the shadow army in Pirates

Let’s briefly talk about the modifications:

The first revision: Chapter 3

Before the book was released, my original third chapter was to be followed by the eighth chapter, but the day before the book was released, I felt that such a story seemed a bit bland, so I joined the conflict between the William Pirates.

Because it was written on the spur of the moment, I wanted to use Jedi Strike Back to create a sense of excitement, but when I looked back a few days ago, I discovered some contradictions with the first two chapters.

Now it has been modified, and the protagonist is the pirate Arden who can be easily solved.

The second modification: Ghost Ship

The ghost ship is the first climax of the book, summoning the great knight captain [Lanlos]!

The plot of Major Kahn blocking the protagonist's knife was the plot I expected, but because I was outside at the time, I didn't finish it. I went back to revise it after more than 40 chapters. At that time, I caught a cold because I stayed up late revising it.

I have also asked myself, does this need to be modified? Later, I was determined, because if it helps shape and connect the protagonist, then it must be modified.

The third modification: [Murloc Pirate]

The shadow soldiers I designed are not afraid of the sea water and retain their abilities in life. The fish-men soldiers can go into the sea. Because a reader complained that it should not be so unnatural, I was influenced at the time and deleted this setting.

But I thought about it yesterday. I am the author of this book. How to write the book should be based on my own ideas and routes, rather than readers telling me how to write. Otherwise, what will everyone read?

Now back to my own settings, the shadow soldiers are not afraid of the sea water, and the murloc soldiers have the ability to go into the sea while alive.

Kuzan uses his freezing ability to ride a bicycle on the sea. The protagonist can also move on the sea by stepping on [Aaron]. Devil Fruit is just that the person with the ability is afraid of the sea water.

…

After finishing the modification, let’s make a summary

The first volume of "Navy Lieutenant Commander", or it can be said to be the East China Sea chapter, has been completed. It took more than a month and several days to publish the book, with a total of 160,000 words.

After writing this paragraph about the Navy Lieutenant Commander in the first volume, I felt that my whole body relaxed. The ending was very good. The scene was fixed to fit the scene in my mind and coincided with the title of the volume.

The "Major Commander" in this volume has two meanings, one is Major Kahn, and the other is the protagonist who has grown from a recruit.

Looking back on this volume, I have revised it a lot due to lack of writing power and some other reasons, but now it has been perfected and there are basically no problems.

After the protagonist joined the navy for training, in order to prevent everyone from being bored, I tried to lighten up some of the plot and speed up the pace.

It really starts to take off at the end of the recruit period and the beginning of Chapter 26.

Later, I started to shape the protagonist's family, and then started to get in touch with the original characters reasonably and smoothly. Although it was a bit slow, it was not abrupt.

After all, I'm not an experienced author, and my writing skills are indeed not that good. I can't write very well about battles and daily life. I can only say that I tried my best to write.

Here, I would like to thank the reader with the nickname "leolin6414" from Qidian. He always helped me find typos while reading. Because I use mobile phone code, I check and modify after writing, and sometimes I always miss a few words. Sorry, everyone.

By the way, let’s talk about the important archetypes of the characters in the first volume, although there are only a few.

Protagonist: Coles

The golden finger ability of "Summon Shadow" is borrowed from the Korean comic "I Level Up Alone", which I have already said in the author's words in Chapter 2.

Sister: Velcia

The prototype comes from "Violet Evergarden", Violet, with the same golden hair color and blue eyes. In this book, she is not miserable, she is unrestrained and has all kinds of love from her family.

Judging from her appetite in the pirate world, she is very talented, but I will not write a plot about my sister fighting. The difficulties and obstacles in the future will be solved by the protagonist alone.

【Lanlos】：

Drawing on the prototype of Lancelot, Knight of the Round Table, I also designed a sad story in the article, and at the same time arranged the demon sword in a reasonable way.

William: The prototype is based on the protagonist of the book "One Piece", the Sauna King...

————

I have a plan for the development of the protagonist's fruit abilities. Donghai only needs to be simple and crude, and I will show them one by one later.

Of course, everyone knows that I am not very good at naming. I will go to the comment area later to build a collection platform for fruit abilities and sword skills. If you have ideas, you can mention them.

I finished writing the first volume, and I finally got the first recommendation from Qidian yesterday...

Nowadays, recommendations are all based on catching up on reading, and I really can’t help it. Please help me catch up on reading these days, comment more, and be more active.

This book already has 160,000 words, but the current data is still very poor. I really want to advance in the recommendation and go through a few more rounds of recommendations to avoid the tragic situation of being published on the shelves. Please!

The story in the next volume will unfold a more exciting and powerful story with the original characters.

At the same time, to respond to what everyone wants to know, this book has a single female protagonist and will appear in the second volume.

This book is updated twice a day, and I will stay up late these days to write more updates. I hope you can help me catch up on the latest chapters within 24 hours.

I'm sorry to trouble all readers here.

——

Volume Two: First Show of Strength

The navy, pirates, and revolutionary army, the threads of fate keep intersecting on him. Who can know which path Coles will eventually take?

The only thing that can be seen clearly now is a rising star in the navy.

Charlotte Coles!