Xiao Yan, the emperor's son who fights against the sky

Finish this testimonial

This book is truly finished today. From January 17th last year to today, 400 days and nights, 2.21 million words, it finally comes to an end.

First of all, thank you readers for your support. Again, without your support, I would not have persisted these four hundred days and nights.

Secondly, analyze the shortcomings of your own book.

First, because at that time I just wrote a small beginning on Zhihu on a whim, and I didn’t expect it to become popular. However, because of this, the time was too hasty, so I didn’t plan the previous plot carefully and just hastily. I wrote an outline and rushed to Qidian.

Secondly, it was because it was my first time to write a serious online article. I had written a lot before, but I had only signed a contract with one other fanfic, and both of them were less than 100 in the end, so I didn’t have any idea about it at first. This book has too many expectations and limited experience, so it actually has many flaws.

For example, many places were handled inappropriately at the beginning, and there were even some poisonous points.

In addition, the level of characterization is too poor, resulting in many places where the characters are too flat.

Of course, the biggest difficulty encountered in this book is that there are too many female protagonists. Because I am a straight man, my love experience is all on paper. Every time I write about emotional scenes, I tend to get stuck, so as the female protagonists become more and more There are more and more, and the heroine's character is also very bad.

Learning from the experience of this book, I will pay more attention to characterization in the next book.

The third thing is that I still don’t pay enough attention to this book, so that some places are poorly connected, and even some of the mess in the front has not been changed (you should think of it as a little ahead of time on the timeline of the world, because I Sometimes my mind just can’t think of it.)

But all in all, this book has been a huge gain for me, and it has allowed me to truly understand some of the basic rules and basic skills of the online writing industry (I personally feel that the progress in the plot rhythm is not small in the later period). Therefore, I am confident that the excitement and rhythm of the next book will be better than this one, and I will try to avoid any poisonous points.

Having said that, let me talk about the new book by the way. The new book is still a fan theme, but it is a Devouring Starry Sky fanfic. It is guaranteed to be absolutely enjoyable, so readers who are interested in Swallowing Starry Sky fanfiction can go and have a look, especially the new book issue, and follow up. It is important to every author, so I hope you will support it (new issues are free anyway).

Finally, I would like to express my heartfelt thanks to all readers. I really appreciate everyone’s support (Goutou).