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Chapter 365 What is the most important thing about light novels?

"Now, except for eating, sleeping and going to the toilet, you spend all your time writing the story I told you. Don't worry about your 10-yuan gun article for [-] words. You can't make much money even if you write about smoking! "

Hill pouted: "But if my novel can't be published, I won't be able to generate income. I won't even be able to pay next month's rent. Then I won't be able to live. Insurance For my own sake, I still..."

Lin En held Hill's hand for the first time and said seriously: "How much money can you make by continuing to write other people's gun articles every month?"

Hill pursed his lips and said with some embarrassment: "More than 2000...it's really low in this city."

Lin En's lips curved: "Fool, if more than 2000 can make you unable to survive, I will give you these two thousand."

This heart-warming answer made Hill stunned. She stared blankly at Lin En in front of her and remained silent for a long time. There were little pearls brewing in her pale golden eyes. She wanted to pounce on him. A cry on Lynn's part.

Lynn: "Hey, are you so moved that you're about to cry... It's not that exaggerated, right?"

Hill took a deep breath, bravely held back his tears, turned his head away, and said shamefully: "No, I was just blinded by the wind!"

Lynn: "Then we made an agreement. If you write every day, I will come to supervise you every day and check whether you have completed it seriously~"

Hilton suddenly burst into tears and laughed: "Wow! How do you know that I am most afraid of being pushed for manuscripts!"

Unknowingly, the relationship between Lin En and Hill became much closer.

For several days, Lin En and Hill would meet in front of the bench downstairs. Lin En first transformed into a tutor, urging Hill to write novels every day. If there was any problem, Lin En would single out and criticize him.

"Hey, Hill, how can the protagonist be teased? This is a big mistake! Correct it quickly!"

Hill pouted and wanted to defend: "But... I think this is her... process of making friends."

Lin En corrected: "The reason why the protagonist is the protagonist is because she can do what others can't. If she was bullied, deceived, and played by others, would you be happy if you were the reader?"

Hill nodded: "Is that so...I understand."

Lin En held Hill's manuscript: "Also, can your layout be less dense? It's best not to have more than thirty words in a line, otherwise readers will find it very tiring to read!"

Hill didn't know where to put his hands, and said dejectedly: "I... Got it, Mr. Lynn."

Lin En: "Wait a minute, the protagonist came to a different world, and after casually defeating the god on Sky Island, he came to reality and lived a life of travel incognito. Don't you think there is something missing here? ?”

Hill looked confused, "I wrote it according to your outline, Mr. Linn, right?"

Lin En looked like he was sighing. He spread his hands and said, "Where are you shocked?"

Hill: "Eh? Are you shocked?"

Lynn: "I told you before that writing cool articles is like waves in the ocean. The cool points come one after another. It's just the difference between big waves and small waves. You can have crests one after another. But it can’t be a pool of stagnant water!”

"If I were to write it, everyone in the world would have witnessed the protagonist descending into the world and defeating the world's highest god at will. Everyone in that world would be shocked, whether they were the rulers in charge of the world or ordinary people. They were so shocked that they were incoherent, and they all wondered what it was."

"I will write at least five hundred more words about this place. In the end, people only see a touch of short golden hair and know that the being is blonde. Then the protagonist travels around the world, looking for his relatives. In the process, his identity is revealed, and he helps Ordinary people fulfill their wishes, and then they learn that the protagonist is so powerful!"

"Think about it, isn't it kind of cool when the protagonist's identity is revealed?"

Lin En's barrage of quotations made Hill's head buzz.

But Hill is also very perceptive, and he quickly understood: "So the core of Shuangwen is shock?"

Lynn: "Ahem... that's about right."

Lynn continued to help Hill analyze her light novels.

"By the way, and here, the protagonist befriends a girl named Mao Xiangling and wants to help her win the reward of the King of Kitchen Competition. But why did you choose such a difficult name!"

"But in the setting, her father's surname is Mao!"

"Then you can't call her Mao Xiangling. It sounds so ugly. Please correct it quickly!"

"Okay, I get it now."

For several days, Lin En and Hill would meet in front of the bench downstairs. Lin En first transformed into a tutor, urging Hill to write novels every day and helping her revise her essays.

Hill lived up to Lynn's expectations and wrote [-] words in five days.

Her pale golden eyes were now covered with bloodshot eyes, with dark circles appearing, and her body had lost weight. However, she was very excited when she thought that the beginning of her novel had been written and could be published!

Feeling anxious and looking forward to it!

Linn saw it in his eyes and felt pain in his heart. He rubbed Hill's head: "You have worked really hard these days, Hill. Let's go to Albert's place now and let him review the manuscript. By the way, your What title are you going to give to the light novel?"

Hill raised his head: "I thought about it last night. It's called "The Traveler's Bizarre Adventure" Mr. Linn. What do you think of this name?"

Lin En said with a dark face: "I don't think it's very good..."

Hill thought she would get praise from Lynn, but she didn't expect that Lynn would give a negative comment, which made her feel anxious again: "Hey... is there any problem, Mr. Lynn?"

Lynn: "Let me ask you, what do you think is the most important thing about light novels?"

Hill tilted his head and thought: "It looks good!"

Linn nodded: "Looking good is important, but it is not the most important thing. For light novels, the most important thing is the title."

Hill: "What about the title of the book? Mr. Lynn, you mean that my title is not unique enough."

Lin En nodded and said: "The first thing readers see is the title of your book, Traveler's Bizarre Adventure. Although it will arouse their curiosity, they don't know what this adventure is. They may not necessarily want to read it. desire.”

Hill glanced at the time on the clock tower and said nervously: "But the time agreed with Mr. Albert is coming soon, and I haven't thought about it yet!"

Linn narrowed his eyes and said: "If I were to choose this title, I would call this book "I! The Blonde Stranger, Breaking the Law of Heaven at the Beginning!"

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