Zongman: Unknowingly trapped in the hatchet

"I'm sorry, I think you're right."

Zaimokuza also realized that his ignoring of Yukinoshita's words just now was extremely rude, and apologized to Yukinoshita.

"So you can still speak in a normal tone."

Yukinoshita sighed, and it was hard to tell whether it was a sarcastic remark or a compliment. She just stared at Zaimokuza with her beautiful eyes, and the other party suddenly

"Well, he actually didn't mean any harm." Hikigaya felt that he still needed to save this bright red life. After all, he couldn't do it in front of him, it would be unlucky~

At this moment, Hikigaya truly has the qualities to be a great bodhisattva.

"Hachiman, I knew it..."

"Stop, stop, stop. Don't rush over here..."

Yukinoshita looked at the two of them, sighed, and spoke helplessly.

"So, what exactly is your commission?"

"Do you want us to help you appreciate the novel you wrote?"

Su Qing, who had been silent for a long time, noticed the papers scattered everywhere at the beginning. Because the handwriting on them was sloppy, he thought it was some math draft paper at first. After taking a few more glances, he realized that it seemed to be the content of a novel.

Although it is written in a fierce and aggressive way, it can't be compared with Shiina, but after reading it carefully...

Still a lump.

"Yes, in fact, I plan to submit this light novel manuscript to a newcomer award, but I don't have any friends, so I hope you can read my novel and give me some suggestions and thoughts."

Didn't this guy just state a very sad fact in all seriousness?

Why aren't people like this recruited into the Service Club? Does the center for problem children also need Kayan?

However, novels, I miss them a little bit.

Su Qing thought so, but his eyes glanced to his side.

"By the way, Yui, how long are you going to keep your head on my shoulders? It's very heavy."

"No, it's not serious!"

Since Yui couldn't understand what they were talking about, she could only act like a koala baby, hanging her head on Su Qing's shoulder and staring at Su Qing and the original manuscript of the novel in a daze.

Although she had nothing to do, she felt safe being in contact with Su Qing. However, after hearing Su Qing say that she was heavy, she couldn't help but tap Su Qing's shoulder lightly, and then ran behind Yukinoshita to seek shelter.

Of course, Yui definitely didn’t do that because Su Qing would really fight back, she just wanted to find Xiaoxue.

Su Qing gave Yui a blank look. This girl had no idea how uncomfortable he felt when her slime kept rubbing against his arm.

Then, Su Qing looked at Zaimokuza and asked.

"As far as I know, there should be editors responsible for reviewing these novel manuscripts. Why don't you submit the manuscripts to them?"

Editorial review is an extremely hard job. On the surface, it is just about looking at the manuscripts and giving opinions, but if you discover a potential writer, you will be able to take off right away.

But in reality, I just look at a pile of unsightly manuscripts all day long. Not only is the writing style childish and the plots crazy, but even the sentences are impossible to read smoothly.

But there is no way. Money is hard to earn and Ole-gei is hard to eat. They still have to swallow these spiritual Ole-gei with tears, and then hope to pan for gold in the cesspool day after day.

As a result, when I touched it, it turned out to be an Ollie Gei with a gold border.

"No, that won't do. Those people won't show mercy to my baby."

Zaimokuza said it as a matter of course, leaving everyone present speechless.

So, is it an established fact that it is criticized for being poorly written?

"But I think Yukinoshita will be even less merciful, right?"

Hikigaya told Zaimokuza the cruel truth.

"R-Really..." Zaimokuza felt sad when he thought of Yukinoshita's aura just now.

Mr. Hiratsuka, look at what you have done!

"Arnold... I have a question."

Yui poked half of her head out from behind Yukinoshita and asked curiously.

"I remember that the three-school joint entrance exam will be held the day after tomorrow. How come you still have time to write a novel? Do you have good grades?"

Please believe that kind and gentle Yui was not deliberately mocking the other party. She was just raising the doubts that a curious baby of more than 200 months old should have.

"Haha, actually my grades are pretty good..."

"Zaimokuza, you were only in the lower middle level last semester, right?"

Hikigaya directly undermined Zaimokuza. If the middle and lower levels are still considered okay, then what does his ranking in the top three in Chinese mean?

Is that awesome?

"No, I don't think that's important..."

Zaimokuza expressed his opinion weakly.

"Well, it's really not important. Anyway, your manuscript is quite long and we need time to read it. How about I give you a reply at this time tomorrow?"

Yukinoshita spoke.

The other party is not asking you to improve your performance within two days, so you only need to complete the commission.

"Before that, let's sort it out first. We should pay more attention to our manuscripts, okay?"

Su Qing was the first to bend down and pick up the manuscripts on the ground. Fortunately, these manuscripts were not stepped on or damaged by anyone.

"Sorry, I did number the pages though, so you don't have to worry. I can pick them up myself."

"Let's pick them up together. I'll just take over your commission. It's okay."

"Woo woo woo, great man!"

In this way, Su Qing was once again given a good guy card. It is worth mentioning that they were all men.

……

Su Qing's house, after dinner.

"What are you looking at?"

A hint of doubt flashed across Shiina's beautiful eyes. These things didn't look like extracurricular teaching materials. Although she couldn't understand them, it was not because they were too difficult to understand, but because she simply couldn't understand what was written on these papers.

"Well... it's a light novel manuscript that someone else is submitting for a newcomer award, and they asked our club to take a look at it."

"Light novel manuscript?"

"Ah."

Shiina nodded. She didn't know much about this aspect, and her knowledge of light novels was only from bits and pieces of information heard by others.

"By the way, did you join the literature club?"

Shiina then remembered that she didn't know what club the other party joined.

"No, it's the Service Department." Su Qing's scalp went numb when he looked at the manuscript.

"Servant, Servants Department?!"

Shiina's voice suddenly became louder because of surprise. She looked at Su Qing worriedly. How come she had never heard of this club? Could it be that the other party was deceived by someone?

"Don't worry, it's not some improper club, and it was recommended to me by our teacher."

After Su Qing explained the content of the service club's activities to Shiina and repeatedly assured her that they would definitely not do anything strange, Shiina's anxious heart was finally put at ease.

"Are you really just completing someone else's commission?"

"Of course, you saw it too, didn't you?"

Su Qing waved the manuscript of the novel in his hand and smiled helplessly.

"Well, okay," Shiina nodded. In fact, she felt relieved when she heard that the head of the Service Club was that Yukinoshita.

"But the three-school joint entrance exam will be held the day after tomorrow. Is it really okay if I don't review now?"

Even though he knew that Su Qing had learned a year's worth of knowledge in advance like himself, the other party had just transferred from the mainland after all, and might not be able to adapt to the changes in the focus and question types in many subjects.

[I don’t want to see Su Qing feeling down because of a bad test, but still putting on a forced smile to go out with me]

[If that's the case, it's better not to go]

Mahiru muttered to herself.

"Don't worry, Mr. Big Devil is super strong~"

Su Qing really had no idea what to do with this light novel manuscript with so many flaws. After carefully circling some strange grammatical errors and unreasonable plots, Su Qing chose to start directly, lying on the sofa and starting to joke with Shiina.

"……Yeah?"

There was a hint of helplessness in Shiina's eyes.

"What if Mr. Big Devil does poorly on the test?"

"I will obey the orders of the angel."

"That's what you said. I'm going to ask you to do something super excessive."

"for example?"

"Like asking you to finish eating some new dishes I developed."

After thinking for a while, the angel felt that there was no greater torture in the world than this, and said in a terrible tone.

"I've talked about the benefits, but what about the disadvantages?"

"??!!"

Soon, Su Qing seemed to have thought of something interesting. He sat up straight, with a smile on his face and a playful tone.

"Well, if I do well in the exam, what reward will the Angel give to the Great Devil~"

“Why is there a reward?”

"Just like angels and demons, there must be rewards for punishments, right?"

Su Qing made a rigorous analogy and argument.

Shiina looked at Su Qing helplessly, but soon she showed a devilish smile. She opened her red lips slightly, her voice was charming, but the content of her words was thought-provoking.

"Then the reward will be decided by Mr. Big Devil~"

……