The Internet celebrity participated in the role of Wolf Warrior, and the whole Internet scolded him

Good guy, the screenwriter is starting to question his own script?

Li Yi didn't answer Wu Jing's question, but just frowned and looked at Li Jiahang, asking, "Jiahang, do you also feel something is wrong?"

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not far away.

Seeing this scene, Yu Qian and Xu Zhanxiong were also taken aback.

This scene is already very tragic, what else is wrong?

Moreover, why is screenwriter Li Yi so willing to discuss with Li Jiahang?

Doesn't he trust Li Jiahang too much?

When Xu Zhanxiong was stunned, Yu Qian thought for a while and said, "Director Xu, what's the matter, isn't today's visit in vain?"

"Today is really eye-opening." Xu Zhanxiong didn't know what it was like.

He is not very old, and he can make a lot of films.

There have been nominations and awards.

This has never happened on his set.

The screenwriter has always been the person with the most say.

If the script is wrong, the screenwriter will also discuss with the director, or just ask the protagonist how he feels, why would he ask an internet celebrity?

Even if he put forward a little bit of his own opinion before, it wouldn't make the screenwriter believe him so much, right?

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the other side.

Li Jiahang pondered for a while, and spoke his thoughts.

"It's a little bit wrong."

"It's too loud."

He glanced at the actor and explained: "His acting skills are fine, and his lines are also very good."

"The overall tragic effect is not much different from the script."

"It's just that I think it would be better if the sound was smaller."

Wu Jing was a little confused, and subconsciously asked: "What do you mean?"

Chapter 41

On the side, screenwriter Li Yi blurted out: "If you can shout so loudly, you will have the strength to crawl back by yourself."

"This is tragic, too deliberate."

ha?

Too deliberate?

Several people in the director's team were startled.

Wu Jing frowned, lost in thought.

Li Gang also lowered his head, thoughtful.

not far away.

The eyes of Xu Zhanxiong who was standing with Yu Qian suddenly lit up!

That's right!

This lens, that's the problem!

It is tragic and true, but it is too deliberate, the traces are too obvious, and some force is too strong!

No wonder when I just watched it, I felt more or less awkward.

Xu Zhanxiong looked at Li Jiahang again with a different meaning.

This is really a treasure actor!

What a treasure!

As an actor, the most important thing is to think about the play.

Not only do you have to think about your own plays, you also have to think about other people's plays and scripts.

Only in this way can he understand the characters, understand the plot, and perfectly display the content of the script and the director's intentions.

It can be said that Li Jiahang's current performance is the vicious vision of a professional actor, screenwriter, and even a director.

Acting is an art.

This art is composed of many details.

The success or failure of a movie is likely to be related to a few key shots.

The tragic scene they shot now is the only tragic scene in the whole film.

Finished shooting, finishing touch.

If you can't shoot well, you will be scolded on the hot search.

"That's what it means." Li Jiahang nodded, and continued: "He was sniped and seriously injured, and his voice can't be so full of energy."

"A comrade-in-arms came up to rescue and was sniped. He was heartbroken and extremely painful."

"In this case, great power may be generated in his body, making him try hard to crawl back."

"Because as long as he climbs back, others don't need to rescue him, and he won't fall into the old cat's ambush."

Listening to his explanation, the eyes of Wu Jing and Li Gang, who still didn't understand at first, suddenly became much brighter, and they just felt suddenly enlightened!

That's right!

That's what I mean!

Not far away, Yu Qian was also shocked.

It is undeniable that he admires Li Jiahang very much, and thinks he is honest, friendly, kind, and good at acting.

But now, Li Jiahang's performance is really beyond his expectation!

"Director Xu, I..."

Yu Qian pulled Xu Zhanxiong, wanting to take him over to introduce him.

But Xu Zhanxiong shook his head, made a silent gesture, and pointed at Li Jiahang.

The implication is that Li Jiahang hasn't finished speaking yet, so wait a little longer.

He looked at Li Jiahang appreciatively, waiting for his next answer.

Li Jiahang didn't notice their small movements, but just continued to talk about what was in his heart.

"The officer turned over hard, struggling to climb back."

"The sniper fired again, hitting the arm and knocking him out of the crawl."

"Then at this time, Leng Feng and the others can show angry emotions such as tearing eyes."

"The officer, on the other hand, tried his best to raise his head, smiled miserably at them, spat out a mouthful of blood, shook his head slowly, and fell down slowly."

"Here he is dead."

"Laomao's sniper, choose the next target to shoot, and the soldier couldn't help but cry out in pain."

"Leng Feng and the others roared angrily. In this way, I feel that emotionally, it's more..."

Following Li Jiahang's voice, everyone's eyes became dull little by little.

His words are straightforward and easy to understand.

Everyone involuntarily brought them into the scene and into the picture.

Especially for an actor, the scene depicted by Li Jiahang appeared in his mind, and he couldn't help cursing: "The dog is an old cat!"

Chapter 42

A word to wake up the dreamer!

Everyone turned their heads and stared straight at Li Jiahang!

Talent!

This is really a treasured actor in their group!

If you can pass your own drama, you can also make very, very good suggestions for other people's dramas!

Especially Wu Jing, patted Li Jiahang on the shoulder heavily, and laughed loudly: "Trough! I really picked up the treasure this time!"

"Our film will definitely be a success this time!"

"Your uncle's!"

"Jiahang!"

"From today, no! From now on, you are the co-writer and co-director!"

Wu Jing's excitement made everyone even more astonished.

But then, they were able to understand again.

Based on what Li Jiahang said, he is qualified, absolutely qualified!

What's more, Li Jiahang proposed revisions twice today, each time making the logic of the whole plot smoother and more emotional!

[The host shocked the director Wu Jing, and gained a shock value of +300. 】

[The host shocked Li Gang, the deputy director, and obtained a shock value of +250. 】

[The host shocked the screenwriter Li Yi, and got a shock value of +350. 】

[The host shocked the actor...]

In just a few minutes, Li Jiahang's shock value increased by more than 1000 again.

This feels very good.

"Come on, come on, get ready to start up."

"Jiahang, this time you shout 'start'."

Wu Jing was extremely happy. After revising the script, she talked with the actors about the scene, and happily patted Li Jiahang on the shoulder. Then she called everyone to return to their positions and prepare for filming.

Soon, everything will be ready.

Li Gang handed over the loudspeaker to Li Jiahang, and said with a smile, "Jiahang, it's your first time, come on!"

"Attention all units, the actors are in place."

"3, 2, 1, turn on the microphone!"

Li Jiahang shouted, and everyone started performing again according to the revised script.

only......

Ideal is full, the reality is very skinny.

Although the actor tried his best to express a tragic feeling, whether it was his struggling movements or the close-ups of his face, they were too plain.

This is no way.

After all, he is a special group performer, and he is not an actor with a professional background. Naturally, his acting skills cannot be that high.

Being able to express inner emotions through heart-rending lines does not mean that he can express that feeling through eyes, expressions and body language.

This expressiveness is difficult.

The actor also knew his problem. After the failure of the first filming, he walked up to Li Jiahang and asked cautiously, "Mr. Li, can you tell me again, I'm not very good at acting."

If you want to teach others, Li Jiahang himself can't.

The system does have this auxiliary skill.