I wanted to be a bad actor in the anime, but I failed.
Chapter 130: Hands off the shopkeeper
Mu Lin was unhappy that someone was interfering with his playing games.
He put down the game console, crossed his legs, and propped up his chin, with an attitude of a king looking down on the common people, which made people wonder whether this club was called the Service Club or the Served Club.
Zaimokuza was sweating profusely as he handed over the manuscript of the novel as if he were handing over a memorial.
But Mu Lin didn't answer, instead he asked: "So why don't you post this light novel on the website? If you post it on the website, someone will naturally give you comments."
"Online, online readers are merciless. I'll die if they give me a bad review."
"So you think we'll show mercy?"
"Well..." Zaimokuza scratched his head awkwardly.
Mu Lin glanced at him calmly, took the notebook and flipped through it casually.
In the eyes of others, this action was like someone deliberately hitting his hands with the turning pages without even looking at them and enjoying the touch.
Under the puzzled gazes of others, Mu Lin threw the notebook directly onto the table.
The original manuscript of the novel, which was very precious to Zaimokuza, slid one meter across the table and landed next to a red laptop.
Even Yubibin Yui couldn't bring her attention back to her senses. Kasumigaoka Utaha miraculously broke away from her creative enthusiasm and looked at Mu Lin in confusion.
"What?"
"This is the original manuscript of his novel. Please help him take a look."
"Why do you want me to see it?"
"Why did you say?"
Mu Lin picked up the game console and continued playing, as if he was a hands-off boss.
Kasumigaoka Utaha frowned unhappily.
While teaching others how to write novels, your own creative abilities can also be improved.
Just like math teachers often ask students to teach each other math problems to improve their grades.
When teaching others, the one who is teaching can also consolidate his or her own knowledge.
The reluctant Kasumigaoka Utaha finally took a deep breath, picked up the notebook and started reading quickly under Zaimokuza's hopeful gaze.
As expected of a light novel writer, he has a solid foundation in writing and reads very quickly.
If it were someone else, it would definitely take more than two or three hours to read, but Kasumigaoka Utaha only took less than 20 minutes.
"call……"
She exhaled a breath and calmed her agitated emotions.
"You said you were going to submit this novel for a newcomer award?"
"Yes, yes! May I ask if I am eligible to win the prize?"
Zaimokuza thought he would get a positive answer because he was very excited when he wrote this novel! He felt that this novel would become a masterpiece that would shock the novel circle and even the whole world!
Thinking of this, he couldn't help but straighten his chest and raise his head. Just as he was about to laugh out loud, he received a shocking answer.
"It's just wishful thinking!"
"what?"
"This novel, which is based on a defense, is simply not meant for people to read!"
After cursing this, he looked at Zaimokuza's distraught and unbelievable expression.
Kasumigaoka Utaha always felt a strange sense of déjà vu.
But she had to admit that she felt very comfortable being able to evaluate others from a high position.
Damn it! Was that why he scolded me for writing such a bad novel?
Thinking of this, Kasumigaoka Utaha gave Mu Lin a hateful look.
But maybe that’s not the case…
After all, this novel was so bad that it gave her a headache! She felt that her life had been insulted!
Utaha Kasumigaoka felt that scolding her for relying on the defense was the least of her worries.
"No, it's impossible! My novel can't possibly be as bad as you say!"
Zaimokuza's mysterious self-confidence gave Kasumigaoka Utaha a sense of déjà vu.
This sense of déjà vu made her feel even more unwilling to accept the outcome.
She glanced at Mu Lin, then looked at Zaimokuza and said calmly, "I'm sorry, your novel is just so bad! It's almost beyond repair!"
"It's so boring! It's a torture for readers! Not to mention the plot, even the grammar is a mess, which makes me wonder if you slept through Chinese class in elementary school! Moreover, the plot logic is completely nonsensical and self-entertaining. Why do the female characters have to take off their clothes during the battle? Why are all the names of the moves in English? Does English make it seem more advanced? And you haven't finished this novel at all? There is not even an ending, which makes it hard for me not to suspect that you wrote this novel because you suddenly felt like it..."
“Ah! Stop it! Stop it! Spare my life!!”
Zaimokuza ORZ fell to his knees, like Sun Wukong who was being cursed, with his hands on his ears and shaking his head in pain!
Looking at his miserable appearance calmly.
Kasumigaoka Utaha continued, "Your novel manuscript is so bad that I can't give you any suggestions for revision. You should take it back and revise or rewrite it carefully! By the way, it's best to read more books of the same type before writing! Also! If possible, please repeat your elementary school Chinese class."
"Shiyu, that last bit is too hurtful, isn't it?" Yui Yui couldn't bear to look at Zaimokuza rolling on the ground.
Finally, Zaimokuza came out of his autistic state caused by the poisonous tongue.
He was in despair for a long time, but finally mustered up the courage to ask, "Excuse me, could you help me take another look next time?"
Yui Bibin complained: "Are you a masochist?"
"No! Even though it's a completely negative review, at least it's a sincere feeling about the novel I wrote! This is something worth being happy about. Besides, I'm a great swordsman! How can I be defeated by such a small setback? Just wait! In the near future, I will definitely write a new work that is better than this!"
Zaimokuza gave a thumbs up with high morale.
"It's not much better than this one."
Kasumigaoka Utaha's words made his thumb tremble slightly.
"Besides, I probably won't have the chance to see your new work again."
"Eh? How come?"
"I'm sorry, he and I are exchange students. After we leave, this service club will be disbanded."
"I-Is that so..." Zaimokuza said dejectedly, "But it doesn't matter! I can naturally find other people who are willing to help me! Then I will take my leave first! Goodbye!"
Zaimokuza walked away with the manuscript of the novel, leaving behind a lonely figure.
This helpless figure made Yubibin Yui sympathize and say: "It's a pity that such a good service club will be disbanded."
Yukinoshita Yukino remained silent, and no one knew what she was thinking.
At this time, Kasumigaoka Utaha suddenly asked Mu Lin, who had been playing the video game from beginning to end.
"What did you feel when you read my novel?"
"Same as you just did."
"impossible!"
There is no doubt about Kasumigaoka Utaha's tone!
Because it is absolutely unquestionable that her novels are much better than Zaimokuza's!
And this arrogant young man actually arrogantly said that their novels were of the same level!
"Heh, to me, the level of your novels is indeed the same, all 0 points."
"you……"
Deeply shocked, Kasumigaoka Utaha, who just had some understanding of Mu Lin, now thinks he is a complete bastard!
"Hey! No, stop arguing!"
Yui Bibin intervened between the two and tried to stop the fight.
"Humph."
Yukinoshita Yukino on the side opened "I Am a Cat" and continued reading with boredom.
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