My wife is the reborn boss
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Gu Xiaomeng did not relax his guard, "I don't know what the suzerain is doing."
"It's nothing." Yu Zecheng said calmly, "I just want to ask Elder Gu to ask the owner of Guigu, whether Yaowanggu will accept my surrender?"
"What?"
This copy of the explanation and apology and compensation. . .
Alas it's all my fault.I wrote the specific outline of this dungeon after staying up all night, and I and my friends couldn't help laughing after reading it.
I thought it would be very interesting to write it down, but the reality gave me a slap in the face. The daily recommendation votes dropped by more than 400 on average compared to last week, and the favorites increased by only 2~300 today. This is my self-test water push Worst day ever.
Where this dungeon fails, I have summed up three points
The first is the update. I can’t get up to speed. There is really no way to update twice a day. Because of my broken hand, even if I look at the outline and code words, I have to code for more than three hours for a chapter.The result is that the viewing experience of this dungeon is not coherent, and the effect will be better if you watch it all at once.
The second is the characters. In this dungeon, the protagonist does not appear at all. Xiaobai and Shi'er are just playing soy sauce. A group of supporting actors are all performing there. Everyone will not have a strong sense of substitution. This is also mine. pot.
The third is, oh, there is no third.
In fact, there is a problem with writing my type of book, that is, the more difficult it is to write, because the psychological threshold of the readers is gradually increased according to the increase of copies. Maybe it is interesting to read a copy at the front. But the copy of the same level will feel boring if you put it later.
It's not that I don't want to write those routines that pretend to be face-to-face, it's not that I look down on them, it's that I really don't have the level to write.
Because I am a newcomer, not just, but a newcomer who is an author of online novels. Readers often wonder whose vest I am, but I am not. This is my first novel. The last time I wrote an article was probably when I was in school. Chinese language test composition).
So the problem is that I don't know how to write routines, and I also envy the big guy who can slap a villain back and forth, repeatedly, and endlessly to pull hatred in the face, how many words can be lost! ! ! !envious! ! ! !
As for the high IQs of the supporting actors mentioned by the reader, this is not actually a high IQ, but an ordinary person with normal three views. I just put myself in his situation when writing a character, understand the information he understands, and then To write his response in terms of my own.Let’s use a few tricks in the book as examples.
Duan Feihong, the owner of the Valley of the Medicine Kings dungeon, wants to betray the Valley of the Medicine Kings for his ideals. What information does he have at this time?
1. Through Li Jianshi asking for medicine when he was not injured, it was analyzed that the medicine was asked for by someone else, but it would not be someone from Xuantianzong, because in that case, she would not need to come in person.
Then who has nothing to do with Xuantianzong but has something to do with Li Jianshi?According to the list of people, it is "Jianyu Xiaoxiang", so it is easy to guess, something is wrong with Jianyu Xiaoxiang.
Then boldly guess and carefully verify, how to verify?In the first two episodes of the People's List, he reappeared and became the number one in the first issue, which shows that he has neither talent nor is he under 30 years old.He disappeared in the next issue of the list.
There are three possibilities. First, I am 30 years old, but I am stuck at [-]. There is a possibility, but it is very small.
Second, it is possible to be promoted, but it is very small.
Third, he was seriously injured, and there is supporting evidence. The evidence is that he killed Xiantian with a sword in the list of people. Note that it was mentioned in the book that Houtian killed Xiantian before.
According to Duan Feihong's understanding, this shows that Jianyu Xiaoxiang's swordsmanship and internal strength are absolutely top-notch, and he definitely used some secret method that hurt himself.
Then how to guess that his master is Sword Master?
Because he used a sword, and the two had similar records.
Lost the top [-] overnight.
The double-digit Tianbang was hacked to death in the first battle.
So Duan Feihong guessed that he was the descendant of Jian Zun.
Why not blackmail Li Jianshi with this matter afterwards?Just ask readers who have three positive views, for example, you are a miracle doctor, you know a big star, and then she has a rumored boyfriend who is a big sports star, and then this sports star may be injured but no one knows, this female star I found you through relationships, and asked you to open a pharmacy to treat him. You guessed that she was going to treat the sports star based on the scandal between the two of them in the news.Are you going to blackmail her with this?Say you have to ask your boyfriend to do me a favor in the future, for example, my son is going to participate in the school race, you have to let him run for you, otherwise I will expose that he was injured, who would do that?If it were me, I would be like Duan Feihong, make a good relationship, make a friend, maybe I will use this good relationship at any time.
There are also the two character lists in Heluolou, why did they say that the protagonist had an affair with a demon girl?First of all, this was inferred from the list of people, and because Ye Qingxuan sat at the same table with the protagonist, they were afraid that Ye Qingxuan would help the protagonist or stop them, and they couldn't figure out the relationship between the protagonist and Ye Qingxuan, so they I didn't want to offend the Taoist leader of the Taiqing faction, so I used these words to run Ye Qingxuan down, making Ye Qingxuan unable to help. That's right, the two of them actually said it to Ye Qingxuan, and they won't trouble them afterwards. It's a pity that they The two thought too much, and soon it was convenient.
In fact, I am also quite confused. What do you like to read about my books?Jokes?stem?Brainy dungeon story?Three girls tearing each other up?Alas, I can't figure it out.
Then I don’t know if everyone has discovered it. It’s the same in every dungeon whether there is a protagonist or not. Shaolin Temple he just helped the abbot direct a scene. The traitor is just a little more troublesome.
There is also the palace chapter, what did the protagonist do?It’s just an old eunuch cough, I just borrowed my pen name, I don’t know how to be a eunuch).
Moreover, he hasn't defeated the old eunuch yet, so it's not really his full strength, because he didn't use the third sword, but his physical condition at that time, if he used the third sword, his meridians would probably be cut off. He knew he was not in danger, so he was very Consciously summoned two girls to finish.
This dungeon is actually the same with him or without him. Perhaps his role is to prevent He Jinxi from taking Zhou Di to run away. Because he is there, the two girls are there, so the female masters of the two tailing girls are also there.
But it's not sure, the masters of the Great Zhou basically didn't come out to do it.
My idea is that everyone has their own story, and each dungeon has a protagonist. This protagonist is not necessarily Wu Qiong, he will be a participant and promoter of the dungeon, but he is not the protagonist of the dungeon.
Then someone suggested why not make a big villain to attract hatred?There will be big villains, but Wu Qiong's character probably won't be able to attract hatred. He belongs to the last knife player.
Even if Xiao Shulin breaks through the innate battle, in fact, they are not targeting him, they are targeting Su Mubai and Li Jianshi, whoever makes him have an affair with the two girls, he deserves to be beaten by gangs!
Then there are readers who have mentioned Lin Changxi and the like.
I haven't forgotten, as we all know, I'm a nameless person, so as long as there are characters with names and surnames, and they don't appear in the dungeons as protagonists or important supporting roles, there will be stories about them in the future.
Unless it has the same name as the group of Zhang San Li Si Wang Wu in the imperial city chapter.
Oops~ It seems to be a slight spoiler~ Just pretend you haven't seen it~
In short, this is my way of thinking, this time I have no experience, I have learned a lesson, as an apology, tomorrow. .No, it's already today, three chapters will be updated today, and they will be released at once.
Everyone also knows that if it is developed separately, I can shamelessly cheat a wave of clicks and recommendation tickets.
In short, the first book, I still hope that everyone will support it. .Since the opening of the book, I basically stopped taking jobs in the company. I had a dispute with my partner because of this, and I might have to give up one side. To be honest, I have lived in a muddle for more than 25 years. What exactly do I want? Now I can figure it out. I like novels, I like reading novels, and I like writing novels.If the grades are good after it is put on the shelves in the future, I may be desperate to code full-time.
If the grades are not good, then I can only find another job and write while going to work
Unknowingly, I have said so much, can we discuss it, how about this is also a chapter?In this way, for the first time in my life, I have achieved the achievement of the fourth chapter of the daily update!Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful~
By the way, I don’t know how to write testimonials when I put them on the shelves. It happened that some readers said that my love history was not bad. Then I will write another love history of my best buddies when the testimonials are on the shelves. He is much richer than me. .
Then if I am lucky enough to be able to go to Sanjiang, I will write about the interesting things I have encountered in my work in the past few years. I don’t know if you are interested.The premise is really lucky to be able to go up
Finally, according to the usual practice, ask for a favorite!Ask for a recommendation ticket! :3∠
Chapter 96 Any surprises?Surprised or not?Are you moved?
Three days later, in the evening.
"You said 'Tangxin Liulirui' matured tonight?" Li Jianshi asked in the conference hall of Yaowanggu.
"Yes." Duan Feihong said respectfully, "After today's work is over, 'Tang Xin Liu Li Rui' will be offered with both hands."
Anyway, he went to join Ji Shizong tonight, if Xuantianzong asked Yaowanggu to be held accountable in the future, it would be none of his business.
"That's good." Li Jianshi was in a good mood, so she wondered if she should care about her subordinate sect, "Master Duan, I heard that there will be a banquet in the valley soon, why didn't you invite me?"
Duan Feihong grimaced, "It's great that the young master can honor the honor and attend the banquet, but the old man just thinks that if the young master appears at the banquet, the boys in the valley will be out of their wits. Oh no."
What a joke!What if this girl was poisoned by him at the banquet!Originally, he ran away when he ran away, but if Li Jianshi were to follow suit, I am afraid that Xuantianzong would really hunt him down all over the world.
Li Jianshi smiled and pondered, "What if I have to go?"
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