Reborn, I really don't want to fall in love

Chapter 39 Teachings to Yan Wei

"Don't worry, I'll take a closer look and tell you again."

Just now, Lin Yu's mind was elsewhere, and he didn't even have time to see what Yan Wei was writing.

"Yeah, okay, senior, don't worry."

Although Yan Wei was anxious in her heart, she still didn't look anxious on the surface to prevent Lin Yu from being unhappy.

Then Lin Yu stopped thinking and concentrated on reading the novel written by Yan Wei.

Although Lin Yu's writing level is not very high, he has been writing novels for several years. He still knows some basic aspects of the novel, how to write it, and whether it is good or not.

Soon, Lin Yu finished reading Yan Wei's opening chapter.

When Yan Wei looked at Lin Yu nervously.

Lin Yu spoke slowly.

"Your beginning is indeed very problematic, and there are many areas that need to be revised. If I were the editor, I would not agree to your draft."

Lin Yu's words made Yan Wei feel cold and could only bite her lips tightly.

"However, there are also many advantages."

This sentence made Yan Wei feel happy.

He quickly asked happily:

"Senior Lin Yu, there are some advantages at the beginning of my article."

At this time, Yan Wei was so shocked that she almost lost her confidence, so she couldn't wait.

Lin Yu glanced at the anxious Yan Wei, then looked at his own eager eyes. When he thought about Yan Wei standing on the podium two years later and four years later, there was an inexplicable contrast.

Lin Yu could imagine that after Yan Wei became famous by writing a book, she would stand in the spotlight and talk about her book writing process. It was a novel that a "senior" taught her to write.

He taught her until she became famous.

That must be interesting.

Lin Yu looked at the anxious Yan Wei and said with a smile:

"Don't worry, I'll analyze it for you slowly."

But what Lin Yu didn't know was that Yan Wei was also very shining in the school at this time and was the object of admiration for countless boys in the school.

It's just that Yan Wei is usually very aloof, which makes those boys stay away.

There are only a few outstanding boys who dare to step forward and pursue Yan Wei, but unfortunately, no one can catch up.

In the previous life, Lin Yu would work part-time as long as he had free time. He would only think about Li Yuxuan and would not pay attention to other girls at all.

Lin Yu didn't even attend the school party, otherwise it would be impossible not to know Yan Wei.

As a result, Lin Yu didn't know Yan Wei very well.

"The first problem you have at the beginning of this article is that you use too much writing, resulting in only writing but no plot."

"Then your plot is too scattered. I know you want to write everything in your mind at once. This won't work. You write a main line first, and then intersperse the branch lines later."

At this time, Lin Yu, after knowing that the girl next to him was Yan Wei, did not deal with Yan Wei casually, but gave a very serious lecture, using his three or four years of writing experience to explain this novel one by one. No reservations whatsoever.

Lin Yu knew very well that if it weren't for Yan Wei, he would not have embarked on this path. Yan Wei could really be of some help to him.

In addition, no one can reject themselves, there must be a well-known beautiful writer in their name.

When chatting with others in the future.

He said that a certain writer was his apprentice before.

Not to mention how much face you have.

Of course there is absolutely no reason why Yan Wei is so beautiful.

Lin Yu is not that kind of person.

It was just a surprise to Lin Yu, but it was reasonable.

After Yan Wei briefly explained herself how to write the beginning, she was not only able to figure it out under Lin Yu's simple explanation, but she was also able to draw inferences.

As expected of a talented player, his ability to comprehend is fast.

Lin Yu looked at Yan Wei's delicate face and couldn't help but admire in his heart:

"What's wrong, Senior Lin Yu, is there something wrong with what I said?"

Seeing Lin Yu looking at herself, Yan Wei felt a little embarrassed for some reason.

Seeing Yan Wei's eyes dodge.

She smiled in her heart, no matter how cold and desolate Yan Wei looked on the outside, she was still a little girl on the inside.

"No problem. You understood it very quickly. Based on your understanding just now, if you change the beginning now, you will definitely make a lot of progress."

Lin Yu said swornly.

I dare not say anything else. As for the opening draft, this Lin Yu really has absolute confidence. In those few years of his career as a street artist, he wrote countless openings, and they were not written in vain.

Even Lin Yu later sold the first one, but he didn’t know how many he sold.

If he hadn't been sanctioned later, Lin Yuguang would have made a lot of money just by selling.

"Really? Thank you so much, Senior Lin Yu. If it weren't for you, I would be so shocked that I don't know what to do."

At this time, Yan Wei no longer looked cold when facing other boys, but said very excitedly:

"It's okay. Your talent is also very good. If you stick to it, you will achieve unprecedented achievements in this industry."

Lin Yu said very sincerely:

"Is it true? Senior, I can really achieve certain achievements in this field."

Yan Wei looked at Lin Yu with beautiful eyes, a little unbelievable.

If it were Yan Wei in the past, she would definitely be very confident, but in recent times, the constant rejections and the editor's words have really made Yan Wei wonder whether she is really not suitable for this industry.

But Yan Wei really wants to be a writer.

"True, truer than gold, I never tell lies."

Lin Yu said with a smile:

"Yes, senior Lin Yu, I will definitely work hard and will not let you down for your help to me."

Yan Wei looked at Lin Yu with great gratitude. If it were another boy who said this, Yan Wei would just think that the boy was trying to please her and said nice things.

But these words of affirmation came from Senior Lin Yu's mouth, which made Yan Wei trust him very much.

Yan Wei believed that Lin Yu would definitely not lie to her just to please her. In Yan Wei's heart, it was already good that Senior Lin Yu was "not cruel" to her.

"Then senior, I can sit next to you and write a book. If I have any questions, can I ask you for advice?"

Yan Wei plucked up the courage and said.

At this time, Yan Wei, who had always been aloof, looked at Senior Lin Yu with a bit of embarrassment, fearing that Senior Lin Yu would reject her. After all, Senior Lin Yu at first was very concerned about disturbing him when she was next to him.

After speaking, Yan Wei became a little nervous unconsciously. This was a feeling that Yan Wei had never felt before. Even when speaking in front of the entire grade of teachers and students, Yan Wei had never been this nervous.

He was afraid that Senior Lin Yu would reject him.

"Yeah, okay, you can sit down, as long as you don't disturb yourself while typing."

Lin Yu said indifferently.

As long as Yan Wei doesn't get close to her intentionally, it really won't have any impact on Lin Yu. Moreover, it's pretty good to have such a good-looking girl sitting next to her and appreciate her when she has nothing to do.

"Really, senior, thank you very much."

Yan Wei was a little overjoyed. She thought Lin Yu would reject her.

"It's okay, just write carefully."

Lin Yu said.

Lin Yu looked at Yan Wei's happy look and didn't know what to say. How could she be so happy over such a trivial matter.

Lin Yu is now in the library, blowing on the air conditioner. Yan Wei is sitting next to him, smelling the fragrance of Yan Wei.

On the other side, Jiang Zijing's situation was much worse.

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