If you are asked to write about a courier, you write "Second Person" on the spot

In the empty room, only Bao Bao and Zhang Chulan were left.

Bao Bao asked innocently:

"Why are you so angry? Hasn't it always been your dream to break the chastity seal?"

Zhang Chulan said nothing, and walked towards the door with a disappointed look on his face.

Bao Bao asked,"Where are you going?"

"Back to the dormitory. Feng Baobao, this master-servant game is over."

"What did you say?"

Baby looked at Zhang Chulan's back, still not knowing why he suddenly got angry.

Zhang Chulan didn't look back, but just said sadly to himself:

"I have been forbearing before because my grandfather asked me to do so."

"He probably doesn't want me to enter the circle of aliens"

"So, I have always been pretending to be a grandson"

"Now that I've been exposed, there's no point in hiding."

"I find that if I pretend to be your grandson for too long, you will really treat me as your grandson."

Baobao raised the knife:"Come back! Do you know what will happen if you keep going forward?"

Zhang Chulan still didn't look back:"Oh, I know, Baobao, I am not your opponent"

"If I keep going, I'm afraid some parts of my body will be left here."

"But if I don't leave, my dignity will be lost here."

"I think that would be even more fatal."

The baby shouted loudly:"Come back!"

"I called you back!"

Bao Bao shouted as he swung his knife.

Instantly, on the right side of Zhang Chulan, the wall cracked and the door collapsed.

The edge of the split wall was falling with broken stones.

Zhang Chulan paused, without turning back or responding. He just clenched his fists and continued to leave the dilapidated house.

【Isn’t this a bit exaggerated? Is Zhang Chulan trying to show off?】

【I don't think I'm pretending, I'm really angry】

【Yes, using this method makes Zhang Chulan feel very mean and hurts his self-esteem.】

【Someone mocked you for being a virgin and was looking for someone to help you break it. Wouldn't you be angry?】

【Normal people would be angry. Although Zhang Chulan was easy-going before, he really went too far here.】

【But from Xia Fanju's description, the baby is just an idiot and doesn't know anything.】

【But Zhang Chulan didn't know. He hadn't been with the baby for a long time and thought she was insulting him.】

【This time Zhang Chulan was actually more handsome than three seconds】

【Will Xia Fanju make another big reversal?】

【Probably not. I am really angry this time. I was not this angry even when I was stripped naked.】

【Yes, although his bottom line is low, he still has a bottom line.】

【Zhang Chulan is not pretending to be a grandson. He has a grandfather. He is a real grandson.】

【This seems to be the first time Zhang Chulan called someone baby?】

【It's really sweet.】

【And this seems to be the first time that Baoerjie has emotional fluctuations.】

【If you say so, it's true】

【Both of them experienced huge emotional fluctuations. In fact, Zhang Chulan had been too tolerant before.】

【I don't know who to feel sorry for.】

【By the way, Sister Baoer's knife is still as sharp as ever.】

【Is this the true strength of Sister Baoer?】

【House: You two have a conflict, and you take it out on me】

【House: Please turn on the microphone to communicate】

【House: I was terrified.】

【House: Well, it was quite sudden.......】

【House: I have endured too much alone】

【House: I hope there is no Feng Baobao in heaven】

【Demolition Office: Please join us】

【People who love houses strongly condemned it, saying,"If you don't want to live in it, why don't you let me live in it? Why do you cut the price so easily? Do you know how expensive the house prices are now?"】

【This picture of Chu Lan is quite handsome when he is serious.】

【But, he just left like that, and he won’t go to the Luotian Grand Ceremony?】

【He will definitely come back. Xia Fan is the best at turning things around.】

【Let's see how Xia Fanju writes. 】

The plot develops here.

The audience sees that Zhang Chulan finally looks serious. They are also looking forward to it and worried at the same time.

They start to discuss how to develop in the future.

Xia Fan also stopped to pour a cup of coffee and take a short break.

In the studio.

The host on the stage is still explaining the work of contestant No. 9.

When Teacher Haiyan commented, she said that the story written by this contestant was too abrupt and a little fragmented. It would be better if it was changed.

When Guo Xiaosi heard it, he immediately mentioned Xia Fan's work:

"Teacher Haiyan, I have been paying attention to contestant No. 28 just now."

The other three were shocked.

What's wrong with this guy?

He suddenly started to care about No. 28.

Did he change his attitude after seeing the popularity?

Moreover, isn't it a bit disrespectful to other contestants to say this?

Guo Xiaosi also realized that what he said was not right, and said again:

"Don't get me wrong, it's not that I don't care about contestant No. 9"

"Because the screen size of No. 28 is so large, I couldn't help but look at it twice"

"I want to say that the plot written on the 28th is a bit abrupt, the character setting is a bit collapsed, and it feels very disconnected. I think this is why he didn't write an outline. Do you think so too?"

After hearing this, the three teachers also took a closer look at Xia Fan's latest story.

Tiancan Digua:"It is indeed a bit sudden."

Fenghuo:"It can only be said that it is a bit collapsed, but it is still within a reasonable range."

Hearing the two voices of agreement, Guo Xiaosi was also a little complacent.

His purpose was just to let people discover Xia Fan's shortcomings.

So as to increase the value of his comments on the first day.

Now, his purpose has been achieved.

But Haiyan said:

"I looked carefully and found that No. 28 is indeed similar to No. 9 in that there is some separation in character."

"But I haven't finished talking yet"

"What Mr. Guo said makes sense."

"But contestant No. 9 has an outline, but it’s still a little abrupt."

"I think the reason for this is that the time is tight during the game and there is no way to prepare carefully."

"So, if they can lay the groundwork for the story later, this can be considered a foreshadowing.

Guo Xiaosi:"It is possible that contestant No. 9 can lay the groundwork later, after all, he has an outline."

"But the 28th is not certain, maybe the latter will forget the former"

"Feng Baobao had no emotions before, but suddenly she had such a big emotional fluctuation. I think her character is broken."

Feng Huo:"Let's continue to read on. After all, this is a long story, and it is not like a short story that requires no mistakes. I think if we can make up for it later, it will not be considered broken."

The judges talked one after another.

In the creation room.

Xia Fan could not hear their comments.

But in fact, Xia Fan also felt that the change of the two people's personalities in this separation scene was a bit abrupt.

At the same time, he also knew that if he didn't write it this way, he would need to lay a lot of groundwork.

For example, Baobao's past, Zhang Chulan's past.

Maybe in the process of laying the groundwork, everyone will be more confused.

It's better to write it like this.

Therefore, the only way to make this paragraph less abrupt is to write it as soon as possible.

Everyone will understand it when they see the plot later.

This morning, he didn't even order food again.

Just take a short break and continue to write.