Miss Elf Dragon

"Routine"

William smacked this unheard word, feeling that it had some profound meaning.

"Yes, routines are things that can make adults' books more exciting."

Perotina looked very researched. She took two steps forward, took out the book of Knight's Creed that she had collected for many years and talked about it with William.

"Look, you wrote in Chapter 13 that you rescued a common girl who was bullied by a foreign noble, but in the end the girl took the initiative to follow him because she was greedy for the status of the foreign noble, which made you a lot of trouble. Good intentions have been wasted and you are disappointed."

"Such a plot is certainly a replica of reality, but it is not only derived from reality, but should be higher than reality. If you write this commoner girl into a strong image who does not admire money and power, she will eventually escape from it with your help. If you escape the entanglement of a foreign noble and return to a peaceful life, then not only will your experience be more valuable, but the girl will also establish a positive image for the world, which can guide more women to embark on the path of independence and self-defense. Such a story Wouldn’t it be more interesting?”

"Also, the part where you describe the beautiful lady during your first love relationship can also be improved. For readers, they don't know this lady, and their impression of her depends entirely on your words in the book. Description. So you dryly say that she is beautiful, has countless suitors, and is a famous social butterfly in the aristocratic circle. This is a bit boring. It is better to choose a suitor with outstanding personality and tell a story about them. And Alternatively, the suitor can become a destabilizing factor later in your relationship and thereby express your belief that the lady is unfaithful.”

In this era, it was still a very novel thing, so William's was widely circulated as soon as it came out. Even if there are many problems in it, and even if readers complain more than they appreciate it, it does not affect its popularity. Because it's new, it's rare.

But at the same time, this also means that some writing techniques that have been thoroughly analyzed in Perotina's previous life have not been widely circulated, and are even still in the stage of being explored. Therefore, in Perotina's opinion, William's story is actually very simple. Even though there are many fabricated elements in it, the narrative of the story is based on real situations, mainly documentary, and lacks the necessary artistic expression.

Perotina flipped through the book and pointed out two plot points that could be repaired. She explained them to William in detail, making his eyes brighter and brighter. In the end, looking at Perotina was like looking at a peerless treasure. It was so rare. .

"Yes, yes. If I write it as you say, it will indeed be much more exciting. I find it interesting just listening to your simple words. The effect will definitely be better if you write it carefully. You really know how to write stories. , I happen to be planning a new book recently, can you give me some pointers?"

Facing Perotina, William spoke very modestly. There are specialties in the art industry, and Pelotina is obviously more skilled than him in this aspect, so he respects her very much.

Pelotina closed the book with a smile, looked at William and said sincerely: "Sir William, I am indeed willing to discuss the content of the new book with you, but I have encountered a very troublesome thing recently, and I am afraid I don't have time to provide you with it. More help.”

William thought to himself, "It's finally here." It's good to ask for something, so he can naturally get what he wants in exchange.

William laughed heartily a few times, indicating that he had seen through Perotina's little trick, and then asked nonchalantly: "Tell me, what do you need me to do?"

Perotina stopped trying to trick William and stated her request directly.

"I want the token in Lord William's hand that can enter the Devil's Abyss."

"You want to enter the Devil's Abyss." The smile on William's face disappeared, and his expression became stern. He no longer looked like a gentle middle-aged uncle. "Who told you that I have a token?"

Perotina lowered her head slightly and replied calmly: "I think this question is not important. What is important is that you have it and I need it."

"Should I give it to you if you need it? Who do you think you are?" William snorted, a little impatient with this little girl who had admired him before. She was too ignorant.

"The choice is yours, sir. If you think I can't get this token, I will leave immediately and won't bother you again." Then think of other ways to enter the Devil's Abyss.

Although Perotina asked for help from others, she did not feel that she should be groveling, because such a gesture would not have any effect in the eyes of these big shots, and she would be looked down upon and laughed at. She only had one bargaining chip, and she was not sure that she would be able to impress William.

William sneered and was about to reject Perotina, but his eyes were attracted by the knight's creed in her arms. The book is a bit old, the cover has rough edges, and the pages are thickened by frequent rubbing. It can be seen that the owner of the book has read it frequently.

Thinking of the novel ideas the little girl had just told him, which she called "routines", William hesitated again. He was really excited about the longest road in the world.

"I don't think you can come out after entering the Devil's Abyss with your strength, so how can you provide me with ideas and help me improve my new book?"

William did not refuse directly, but instead talked about the new book.

Seeing that there was room for discussion, Perotina's eyes lit up, she raised her head and told William about her plan.

"The writing skills are actually the same. They just need to make some minor adjustments when used in different situations. I can sort out all the skills and then give some examples under different skills.

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Examples are provided so that you can see it clearly and get started very quickly. As for how to better apply them in the book to make the story more exciting, you still need to practice more, write more frequently, and become familiar with them. "

These skills were as precious to William as warrior secrets and magic books. Perotina was able to teach him unreservedly and share her own experiences, which made William more fond of her.

"Do you know who the dark elf Jonas is, the elf Adonis who entered the Demonic Abyss?"

William's tone softened and he asked Perotina two unrelated questions, but she almost shed tears.

"Adunis is my father, and I went into the Demonic Abyss to find him. Jonas Jonas is my friend." The last sentence Perotina said was a little weak.

"I'm not kidding when I say you won't survive after going in. Your father may be able to survive for a while after going in, but with his injuries, I'm afraid it will be difficult, let alone destroying the source of the devil. In your words, it may not be possible yet. When we found him, he was eaten by the big devil, elves are a rare and delicious food.”

William obviously saw Perotina's inhuman identity, and his persuasion was considered to be from the bottom of his heart. He doesn't mind who destroys the Demonic Abyss, and he is not a demon. Although he has gained the trust of the Blood Demon Lord to exercise the power of agency of the Hundred Years Demon Lord, they have not agreed on how he will do his best, so although giving the pass token is a bit troublesome, it is not a big deal. In his opinion, the writing skills used in exchange for his cherished thoughts were not a loss. He said this out of consideration for Perotina.

"I know all what your Excellency said, but I have to go, and I hope you can make it happen."

Seeing that Pelotina was firm, William stopped trying to persuade her. He turned around and walked back, taking Perotina to the First Knight's Castle to complete the deal.

"You come with me."

By the time Pelotina finished writing the routine book and got the token, half a day had passed.

After sincerely thanking William and saying goodbye, Perotina set off for the Devil's Abyss.

William stood in front of the door and watched Perotina's background disappear from sight. He shook his head and sighed, regretting that he could no longer see this interesting little girl.

After leaving Sin City, Pelotina only rode a short distance and had to dismount and walk.

The Demonic Abyss is the place where demons were born and have existed since ancient times. No one knows how many years it has existed, and no one knows why the devil race was born in this place. It is just that the Devil Abyss has appeared in front of people since the beginning of historical records.

The Devil's Abyss is called an abyss, but it is not a real abyss. It exists in a dimensional plane, and the entrance is in an abyss. To enter it, you need to pass through a period of time and space turbulence.

Sin City was originally built by demons who came out of the Demonic Abyss. Although the world has different names for demons and demons, they are actually the same species. Some powerful demons traveled through the turbulent areas of time and space and came to the outside world. They learned language, learned etiquette, and acted according to the rules of the continent. They slowly became a new clan and were accepted by other clans. Other demons continue to live in the Demonic Abyss, living primitive lives that best suit their natures. Therefore, there are actually many powerful demons in the Devil's Abyss. They just don't like life in the outside world and stay in the Devil's Abyss.

It is said that the Demonic Abyss is vast and has countless low-level demons, from small demons, elementary demons, medium demons, high demons to demon lords and great lords, and even the existence of demon kings.

Perotina was not nervous or scared inside, but there was a stronger force that supported her and kept her motivated. That is to find dad and take dad home

After trekking through the pitted wasteland and rugged mountain roads, Perotina finally saw the great chasm in the abyss. Looking at the constantly swirling turbulence of time and space that can turn people into meat in an instant, Pelotina actually felt a little warm. Close, she is very close to her father.

"Stop someone?"

The demons guarding near the abyss stopped Perotina as she approached, and raised their weapons at her vigilantly.

"The demon lord sent me to invite a demon lord to come to the city as a guest to help solve some minor problems. This is the token."

Perotina answered calmly according to the words William taught her. It is true that there are demon lords who occasionally find powerful demons to come out to help. This is very credible.

The guard looked at the token and listened to Perotina's words. Sure enough, he stopped stopping her and just muttered a few words.

"Is there any trouble in Sin City recently? Why does the Demon Lord frequently invite big demons out?"

Perotina felt excited after hearing this. That's right, dad is inside, and he should also be using the expression taught by William.

Standing in front of the large crack in the abyss, Perotina activated the power of the protective dragon scales, took a deep breath, closed her eyes and jumped down. After passing through here, she can enter the world of demons.

Perotina, who was resisting the impact of the time and space flow with all her strength, felt someone suddenly approach and grab her arm, and she seemed to hear the guard's angry voice in her ears.

"You guy, stop here. You are not allowed to enter without a token."

The guard's voice gradually became farther and farther away from the entrance, and Perotina could no longer hear it. She blocked her face with her other arm, barely opened her eyes a crack, and then saw the dark elf Jonas walking with her beside her.