After picking up a system

Chapter 334: Cold Day Visit 17

Grave Grass: [Mom, I have made it. I have been appreciated by the eldest lady!]

Grave Grass: [Thank you Miss for letting my transparent work be seen/blow a kiss//blow a kiss//heart//heart/]

The widow who couldn't find her husband's grave: [The script written by Bao is really good, /pull me over and kiss me/]

Winter Sunlight: [.......]

Winter Sunlight: [Let’s discuss the script.]

The widow who couldn't find her husband's grave: [Ouke Ouke!]

Overgrown with grass: [OK]

Winter Sunlight: [Themes of suffering are not easy to pass the review.]

The widow who couldn't find her husband's grave: [Here's a classic cliché of first suffering and then happiness.]

Overgrown on the grave: [Where does sweetness begin?]

The widow who couldn't find her husband's grave: [After her son ran away.]

Overgrown with Grave Grass: [It is difficult to get out of trouble without external help.]

The widow who couldn't find her husband's grave: [Then give her some external force.]

Graves covered with grass: [What kind of external force is it? ]

The widow who couldn't find her husband's grave: [National policy.]

Winter Sunlight: [Topics involving relevant policies are also difficult to pass review.]

Overgrown Grave Grass: [The review process is really becoming more and more stringent.]

The widow who couldn't find her husband's grave: [What should I do?]

Winter Sunlight: [Correct science, vague details, focusing on the completeness of the plot.]

Grave Grass: […So my storyline is not complete enough?]

Winter Sunlight: [Can be more complete.]

The widow who couldn't find her husband's grave: [Fill in the expression and tone in brackets?]

Winter Sunlight: […It hasn’t come to that yet.]

Winter Sunlight: [It lacks memorable points and the logic is not smooth enough.]

Winter Sunlight: [The obsession with white shoes can be written in depth. The reason for the alienation between classmates. The protagonist's attitude towards his parents. The reason for the formation of this mentality...]

The widow who couldn't find her husband's grave: [Wow!]

Graves covered with grass: [Wow!]

The widow who couldn't find her husband's grave: [Director Fu, you are awesome!]

Overgrown Grave Grass: [Director Fu, you are awesome!]

Overgrown Grave Grass: [Hmm? No, Director Fu?]

Graves covered with grass: [Ah? Director Fu! ! ! ! ! ]

Grave Grass: [Sister sister sister sister sister!!! @Is the widow who can’t find her husband’s grave the Director Fu I was thinking of? ! ! ]

The widow who couldn't find her husband's grave: [If you are talking about Director Fu whose name is Fu Yingxuan, then you are right.]

Dong Ri Ri Guang: [Hello. My name is Fu Yingxuan.]

Overgrown Graves: [Ahhhhhhhhhh!!! It’s Director Fu!!!]

Overgrown Grave Grass: [You have been away from the Jianghu for many years, but your legend is still alive in the Jianghu!]

Growing Grave Grass: [I like you so much. It is because of you that I chose to take the art exam and study directing. You are awesome!]

Overgrown with grass on the grave: [Wow, sister you are so great @The widow who can’t find her husband’s grave/love you/]

Winter Sunlight: [Thank you for your love, but don’t change your future because of one person. If you really like the director, then I will be your guiding star. If I rashly change the trajectory of your life and make you go against your ideal, then I will be the sinner who led you astray.]

The widow who couldn't find her husband's grave: [This is so serious.]

Grave Grass: [You don't need to waste your energy. I was already an adult when I made the decision. Writing has always been my hobby, and my parents agree. I hope you are in good health and produce more and better works.]

Winter Sunlight: [Thank you.]

Fu Yingxuan didn't expect that she had so many fans who cared about her health.

This was the case with Meng Jing before, and it is also the case with the grass growing on the grave now.

I feel like I'm in a better mood now.

......

The widow who couldn't find her husband's grave: [I think the white shoes can serve as a small clue, a memory point.]

Winter Sunlight: [Yes.]

Overgrown with grass on the grave: [How do you say that?]

The widow who couldn't find her husband's grave: [As a left-behind child, the protagonist's financial situation is definitely a little behind. Others get new clothes once a year, but she only gets them every two or three years. The pair of white shoes that became popular in elementary school is a wish she dared not speak up for.]

The widow who couldn't find her husband's grave: [The protagonist's grandparents bought him a pair of white shoes, but they didn't wear them often, so the shoes didn't fit him anymore. It was a pity that the shoes that didn't fit him would wear out if he wore them every day. After all, he had to go up the mountain to do farm work, and he had to walk a long way to go to school.]

Graves covered with grass: [Buffs are stacking.]

The widow who couldn’t find her husband’s grave: [/knock//knock/]

The widow who couldn't find her husband's grave: [You change it!]

Grave Grass: [How about we give the protagonist a name first? I am a bad name picker and have no talent for naming, so I’ll write it in the first person.]

The widow who couldn't find her husband's grave: [That's a good question. Director Fu on @冬日日光]

Winter Sunlight: [I don’t know how to do it either.]

The widow who couldn’t find her husband’s grave: […]

Graves covered with grass: [......]

The widow who couldn't find her husband's grave: [Then let's just keep calling him the protagonist.]

Grave Grass: [Okay.]

Winter Sunlight: [Good]

The widow who couldn't find her husband's grave: [What do you think of me? @冬日日光. ]

Winter Sunlight: [It's a bit far-fetched, so I'll add some scolding to embellish it.]

Graves covered with grass: [Damn it, the living King of Hell has appeared!]

Winter Sunlight: […]

The widow who couldn't find her husband's grave: [How about adding a sharp tongue but a soft heart, cursing and swearing while buying her granddaughter a pair of shoes that fit her feet, because she was afraid that her shoes would no longer fit her feet, so she used them very frequently, and it was reasonable that they were worn out.]

Winter Sunlight: [Yes.]

Overgrown with Grave Grass: [I am now inspired by a new idea!]

The widow who couldn't find her husband's grave: [Should I write about the pair of white shoes that fell off as well?]

The widow who couldn't find her old man's grave: [No, this doesn't make sense, logically or emotionally.]

Overgrown with grass on the grave: [Ah? The author did his own reading comprehension of the article. An old man on the subway looks at his phone.JPG]

Winter Sunlight: [The worn white shoes represent the love of my grandparents and the memories of those days. The new white shoes represent my desire for my parents’ care.]

Winter Sunlight: [The parents didn’t care much about the protagonist, and were relieved when their request was rejected.]

Grave grass: [vocal! Need to grow a brain/scratching head/]

The widow who couldn't find her husband's grave: [Because the education she received was repressive, the education she gave her son was also repressive. Isn't her son's running away a kind of revenge against his mother?]

Overgrown with grass on the grave: [taking notes like crazy]

Dong Ri Ri Guang: [One’s own efforts are also important. The idea of ​​learning to change one’s destiny needs to be passed on by someone.]

The widow who couldn't find her husband's grave: [The teacher who said the protagonist was very spiritual and gifted was the first disseminator, and one person is not enough.]

Winter Sunlight: [The difference between urban and rural education is not only reflected in the level of teachers, but also in the gap between the rich and the poor. Things that are commonplace to classmates may not even be heard of by the protagonist, such as correction tape. She has only heard of correction fluid and the like.]

The widow who couldn't find her husband's grave: [The protagonist's grades must be very good, and there must be a gap in grades after coming to the city.]

Dong Ri Ri Guang: [The school gives quotas to students from other towns, and you can see people from other towns coming to school. Some apply for subsidies, and some drop out due to family reasons. Everyone should have friends.]

......

This was truly an enjoyable script discussion meeting. Even after the chat had ended, Lu Chijing was still writing and drawing on his notebook.

Looking through the chat records, I just felt excited and tired.

My script was noticed and the investors also helped me find ways to improve it in a reasonable way.

Oh my God, please give him more investors like this!

As a fledgling screenwriter, he couldn’t sell his scripts. But now, he is about to make his first pot of gold!

Hey hey hey.

A rookie: [Little grass, little grass, go to bed early~]

Lu Chijing: [Okay, sister too, go to bed early. Good night~]

A rookie: [Good night]

Lu Chijing reorganized the outline, tidied up the desk, washed up, and went to bed.

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