When the hodgepodge world of anime meets the shadow king

Chapter 121 Fatty Xia and Little Golden Retriever

"Ahem, classmate, do you have any request from the Service Club?" Yukinoshita Yukino interrupted Zaimokuza Yoshiteru's harassment of Kitahara Akatsuki.

Kitahara Akira breathed a sigh of relief

They both have chuunibyou, but Rikka Takanashi is much better than Zaimokuza Yoshiki

Zaimokuza Yoshiki reluctantly turned his eyes away from Muramasa. He really liked this sword.

"You are not here because of my contract, but to fulfill my wish!" Zaimokuza Yoshiteru said to Hachiman in an exaggerated manner.

"Xiaoqi, his commission is not to cure mental illness, right..." Yuigahama Yui whispered beside Hikigaya Hachiman

"He has a Chuunibyou syndrome," Hikigaya Hachiman said helplessly

"It's just the same name, so I took the 13th shogun of the shogunate, Ashikaga Yoshiteru, as the design."

"Are Xiaoqi and him friends?"

Hikigaya Hachiman crossed his arms and said, "Maybe I used to have a Chuunibyou, but not now."

'I'm done with stupid fantasies'

"I'm the one talking to you. Please look at others when you talk to them. This is basic courtesy." Yukinoshita Yukino said coldly to Zaimokuza Yoshiki

"Such a mistake..."

"You are not allowed to use that tone either."

"...Oh" Zaimokuza Yoshiki instantly wilted

"Xiaoxue is amazing!" Yuigahama Yui exclaimed

"Then please tell us your request."

Zaimokuza Yoshiki took out a few stacks of manuscript paper and said, "I wrote a light novel and want to submit it to a newcomer award, but I don't have any friends. I want some readers' reviews."

"Light novel? That's amazing, it's the same as Kasumigaoka-senpai!" Yuigahama Yui exclaimed

"Kasumigaoka-senpai?" Zaimokuza Yoshiki blinked in confusion.

"Ahem." Kitahara Xiao pulled his thoughts back.

"So you want us to make some comments on this novel?"

"Why don't you upload your novel to a website? There should be people who review novels there. Their reviews are more professional than ours."

Zaimokuza Yoshiki lowered his head and said, "Because those guys have no sympathy, I can't live if I am criticized harshly."

He is so big, but his heart is surprisingly fragile.

"I think Yukinoshita would be even more rude than them," Hikigaya Hachiman said expressionlessly.

Yukino Yukino gave him a look

"If Zaimokuza-san doesn't mind, please show us the manuscript now," Kato Megumi said

Senior Kasumigaoka has asked for help with a similar request in the Service Club before, so I’m just giving some comments and suggestions now. That shouldn’t be a problem… right?

Zaimokuza Yoshiki nodded and distributed several stacks of manuscript paper to the members of the Service Club.

A few minutes later……

"Hehehe..." Yuigahama Yui put down the manuscript awkwardly, "Um... I don't really understand it."

"Hmm..." Kato Hui pursed her lips as if she wanted to say something, but she felt that it was a bit bad, so she held it back.

Kitahara Xiao quickly flipped through a few pages. With his reaction speed and memory, he could still remember the content clearly.

"What do you think?" Zaimokuza Yoshiki asked expectantly.

"How should I put it?" Kitahara Xiao scratched his face.

“To put it nicely, there is a promising future, great plasticity and much room for improvement.”

"To put it bluntly... this is just a bunch of crap," he said mercilessly.

"…………" Zaimokuza Yoshiki was petrified on the spot

"It's boring, so boring that it's unbearable. Even reading has become a torture." Yukinoshita Yukino continued

"First of all, the grammar is a mess, and the phonetic symbols are misused too much."

Yukinoshita Yukino rubbed her brows tiredly

She read some light novels written by Kasumigaoka Utaha during the last commission. The excellent quality made her even look forward to this commission.

As a result, Zaimokuza Yoshiki's work gave her a blow, the difference was like a state banquet and shit, she was numb

"Plop" Zaimokuza Yoshiki fell down instantly, feeling that life had no hope

"Hmm...did we say too much?" Kato Megumi felt sorry for Zaimokuza Yoshiteru who was lying on the ground.

"Don't worry, he can still hold on." Hikigaya Hachiman said he knew this guy well.

As expected, Zaimokuza Yoshiki stood on the ground for a while, doubting his life, and then got up.

"It would be great if Senior Kasumigaoka was here. After all, she is a professional novelist and her suggestions would definitely be more pertinent," Kitahara Akatsuki couldn't help but say.

The door of the "Dong Dong Dong" club was knocked

Yukinoshita Yukino looked over and said, "Come in."

The door was opened with a "crash" and Kasumigaoka Utaha walked in, followed by... Sawamura Eriri?

"Junior, I seemed to hear you saying my name just now. Did you miss me?" Kasumigaoka Utaha looked at Kitahara Akira with a smile.

"Xia Laofei! Can you stop being so narcissistic?" Sawamura Eriri looked at her with disdain.

"Little golden retriever, at least I have the capital to be narcissistic," Kasumigaoka Utaha said as she straightened her chest, and her two huge buns stood out even more.

Sawamura Eriri looked down at her washboard, and the word "井" gradually appeared on her forehead.

"What is this?" Kasumigaoka Utaha noticed the manuscript paper in Kato Megumi's hand.

"It's Zaimokuza-san's novel, and it's also a commission from our Service Club," Kato Megumi handed her the manuscript and briefly explained.

"As a professional novelist, can you give me some advice, Kasumigaoka-senpai?" Yukinoshita Yukino couldn't help but ask.

It’s better to leave professional matters to professionals. She’s afraid that if she keeps watching, she’ll go blind…

"No problem," Kasumigaoka Utaha took the manuscript and glanced at it.

Then Kitahara Xiao saw that she was gradually exerting force on the hand holding the manuscript, as if she wanted to crumple it into a ball.

"Don't say bad words, don't say bad words..." Kasumigaoka Utaha barely resisted the urge to curse her father.

After some explanation

"Thank you very much! I will not let you down!" Zaimokuza Yoshiteru left the service department as if he had found a treasure.

He is now inspired and has to revise the manuscript.

Yuigahama Yui's eyes lit up. "As expected of Kasumigaoka-senpai, she solved it in one go. How amazing!"

After reading Zaimokuza Yoshiki's manuscript, she just wanted to sleep, but Kasumigaoka Utaha was able to force herself to finish reading and give professional advice

"Humph, it's just shit luck." Sawamura Eriri crossed her arms and looked at Kasumigaoka Utaha with disdain.

"It's better than some useless golden retriever."

"you!"

"Um, Kasumigaoka-senpai and Sawamura, do you have any request from the Service Club?" Kitahara Akatsuki interrupted them.

"I want to join the Service Club for the same reason as the last request."

"For material?"

Kasumigaoka Utaha nodded and said, "Of course, I will also participate in the club activities. Is that okay?"

Kitahara Akatsuki looks at Yukinoshita Yukino

"Of course," Yukinoshita nodded.

Kasumigaoka Utaha is also the top student in the grade, and her ability is unquestionable. She just helped them complete Zaimokuza Yoshiki's commission, so she couldn't think of any reason to refuse.

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