Rebirth Era: After the Beautiful Sister-in-law Refuses to Open Business
Chapter 432: Not Holding
He is about the same height as Wu Dong, with a tall and strong body. Compared with Wu Dong who is taciturn, this one is obviously more talkative, but he doesn't say everything. It is obvious that he has received rigorous training and is very disciplined.
"Sister-in-law, you don't have to accompany Qin Yaxin and me to register at school tomorrow. We are already grown up and we won't get lost."
Tomorrow is the first day of school registration. After dinner, Qin Boyan heard Song Lan explain that he would go to the kindergarten to register the two children early in the morning, and then accompany him and Qin Yaxin to the town middle school to register. He couldn't help but express his thoughts.
Before Song Lan could speak, Qin Yanzheng glanced at his stupid brother and said softly, "I will take a day off tomorrow, and I will go with you to register with your sister-in-law."
Qin Yanzheng has not had to work overtime since the New Year. He goes out every morning and basically gets home on time after get off work in the afternoon. As usual, he does not go home for lunch.
And he would be resting at home tomorrow, so naturally he would have to follow his wife's pace.
"Brother, that's not necessary!"
Qin Boyan made a bitter face: "I will be laughed at by my classmates!"
"What are you laughing at?"
Qin Yanzheng raised his eyebrows.
"They'll say I'm a little brat who hasn't been weaned yet!"
Qin Boyan's eyes were full of resentment: "Brother, I beg you and sister-in-law, tomorrow you take advantage of the weekend to have a good rest at home, I will ride my bike to take Qin Yaxin to school,
It won't take more than a few minutes to register us. As for the safety on the road, I'm not exaggerating. With Qin Yaxin and I's current strength, dealing with two or three little hooligans is definitely a piece of cake!"
"See what you can do."
Qin Yanzheng glanced at Qin Boyan again and said, "No room for negotiation." He listened to his wife and didn't care whether the brat would be laughed at by his classmates for not being weaned.
Song Lan smiled and said, "Second brother, I'm going to town to buy some things tomorrow, so I thought I'd accompany you and second sister to school to register. If you really don't want me and your eldest brother to follow you, you and your second sister can go directly to the school gate when you get to town, and your eldest brother can accompany me to buy things."
"I listen to my wife."
Qin Yanzheng expressed his position immediately.
Qin Boyan and Qin Yaxin turned their gaze to Qin Yanzheng with meaningful expressions in their eyes: Brother (Comrade Qin), you are really awesome!
The two little ones also looked at Qin Yanzheng, but they didn't understand why.
Qin Yaqing and Yang Fan also looked at Qin Yanzheng, and they both felt so full!
Song Lan's cheeks flushed. She glared at the man and then said to the two children, "Let's go. Sister-in-law will take you to wash up."
"no, I'm fine,"
The two little ones shook their heads and waved their hands. The cute kid Xiaowu said, "My sister and I can do it ourselves!" Standing up, the cute kid Xiaowu held his sister's hand and walked away with his short legs.
Song Lan: "I'll go watch over Xiaowu and Xiaoliu, so they don't get burned accidentally when they pour hot water to soak their feet."
Qin Yanzheng: "You take a rest and I'll go."
As the sound fell, Qin Yanzheng's figure disappeared from the living room.
"Sister-in-law, I have something to tell you."
This is Qin Yaqing's voice. She stood up and said, "Can you go to my room?"
Song Lan smiled and said, "Okay."
After the two left, Qin Boyan and Yang Fan started chatting, while Qin Yaxin went back to her room to get her toiletries.
"I recently took some time to write two manuscripts and would like to ask my sister-in-law to take a look at them for me."
Following Qin Yaqing to the other party's room, Song Lan saw the sister-in-law take out a few pieces of letter paper with words written on them from the drawer and handed them to her. She took them and heard Qin Yaqing's voice again:
"One is a poem, and the other is a novel. However, I have only written 2,000 words for the novel. The background of the novel is the place where I went to the countryside, and the content is related to us educated youth and the villagers in the village."
Song Lan nodded to indicate that she understood, then she sat down on the bed and started reading the two manuscripts given to her by Qin Yaqing.
About five or six minutes later, Song Lan spoke. She first gave her opinion on the poem written by Qin Yaqing and suggested some revisions. Then she put forward her own views on the novel written by Qin Yaqing. Finally, Song Lan said:
“In short, whether it is poetry, novels, or other literary genres, in my opinion, they must be close to life and positive, so that people can be inspired and enlightened after reading them.
Your writing is good, but the content is still lacking. If you think the points I pointed out and the suggestions I gave you make sense, you can revise it and rewrite it before submitting it. If you want to try submitting it first, that's also fine."
After a pause, Song Lan continued, "If you have time, read more newspapers. I think you should be able to gain a lot of what you want from them."
"Thank you, sister-in-law! I think the places you pointed out really need to be revised. Your suggestions are also very good. I know you are guiding me to improve my writing skills."
Qin Yaqing's eyes were filled with sincere gratitude.
Song Lan smiled and said, "You don't have to thank me. I am your sister-in-law. I am looking forward to you becoming a great writer in the future!"
In her original world, she occasionally participated in poetry gatherings held by young ladies from various mansions, and her poems always took the lead.
Even those young men of noble families with outstanding talents and many officials in the officialdom, who had appreciated her poems, gave them very high evaluations. Based on this, without her knowing it, her talent had spread throughout the capital, and she was even known as the "first talented woman."
There is little romance or whining in her poems, but most of them are related to what she saw and heard when she accompanied her grandfather on his medical practice.
Contains all aspects of life!
After coming to this world, although she didn't write much, she had read a lot of newspapers. In addition, with the memories left by the original owner, she was naturally familiar with the current social structure and people's lives.
In her opinion, if you want to submit articles to newspapers, there is nothing wrong with keeping the content close to life and using a positive style!
……
The night outside the window was as dark as ink, and the whistling wind made people feel cold all over.
Song Lan was held in Qin Yanzheng's arms, and the other party's clear yet gentle voice rang in her ears.
"What did my elder sister tell you?"
"I was asked to help with two manuscripts, one is a poem and the other is a novel, but the novel is only 2,000 words long."
"Big sister wants to submit an article to the newspaper."
Qin Yanzheng used a declarative tone.
Song Lan hummed, and said with a smile: "My eldest sister's writing is very good. I think our family will have a great writer in the future!"
"Don't praise her too much. If she keeps getting rejected, given the way my eldest sister keeps everything to herself, she might get sick."
Hearing Qin Yanzheng say this, Song Lan twisted the soft flesh on his waist. Well, he didn't use much force, but Qin Yanzheng still cooperated by making a "hiss" sound, expressing that he was in pain.
"I didn't use any strength."
Song Lan didn't want to take the blame. She turned over and lay on her back, saying, "My eldest sister is a little naive and doesn't talk much, but I can see that she is changing, otherwise she wouldn't have asked me to help her look at those two manuscripts.
In addition, I am not praising my elder sister. I am telling the truth. My elder sister's writing style is indeed good. As long as she persists on this path of writing, she will definitely become a great writer in no time. "
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