Da Bong fights more people
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"can."
Xu Qi'an took out her waist badge and put it on the table. The waist badge was silver-plated, with a security pattern on the back and a "Xu" character engraved on the front.
Cai'er pursed her lips, shifted her gaze from the belt badge to Xu Qi'an, looked at him with admiration, and asked, "You, you are Xu Qi'an and Xu Yinluo?"
Xu Qi'an smiled: "You know me?"
"Of course I know. If you don't even know that there is a young genius like you in the yamen, then the slave family's ability to collect information is too low."
Cai'er looked excited, and said: "I know everything about you, you are the chief poet, you can solve cases like a god, in the year of Jingcha, the capital city was in turmoil, and it was all up to you to turn the tide, which calmed down the storm.
"I also know that you defeated Buddhist arhats in the capital; and when you were in Yunzhou, you alone blocked tens of thousands of rebels, and you were famous."
Xu Qi'an's smile froze.
Really, who the hell is blowing me?Has it already spread to the northern border? In the eyes of truly knowledgeable experts, I have completely become a laughing stock, right?
"Cough cough!"
He coughed and said, "Stop talking nonsense, let me ask you how the northern border has been doing recently. Has there been a large-scale war?"
Cai'er shook her head: "Although the barbarians have invaded the border, they are all small groups of cavalry looting, looting from east to west for a while. If there is a large-scale war, the people will flee south, and they will definitely pass through Sanhuang County. The slave family will not I don't know."
Xu Qi'an nodded, and asked again: "Are there any strange phenomena in various places, for example, a large number of people suddenly disappeared."
Cai'er frowned, thought for a moment, and said: "The slave family did not collect any relevant information, but after your reminder, the slave family remembered something, which is very strange."
Xu Qi'an raised his eyebrows and hurriedly asked: "What's the matter?"
"A while ago, the slave's house received a guest. He was a master with his own caravan. He sold goods all year round in Chuzhou. He drank too much that time, and he complained that Xikou County and the three counties under its jurisdiction did not know Why was it blocked by officers and soldiers, and the official road was completely sealed.
"He had to make a trip in vain. People ate horse chews all the way, and lost hundreds of taels of silver."
Xu Qi'an tapped his finger on the table, "Where is Xikou County?"
Cai'er saluted: "Just a moment."
She took out the box from under the bed, the bottom layer was a map, took it out, spread it out on the table, pointed to a certain place and said: "This is Xikou County."
Xikou County is in the westernmost part of Chuzhou, and it is next to the Buddhist land of the Western Regions. After Xikou County, it is the boundary of the Western Regions, so it got its name.
Xikou County does not border on the north.
"It's impossible to fight there, unless the northern barbarians make a detour, but the Buddhist kingdom in the Western Regions will not make excuses. In this case, why blockade Xikou County?"
A bold guess emerged in Xu Qi'an's mind.
He nodded calmly and said, "Do you have anything to add?"
Cai'er said: "I don't know about it outside, but the defense force of Sanhuang County has been strengthened a lot. In the past, there was no need for guidance, but now the investigation is extremely strict."
Xu Qi'an smiled: "Is it something that happened in the past few days?"
Who knew that Cai'er shook her head and said, "It was like this a month ago."
Hearing this, Xu Qi'an frowned immediately.
ps: Change first and then change, remember to correct errors.
This chapter is a bit short and weak, less than [-] words.
August summary
I don’t really like writing single chapters. A friend said a while ago that it’s best to write single chapters. It’s not only a communication with readers, but also a summary of myself. It’s also about talking about books so that readers won’t be confused.
Anyway, blah blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, I thought, it makes sense, so I opened a single chapter.
The second volume, so far, has written two-thirds of it. Except for the opening chapter of the case of Concubine Fu, the content is mostly about daily life and playful characters.Therefore, follow the ups and downs and ups and downs.
There is a very interesting phenomenon. At the end of the first volume, the readers clamored: We should look at the daily life instead of the case.We have to look at daily life, not pretense, which is boring.
However, the real situation is that as soon as I write daily, the subscription will drop, and as soon as I write about pretending to be aggressive, the subscription will skyrocket.
A man's mouth, a liar.
Pooh!
Let me talk about the difference between the second volume and the first volume. The first volume is mainly about cases, so the rhythm and layering of the plot are better.
The second volume will pave the way for the follow-up. Some characters need to spend a lot of pen and ink to write, because the follow-up plot is useful, and the foreshadowing must be done first.Many seemingly useless daily plots, in fact, will serve as a link between the preceding and the following at the end of the second volume.
The overall sense of rhythm is weaker than that of the first volume, but the portrayal of characters is definitely stronger than that of the first volume.
Just a little spoiler, there will be a big explosion at the end of the second volume, and then the whole book will turn.Of course, I haven't figured out how to write it.
This book has been written until now, and the good results are unimaginable, so it is even more difficult to walk on eggshells.Sometimes I care too much about rhythm and coolness, but let myself fall behind, lacking the aura of the first volume.
For example, the diary of listening to music in the beginning, such as Neptune’s fish breeding envelope, and Xu Lingyin’s stupid operation, etc.
These things don't help the main line, but they can make a book fuller, more deeply rooted in people's hearts, and improve its style.Bai Heshuang's book can be popular for a while, but when you look back many years later, you will find that it is nothing more than that.
However, books that focus on portraying characters will still remain in the hearts of readers many years later.
This is their advantage, the disadvantage is that you can't write too much.
If I spend a lot of pen and ink on the characters and daily life, it will definitely cause the whole book's plot to be stretched, and I can't have both fish and bear's paw.The daily life and characters are written very well, but you have read a lot of books with a plot that stretches your hips.
By the way, let me vomit another bitterness, the case of the bloody massacre has dropped a bit.The main reason is that at the very beginning, I haven't figured out the details of the whole case, so I have been stuck for several days, hahaha, this is my fault.
But there is no way, the book of case flow is different from other books.For other books, the plot has a general direction, and then you can open Word and do it directly.
A case is different, you have to think about all the details before you can start writing.The reason is simple, you have to ambush.
Most of the authors will bury the foreshadowing.
What is really difficult is the dense foreshadowing of short stories.The most difficult thing is short stories after short stories, and short stories after short stories test both writing skills and brains, which is generally impossible for authors.This is where the trouble with caseflow comes in.
Of course, I'm still far behind.
Moreover, the high-frequency updates of the Internet make it difficult to have enough time to do the plot. In the few days before the plot, I was working on the detailed outline and conceiving the case while drinking water. My hair fell out a lot and I was quite bald.
Fortunately, in the case of the Northern Territory, Xiao Gang did almost the same thing, and he knew which foreshadowings to bury.
It's not too long, and it can be finished this week, or even earlier.
Well, this is still not a separate case, it is linked with other cases, and it is also a foreshadowing of the follow-up content. In short, it is a case within a case, or a series of interlocking cases or something.
I haven't written this genre before, but it seems like a talent?In fact, there is a set of experiences and methods, which can be regarded as unique secrets.However, it is not perfect enough. I hope that after finishing this book, this set of secrets can be detailed and perfected.
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