Naruto: I used illusion to play with the ninja world

The gate of the tooth capital.

While the city guards were carefully checking the people passing by, a little green toad took advantage of the crowd and slipped into the city.

Naruto, who was hiding inside the toad, shouted excitedly: "Yeah, he slipped in! This ninjutsu of the lustful sage is so good!"

I really hope that Gamaji and Gamalong can also learn this trick, so that I can hide in their bodies and sneak into the enemy camp. "

Jiraiya curled his lips, that guy Bunta would not let his son learn such functional ninjutsu.

Just then the ground began to shake, and Naruto and Jiraiya looked at each other confused.

The next moment, the world was spinning, and the whole space was rolling up and down like a drum washing machine.

Naruto and Jiraiya were running around like headless flies.

Fortunately, this space was made of a toad's stomach, and although the two of them bumped around, they were not seriously injured.

It didn't take long for the commotion to subside, and Naruto and Jiraiya were lying on the ground gasping for air.

Naruto gasped and asked, "What the hell is going on here, Erotic Sage?"

Jiraiya said with a grimace: "I don't know! Maybe some nasty kid is catching toads!"

At this moment, the entrance to the space opened again, and the white light instantly sucked Jiraiya and Naruto in.

In the courtyard of Nobuhiko's house, Naruto and Jiraiya were lying on the ground in embarrassment.

Nobuhiko's clone was holding a green toad, tilting his head and looking at the embarrassed two people.

"You and Orochimaru are such good friends! This habit of spitting things out of your mouth is really the same," the clone said.

Jiraiya stood up and patted the dust on his body, then said with a confident smile: "Have you ever seen Orochimaru?"

The clone said: "I met him when he was the examiner of the Chunin Exam."

Jiraiya recalled the information about Nobuhiko Araki and roughly guessed the period.

At this moment, Naruto shouted anxiously: "It doesn't matter whether Orochimaru or not.

Your name is Nobuhiko Araki, right?Have you ever met Sasuke? Has Sasuke been here? "

Naruto's loud voice made Nobuhiko's ears numb.

He buttoned his ears and then said, "Why should I tell you? Who do you think you are?"

The clone naturally knew that this was the destined protagonist of the Naruto world.

Known as the son of prophecy and the reincarnation of Asura Chakra, Uzumaki Naruto.

But so what, the protagonist has multiple farts!

When the protagonist asks me a question, do I have to answer it?Besides, it’s not certain who will be the protagonist after I travel through time travel!

Just as Naruto was about to speak, he was stopped by Jiraiya. He was keenly aware of Nobuhiko's wording in the conversation just now.

He said, "Why should I tell you?" This meant that the other party did know something, and he was in the right place this time.

The next step is how to extract this information. Faced with such an inexperienced old man, Naruto will only do bad things if he talks nonsense.

So he stopped Naruto to prevent Naruto from messing up.

Although Naruto was impulsive, he didn't say anything when he saw Jiraiya's serious face.

After settling Naruto, Jiraiya showed what he thought was a kind smile and said to Nobuhiko:

"As Naruto said, we are looking for a boy named Uchiha Sasuke.

That boy had researched information about you before leaving.

We thought the boy might be looking for you, so we came to the Country of Teeth to have a look. "

The clone waved his hand and said: "I haven't seen it, I haven't seen it, leave quickly.

A small and remote place like the Kingdom of Teeth cannot accommodate you two great gods. "

At this time, Jiraiya's brain was running rapidly, and suddenly he thought of something and said: "You are bored here!"

The clone looked at Jiraiya in confusion, wondering what kind of medicine this guy was selling in his gourd.

Jiraiya took out a book from his arms and handed it to Nobuhiko.

Then he said with a smirk on his face: "This is my new book "Intimate Heaven Special Edition" that has not been published yet.

Could you please become my reader? "

Now the clone became interested, and he also read some novels about this world.

To be honest, these novels are a bit boring.

The plot is cliche and the same.

He suspected that these authors shared the same outline when writing novels.

The problem was that when he wanted to write a novel, he looked up the outline online but couldn't find it.

I heard that Jiraiya writes about the emperor's uncle, and I wonder if I can make him feel happy.

With a critical attitude, Nobuhiko opened "Intimate Paradise Special Edition" and read it carefully.

Jiraiya, on the other hand, held his head high and waited for this inexperienced little brother to bow down to his pen.

"What are you writing about? There is nothing like what I want to read.

You are simply trying to sell someone else's meat! ".

Jiraiya almost fell down when he heard this, with an expression of disbelief.

Others are blushing after reading his book, but this guy actually thinks that his content is not exciting enough!

He quickly came to Nobuhiko and explained: "You have only read the first three chapters, and this is not the exciting part yet.

You have to be patient and read on. The most exciting part of my book is after chapter ten. "

Nobuhiko's clone shook his head and said, "Your pace is too slow.

If a book wants to catch readers' attention, it must keep in mind the principles of the three golden cards.

That is to say, a point of conflict is established within the first three chapters.

Then use this point of conflict to gradually unfold your story.

You've spent the first few chapters introducing characters, and there's also a long section introducing scenery.

If all the readers are gone, who will see Chapter 10? "

As a best-selling author, Jiraiya instantly became angry at being lectured like this.

He was unconvinced and said: "Kid, have you read the book?

What I am writing is an adult book. Adult books should be told in a leisurely manner and should not be so impatient. "

Nobuhiko shook his head and said: "There is something wrong with your understanding.

The older the emperor, the faster the pace. It is best to get into a fight between men and women in the first scene.

Otherwise, you will be in the embarrassing situation where the reader has been in gear for a long time and your car has not started yet.

Also, the gear I am in is indeed the gear on the car, so don’t think too much about it. "

Jiraiya blushed and said, "Boy, do you know that you can't write like this?

You think that the publishing house is owned by your family, and it will be very troublesome to reject the manuscript and make revisions when the time comes. "

Nobuhiko threw the "Intimate Heaven Special Edition" back to Jiraiya and said:

"Don't you know how to write artistically? Do you understand the Spring and Autumn style of writing?

You know, you know, using baseball bats and grass to cover things up? "

After finishing speaking, Nobuhiko added: “Besides, your writing is too watery.

You spend the first six hundred words writing about scenery. Who would think that a book like yours is for scenery? "

This point was not easy to argue with, so Jiraiya lowered his voice and said, "Aren't all writers so good at word count?"

Nobuhiko shook his head and said: "Your word count can easily arouse readers' disgust. How can anyone start a book with such a low word count?

There are other better ways to reduce the number of words. Why do you have to write about scenery in a verbose way? "

Jiraiya asked: "Then how do you think we should improve the number of words?"

Nobuhiko showed a sinister smile and said: "You really know what you are asking."

Then Jiraiya also reacted and showed the same smile as Nobuhiko.

Naruto on the side scratched his head, wondering what the hell these two wretched guys were laughing at.